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Multi Cypher

E-Klypse: Lyrikal Assassin; Posts : 55
Join date : 2008-03-09
Age : 38
Location : British Columbia, Canada

Post n°1

Multi Cypher

by E-Klypse Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:03 pm

OK so here's your famous multi cypher. I will start it off then leave a multi for the next person

Rockin Boxin Pants
hold~the~mic fag I'm "rockin boxin' pants"//
ya kno wuss iight, bag 'em shit I'm "talkin' glocs~n~gats//
throwin rocks at Jakkz', he raggin like dat fat bitch, who "popped that blockin ass?"//
kid I'm walkin unlock the can~a~RAID, Doc it's the man of "rage"
if you think it's awkward **cocks the gloc~n~shot his ass**

hmmm next multi

Ciggarette Smoke

Matt The Ripper

Matt The Ripper: Rookie; Posts : 26
Join date : 2008-03-23
Age : 39
Location : British Columbia, Canada

Post n°2

Re: Multi Cypher

by Matt The Ripper Mon Mar 31, 2008 2:02 am

I inhaled 1 of those prime-time cigarette's 'n I was sicker than I ever get!
I'll never let you think about that forever yet!
I'm not a gamblin' man, I never bet! So I never lose!
I never let myself-let myself down! You'll never see myself frown!
That's a lie from a clown, but i'm anti-suicide, so i'll never let myself drown!
I, myself, a noun, 'n now announce that I pronounce myself an ounce of
"medicinal"-marijuana.. to keep myself sane for now, 'n for later!
For haters without lives, this is for you! My shit is dangerous, but
more safer! It's another way for you to pay for your sins!
It's innocent in a sense, 'n in another, it's intensely violent!
It doesn't make sense to be silent! So I say speak yr. mind 'n BE violent...

...or maybe I just need another cigarette!

Next multi:

"I'm not high enough..."

Guest: Guest

Post n°3

Re: Multi Cypher

by Guest Mon Mar 31, 2008 9:49 am

Thot you might some new shit in you, E...This been' played already, hit this up with another one.

C'mon. cyclops

cyclops

Chrispy: Global Moderator; Posts : 30
Join date : 2008-03-25
Age : 31
Location : Long Island, New York

Post n°4

Re: Multi Cypher

by Chrispy Mon Mar 31, 2008 10:55 am

Matt I don't thin kyou understand the meaning of a multi cypher. You supposed to carry out the rhyme "ciggarette smoke" till the very end of your drop. I'm not even sure if you used the multi provided... scratch

scratch

Matt The Ripper

Matt The Ripper: Rookie; Posts : 26
Join date : 2008-03-23
Age : 39
Location : British Columbia, Canada

Post n°5

Re: Multi Cypher

by Matt The Ripper Mon Mar 31, 2008 4:53 pm

lol. Probably.

Fail.

Hahaha... oh well... i'll give that to someone else, then...

Cigarrete Smoke

poetikassasin: Fresh Meat; Posts : 15
Join date : 2008-07-08
Age : 39
Location : harlem

Post n°6

Re: Multi Cypher

by poetikassasin Tue Jul 08, 2008 3:36 pm

i been-the-best-yo send ya sets i live-to-wrecc-hoes//
mix-the-mets-for ig-nor-ant-folk//
shao's beligerant-grown, simple-yet-known//
quicc-to-fade-blokes blaze makes these fakes choke like cigarrete smoke//

naughty by nature-next multi

Akkadian: Fresh Meat; Posts : 11
Join date : 2008-07-17

Post n°7

Re: Multi Cypher

by Akkadian Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:34 am

i come from a land were they be haughty, my culture.
They thinking they all that, his paints taught, he high weight, sure.
I can bust out flowing, free thought thee spry spate, were
you there? that line before? pick up the drops of words that flowed like water, brought she, fly date, sir
you're done now serve us, That juice I just let go, you think you taught me?! sigh, wait hur.
punk really think you all that top me, my girl, with your top hat, I'll take you on the wrestling mat, you brat make sure, you prepared to find out: I'm naughty by nature

grass in glass-next multi

poetikassasin: Fresh Meat; Posts : 15
Join date : 2008-07-08
Age : 39
Location : harlem

