Dough Maker (14 year old freestyle Please Check It Out and comment)

Verse 1-dice rolling, champagne and grapes opening/
got the best taste so get a cup and pour some more/
I rep c-notes, not fifties/
Im rich like richie/
just like biggie/ I love the dough/
call me doe boy/
I'm making money left and right i don't have no choice/
spinning wheels flaming like hot wheels/
money make the world go round/
but I make it tilt on it's axis/
high class flying back and forth/
thru state to state/
ice cubes your cold because I'm the nigga you love to hate/

chorus it's so much money in the air
and i can't get away because you got me addicted so
come here Mr. Davis*

Verse 2- I-hop all over ya make you flat like pancakes/
giving radios blisters I bust up tapes/
I'm done now sing the chorus I'm a bake-er I bake cakes not dough
chorus*

okay

******cheaaaaaa******


lol
not bad....not bad i see u been practice~n....dats wassup

yeah I gata give it to you lil dude this is a nice piece its always much better when you bring it from the heart you get mad props on this tho keep it up.