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    UnCoMmOn23
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    Post by UnCoMmOn23 Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:06 pm

    They call me Un , ima bit uncommon
    fucka tha drama get quick this brain Trauma
    The lyrical anti-chris.t I dominate in hells throne
    Killing like a slow acting cancer transmitted from cell phones
    Man I dont know a Barber or a rapper that could fade me
    peoples faces after my verse brings new meaning to the phrase brain freeze
    Listen , I'm not overly gased pff just stating the facts
    I got my rhymes all stocked up like dow jones and nasdaq
    Infact, scratch that
    I battle wack MCs and lose just to raise the stakes and win my cash back
    Yes the black demon .. wisk you off to subconscience like day dreamin'
    Texts tear your cerebal cortex to disable your rythym of breathin'
    I'm quick to come and sna.tch the throne rapper blow like saxophones
    I Incinerate Rappers and theyre rhymes all thats left is ash and bones

    Shit i aint even spit my double meanings
    Meanin this next bit is ill as shit, probably be missed by most your eyes
    only look average to average guys

    When I spit this gift un rap(unwrap) this shit cats in trouble
    I slow down everyones flow like it was sent through a funnel
    MCs couldnt rip shit if they tugged at used toilet paper
    I eliminate your written words with a spoken eraser
    Wonderin about my style I kill the cat thats curious
    Critics cant be serious if my name isnt in the top 3 lyricists
    I go right(write) when nothing is left get it? Youre dreaming
    Dont take the verses for face value theyre toppled with double meanings
    Cats is not spittin dehydrated felines spillin writtens
    Look up the words lyrical and genuis .. yes.. I'm the spitting image
    While I spit this image pours pictures into your dome to test your limits
    I dont baby sit rookies and infants man I'm done with kiddin'
    Now hip hop is all fitted Hats and long shirts
    Rappers get stomped like rockin' a game tee at a G unit concert
    Oh yeah the kids hot ,just check the fire in his eyes
    Cinder singes the fingers and burn rappers alive
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    $Pandemik$-$Epidemikk$
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    Post by $Pandemik$-$Epidemikk$ Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:53 am

    i know u
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    Squabbles
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    Post by Squabbles Fri Dec 11, 2009 5:12 am

    not bad. clean it up a bit. work on the flow and some of the rhymes. some good multis in there that made the piece

    'I'm quick to come and sna.tch the throne rapper blow like saxophones
    I Incinerate Rappers and theyre rhymes all thats left is ash and bones '

    -that was preatty nice
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    UnCoMmOn23
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    Post by UnCoMmOn23 Tue Dec 22, 2009 6:08 pm

    Do you now?

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