Post n°8

Re: Multi Cypher

by poetikassasin Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:52 pm

Akkadian wrote:i come from a land were they be haughty, my culture.
They thinking they all that, his paints taught, he high weight, sure.
I can bust out flowing, free thought thee spry spate, were
you there? that line before? pick up the drops of words that flowed like water, brought she, fly date, sir
you're done now serve us, That juice I just let go, you think you taught me?! sigh, wait hur.
punk really think you all that top me, my girl, with your top hat, I'll take you on the wrestling mat, you brat make sure, you prepared to find out: I'm naughty by nature

grass in glass-next multi

where are your multies???

poetikassasin: Fresh Meat; Posts : 15
Join date : 2008-07-08
Age : 39
Location : harlem

Post n°9

Re: Multi Cypher

by poetikassasin Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:58 pm

anyway.....grass in glass

look,

ask-these-cats whose best n the say assas-is-bacc//
n hes attacc-ing-traccs callem an asthma-blast//
he ill and toting magnum-frags, can you fathom-that//
he's not ya average-cat n he leaves herbs bottled like grass-in-glass//

next multi
commandeer-it-wit-a-villainous-strut

Kyree: Fresh Meat; Posts : 1
Join date : 2008-07-18

Post n°10

Re: Multi Cypher

by Kyree Fri Jul 18, 2008 9:25 am

Addicted to the beat like I was addicted to crack

Kyree is back wit this lyrical batch

Of fresh baked lyrics to battle the wack

This shit is verbal payback

Vicous nouns and terrifying abverbs

And these angry adjectives kill all these wack herbs

Dont think your ill

Just cause you O.D. on pills

Real skills like mine are the ones that get you to Beverly Hills

And Kyree kills with this lyrical 9mm which pierces the skin

You cant fight back so you gotta take it on the chin

Cause this situation is a win-win for me

You just came up short like Robert E. Lee

And na bitch this aint no Civil War

Im responsible for this rap that is hardcore

I explore upon your wackness like I was Lewis & Clark

Beatin your ass is like a walk in the park

Writtin up on you like Jesus in the Gospel of Mark

Ima snap ya neck for every stupid remark you make

God created lyrical flow on the seventh day

And gave it me in a similar way

Kyree is the name Im the beast

You must feed me rappers or feed me the beats

Cause I am something that cannot be beat

Salvage the beast or be salvaged by

The illest rapper whos odds he defys

poetikassasin: Fresh Meat; Posts : 15
Join date : 2008-07-08
Age : 39
Location : harlem

Post n°11

Re: Multi Cypher

by poetikassasin Fri Jul 18, 2008 3:26 pm

you were supposed to some off the next multi (commandeer-it-wit-a-villanous-strut)

Kyree wrote:Addicted to the beat like I was addicted to crack

Kyree is back wit this lyrical batch

Of fresh baked lyrics to battle the wack

This shit is verbal payback

Vicous nouns and terrifying abverbs

And these angry adjectives kill all these wack herbs

Dont think your ill

Just cause you O.D. on pills

Real skills like mine are the ones that get you to Beverly Hills

And Kyree kills with this lyrical 9mm which pierces the skin

You cant fight back so you gotta take it on the chin

Cause this situation is a win-win for me

You just came up short like Robert E. Lee

And na bitch this aint no Civil War

Im responsible for this rap that is hardcore

I explore upon your wackness like I was Lewis & Clark

Beatin your ass is like a walk in the park

Writtin up on you like Jesus in the Gospel of Mark

Ima snap ya neck for every stupid remark you make

God created lyrical flow on the seventh day

And gave it me in a similar way

Kyree is the name Im the beast

You must feed me rappers or feed me the beats

Cause I am something that cannot be beat

Salvage the beast or be salvaged by

The illest rapper whos odds he defys

Akkadian: Fresh Meat; Posts : 11
Join date : 2008-07-17

Post n°12

Re: Multi Cypher

by Akkadian Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:54 pm

poetikassasin wrote:where are your multies???

my multies are at the end of each of my lines

naughty by nature
...haughty my culture
...taught, he high weight, sure.
...brought she, fly date, sir
...naughty by nature

