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    Philosophy 3 R's_ story i wrote tell me what u think

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    Philosophy 3 R's_ story i wrote tell me what u think Empty Philosophy 3 R's_ story i wrote tell me what u think

    Post by Philosophy Tue Sep 29, 2009 9:39 am

    He said to relieve stress he'd end up cutting himself
    since suffering a sudden loss he just wasn't himself
    so it was off to the alter where he offered and knelt
    looking for his almighty god who could offer some help

    but he never found him it was obvious he
    didn't want the mother of the daughter to be
    she was now a vivd memory he always thought of her
    but she passed from the transition from a woman to a mother

    he named his seed remorse cause thats was he sensed
    thats what he felt and cried every night every since
    he had to pause in this world of scars we all faced with these 3 R's

    Remorse regret and resentment

    She said her soul was drained as her problems started to swarm
    she was the sun everyday but never felt any warmth
    with a little spark in her heart and a Quaron in her Palm
    An umbrella in the other trying to weather the storm

    She said her life was so cruel, so cruel and uncaring
    wiped the tears from her eyes and smeared her Mascara
    Never trusted another man that was her mass terror
    her pain was as easy to read as Terra

    She was beat she was bruised she was mentally confused
    almost took her own life felt she had nothing to lose
    he's beat her to a pulp there was nothing she could do
    One day she had enough and went and bought her a tool

    And that same day she blew him to smithereens
    down the pipe went her life and most of her dreams
    and she had to pause in this world of scars
    we all faced with these 3 R's

    Remorse regret and resentment

    He wish he could lose life found it hard to take
    Using any and every drug to get far from it
    popping pills, smoking crack, sippin arsenic
    i know it sounds bad but this is just the start of it

    just the start of shit like a starters kit
    in his eyes there was nothing harder than,

    seeing your own mother die from the drugs you have her
    despair in his mouth a flavor which he savored
    in the house of sorrow and regret was his neighbor
    always thought things would be greater later

    He even missed out on her dirge out of honor you see
    there was no way he could view her corps honorably
    he was in pain obviously it was so evident even the blind could see
    he had to pause in this world of scars we all faced with these 3 R's

    Remorse regret and resentment

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