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    Trust*
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    Wrote this for a girl i like

    Post by Trust* on Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:38 am

    Look, i know that there's no future
    But without you my life is a Blur
    Every moment without you kills me inside
    I just don't wanna be pushed aside
    When i said i didn't love you, i lied
    Its just that every moment without you i die inside
    sometimes i wonder if you like him or just don't like me?
    How beautiful can you be, is it him or is it me?X2

    Me without you is like
    A Trainer without laces
    A geek without braces
    A sentence without spaces

    Me without you is like
    A book without chapters
    A camera without captures
    A clown that doesn't start laughters

    Me without you is like
    A dog without fur
    A cat that doesn't pur
    A cold without a cure

    Me without you isn't me to be sure...
    So that's why i wrote this rap for ya'll

    From the first time I met you I felt the connection
    and every second since then's been nothing short of perfection
    I adore every section that comprises you
    it's like you're an angel just disguised as you
    mesmerized every time that I can view
    your undeniable kindness that shines out from inside of you
    my eyes stay glued with you chance of moving
    when they glance at your enchanting beauty
    you've got a smile so soothing and a sweetness like peaches
    that reaches deep in my soul as my feeling increases
    i'll try to mend all the pieces of a heart been mistreated
    i'm not like the others the past won't be repeated
    I want to erase all the bad, and replace it with good
    help you escape from the pain, make you feel like you should
    cause I could never hurt a person so perfect
    you deserve the world any less isnt worth it

    Look, i know that there's no future
    But without you my life is a Blur
    Every moment without you kills me inside
    I just don't wanna be pushed aside
    When i said i didn't love you, i lied
    Its just that every moment without you i die inside
    sometimes i wonder if you like him or just don't like me?
    How beautiful can you be, is it him or is it me,is it him or is it me,is it him or is it me?
    It's not him, its not she
    it's just you and me.

    How is it? Feedback please! im new!
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    MATTA
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    Re: Wrote this for a girl i like

    Post by MATTA on Fri Feb 08, 2013 9:54 pm

    say "a cant that cant pur" doesnt is too long.

    Wayne-A-Ferd
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    Re: Wrote this for a girl i like

    Post by Wayne-A-Ferd on Mon May 06, 2013 12:57 am

    Check this out.

    Its me and you, as my love for you could grow,
    I just want you in my arms baby girl,
    Tonight is the night, i wanna hold you lil mama, hold you just right,
    Your lips, your eyes how i feel inside, couldnt be mistaken, i love you more then i love bacon.
    Just your touch is what i crave, i want to see you everyday, and kiss your pretty face, as long as our hearts dont fade away, id still love you right or wrong, granny panites or a thong, id hit it and never quit it cause this is a stupid song. Dunno how it happend, i suppose we started rappin, and if you dont like it, then suck on these nuts..

    hahaha i lost it.. no beat sucks

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    Re: Wrote this for a girl i like

    Post by The Rave on Mon May 13, 2013 6:18 am

    Cool shit bro.

    salmonzilla213
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    Re: Wrote this for a girl i like

    Post by salmonzilla213 on Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:12 pm

    i like it, keep up the good work man

    wiskerz
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    Re: Wrote this for a girl i like

    Post by wiskerz on Tue Feb 24, 2015 9:51 pm

    For you baby I'd walk miles
    To see them big Brown eyes n that breath taking smile
    Love grows every day even tho we've been apart for a while
    You light up my heart like the jewel of the Nile
    If you were in jail I'd bake you a cake with a file
    I'd risk my life for you to be free
    Bonnie n Clyde
    On a world wide
    Crime spree
    Me your king you my queen
    Together we make an unbeatable team
    You love so sweet it must be a dream
    Your loves got me hooked I feel like a fiend
    Chasing the Dragon
    To my friends I'm bragging
    Cuz I caught the most precious fish in the sea
    Got them all wishing they was me
    Cuz your the real deal not fake like plastic
    You weren't lying when you said love feels fantastic
    I now kno what I feel
    This love I can no longer mask it
    If I lost you it would be tragic
    My life would stop like traffic
    To get you back I'd do more backflips then gymnastics
    Cuz it's bout time I admit that I'm an Anna addict
    So just remeba
    You my lady n I'm your fella
    Hope this made you feel a lil betta
    Love you baby girl
    Chow Bella

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    Re: Wrote this for a girl i like

    Post by wiskerz on Tue Feb 24, 2015 9:52 pm

    Ciao*

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    Re: Wrote this for a girl i like

    Post by Wayne-A-Ferd on Thu Feb 26, 2015 11:31 pm

    Limitless and full of bliss, to emptiness and always pissed. My smiles in denial, my heart it aches so sore. I should of prepared for what was coming, but refused to open that door. So now I sit here, lonely as I wait. For the day you apologize, but by then it won't feel so great. Because a cluster fuck I am, emotions run so deep, I cherished every feeling, every moment, every beat. To fall asleep, is the newest challenge. I lay back and close my eyes, but by you I am surrounded. Memory's of ecstacy, nights I had you next to me. Live only as a memory, please can there be a remedy? To hearts so broke and Spiritually, no one can fix this only me, I stand before you a better me, with walls so tall they'll never be, dropped so low that you can see, the weaknesses I have hidden the, god damn fucking shit in me, now back up off me before there's a killing spree! I don't give a fuck you created me, a mother fucking monster to the "T", I sat down a wrote this surprisingly. My feelings dropped emotionally, I couldn't finish it feel please free, criticism openly.
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    Re: Wrote this for a girl i like

    Post by UnculJulio90300060 on Tue Apr 14, 2015 5:41 pm

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    In the back seat she sucked me off
    Q.T. got turned on and her pants came off
    She ridin dick when Jessica
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    Was my numb that's when she texted her
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