I don't see where you used grass-in-glass in your verse though :\

poetikassasin wrote:
look,

ask-these-cats whose best n the say assas-is-bacc//
n hes attacc-ing-traccs callem an asthma-blast//
he ill and toting magnum-frags, can you fathom-that//
he's not ya average-cat n he leaves herbs bottled like grass-in-glass//

did the dashes represent the words that were your multies? you didnt rhyme them so maybe you were going for words with either slant rhyme or the same syllable but how did that work out since you wrote "attac-ing-traccs" I'm sorry i missed it Neutral

Neutral

also if you would'nt quote such large chunks of text just to write one sentence (especially when the text was the last post) it would make the page easier to load and give your critique more cerdibility :-P just simply use an up arrow like )"^" or write, "the post above" or "posters name", if it isn't clear what you are talking about.

for those who don't know about multies:

What are multies?
Multi is short for “multi-syllable rhyme.” Multies are phrases in which more than one syllable rhymes. Multies can be double, triple, quadruple (etc…) rhymes.

Normal rhyme: cat / hat
Multi rhyme: my cat / hi-hat
Or a longer multi: bit my cat / hit the hi-hat

Southern rapper Ludacris loves featuring multies in his verses. Luda has a trademark delivery, in which he slows down and emphasizes the end of each line. This delivery works well when he slips in some clever multies.

I’m never going nowhere, so don’t try me,
my music sticks in fans’ veins like an I.V.

In the example from the track Number One Spot, Luadacris creates a multi with “try me” and “I.V.” He could have just rhymed “me” with “V.”, but by rhyming with the additional syllables (try with I) it becomes a multi.

http://www.flocabulary.com/multies.html

poetikassasin: Fresh Meat; Posts : 15
Join date : 2008-07-08
Age : 39
Location : harlem

Post n°13

Re: Multi Cypher

by poetikassasin Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:34 pm

this guy above me

ha my bad about the whole quote thing lol im not too good with the internet forum thing lol

i guess i can kinda see where ur multies are lol its really hard to tell when you cant hear the person actualy say the verse ya know?

yea the dashes were my multies

been-the-best-yo = cig-ar-rette-smoke
live-to-wrecc-hoe = cig-ar-rette-moke
mix-the-mets-for = cig-ar-rette-smoke
ig-nor-ant-folk = cig-ar-rette-smoke(slightly slanted)
beligerant-grown = cigarette smoke(slanted but still rhymes)
simple-yet-known = cigarr-ette-smoke
quicc-to-fade-blokes = slanted
cigarette smoke= cigarette smoke

get it?

Akkadian: Fresh Meat; Posts : 11
Join date : 2008-07-17

Post n°14

Re: Multi Cypher

by Akkadian Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:59 pm

... those aren't rhymes. A slant rhyme (so we can use the term properly here) is a rhyme in which either the vowels or the consonants of stressed syllables are identical, as in eyes, light; years, yours.

your rhymes contain some slanted rhymes but they do not follow the standard concepts of multies. although using a slanted rhyme can be a poets alteration of the "norm" to give strength to his writing your multies. The post I quoted and commented on earlier, and the one you are reffeering to here both are not "proper"

hope this helps your understanding and brings your rhymes to a new level!

poetikassasin: Fresh Meat; Posts : 15
Join date : 2008-07-08
Age : 39
Location : harlem

Post n°15

Re: Multi Cypher

by poetikassasin Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:33 pm

akkadian.....i know what a slanted rhyme is... i also know what a multi is

please do not patronize me

im not trying to be proper by any means....and the few bars i posted had multies in the EMCEE way.

there is a difference in the definitions of multies and slanted rhymes when speaking in the emcee sense and the literary sense...

much respect

its about the art

Shot1: Fresh Meat; Posts : 7
Join date : 2008-09-05

Post n°16

Re: Multi Cypher

by Shot1 Fri Sep 05, 2008 5:46 am

uh next topic:

i wanna make it clear that a multie may be slanted
im gonna use a lot of them so it dont make me frantic
we dont need the whole lowdown on the technique from flocabulary
its a good source, but its not gonna reck me and my vocabulary

i cant be screwed rhymin

next multie:
fade away fast

CRACK ATTACK: Fresh Meat; Posts : 9
Join date : 2008-11-19
Age : 32
Location : South-Africa Western Cape

