I'd appreciate some support brothers, really need help actually haha.
Well, I wrote my first rhyme tonite ...
and although it wasnt what i expected
it still wasnt tight
i rework it and fill it with my experience
i know i got the perseverence
but my hands are curling into fists
i just realized the last 6 hours
they brought me to this
and my eyes are getting sore
my mind is aching and my soul
a toll is being taken
will i give up or be a prisoner,
lyrically forsaken?
i got a thirst for sleep,
but the hunger for fame is burning too deep!
no i won't stop, i can't give up!
if im gonna stay to write more rhymes,
im at least gonna need some coffee in this cup!
Haha, that really is the first one i have written, but seriously it is SO bad!!
how do i do it?
Well, I wrote my first rhyme tonite ...
and although it wasnt what i expected
it still wasnt tight
i rework it and fill it with my experience
i know i got the perseverence
but my hands are curling into fists
i just realized the last 6 hours
they brought me to this
and my eyes are getting sore
my mind is aching and my soul
a toll is being taken
will i give up or be a prisoner,
lyrically forsaken?
i got a thirst for sleep,
but the hunger for fame is burning too deep!
no i won't stop, i can't give up!
if im gonna stay to write more rhymes,
im at least gonna need some coffee in this cup!
Haha, that really is the first one i have written, but seriously it is SO bad!!
how do i do it?