Post n°17

Re: Multi Cypher

by CRACK ATTACK Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:32 am

yo! u choke on da flow like a hoe, inhaling ciggarette smoke, ur site is gross u got a big nose, keep ur legs closed, u need a breathmint for refreshment, ur vagina is infected, u cough up cancer and TB bitch thers no way u could please me, just leave me and go smoke anotha ciggee, ur a dirty slut, fuck poeple for drugs, thats the reason y ur pussy infested with bugs, so dnt push me and dnt try ya luck, bitch u smoke ciggaretts the way i smoke blunts

CRACK ATTACK: Fresh Meat; Posts : 9
Join date : 2008-11-19
Age : 32
Location : South-Africa Western Cape

Post n°18

Re: Multi Cypher

by CRACK ATTACK Thu Nov 20, 2008 3:35 am

CRACK ATTACK wrote:yo! u choke on da flow like a hoe, inhaling ciggarette smoke, ur site is gross u got a big nose, keep ur legs closed, u need a breathmint for refreshment, ur vagina is infected, u cough up cancer and TB bitch thers no way u could please me, just leave me and go smoke anotha ciggee, ur a dirty slut, fuck poeple for drugs, thats the reason y ur pussy infested with bugs, so dnt push me and dnt try ya luck, bitch u smoke ciggaretts the way i smoke blunts

CRACK ATTACK: Fresh Meat; Posts : 9
Join date : 2008-11-19
Age : 32
Location : South-Africa Western Cape

Post n°19

ciggarette smoke

by CRACK ATTACK Thu Nov 20, 2008 3:39 am

CRACK ATTACK wrote:yo! u choke on da flow like a hoe, inhaling ciggarette smoke, ur site is gross u got a big nose, keep ur legs closed, u need a breathmint for refreshment, ur vagina is infected, u cough up cancer and TB bitch thers no way u could please me, just leave me and go smoke anotha ciggee, ur a dirty slut, fuck poeple for drugs, thats the reason y ur pussy infested with bugs, so dnt push me and dnt try ya luck, bitch u smoke ciggaretts the way i smoke blunts

rondizz: Fresh Meat; Posts : 3
Join date : 2008-12-11

Post n°20

Re: Multi Cypher

by rondizz Thu Dec 11, 2008 1:06 pm

ima killa like charles masnon
got hydraulics so the cars dancin

Ness: Fresh Meat; Posts : 2
Join date : 2009-01-08

Post n°21

Re: Multi Cypher

by Ness Thu Jan 08, 2009 9:19 pm

i give you hell take flmaes to da max
killing these wack MCs like lyrical anthrax
please dont test, i aint need to reply
put yah to rest wacth these tricks just die
and they mamas cry, blastin shots on these haters
my rhymes as many as daily prayers
so dont judge me, im 14 yah can never touch me
started out young but im known to blast MCs
burning like a flmaethrower yall cant go against me
so dont hate, ima make ur name, late great
so stfu for your names sake
cause im reap what i sow
spitting my rhymes slowly killin on the lowly while being heard these bitches all noe me

Tro: Fresh Meat; Posts : 3
Join date : 2009-01-09
Age : 33
Location : Kingston, Jamaica

Post n°22

Re: Multi Cypher

by Tro Mon Jan 12, 2009 2:23 pm

Understanding is the way we ought live in life
Not withstanding the ways we want to live this life
No need to brandish the things we acquire
Or be attracted to things we don't require
We need to just chill
Believe, n' thus build
The skills that we need to heave us uphill
It's not that easy I agree, but still
If we don't take that step- someone else with guts will...

Ppickles: Intermediate Member; Posts : 136
Join date : 2009-05-07
Age : 31
Location : NorthWest

Post n°23

Re: Multi Cypher

by Ppickles Sun May 10, 2009 4:11 pm

yo tro little do you know but i turned you sister into a fucking hoe she was walking down the street around 3:30 i whistled at her like i was a birdy she looked at me and said whats up and i told her shes gunna take it in the butt she turned all red but never said no so i bent her over and said lets go took her to your house got that brian o hell yes but i forgot to say sorry about the bloddy mess i never ment to pound her that hard but in your bed it was so fun!

InFamous: Rookie; Posts : 51
Join date : 2009-05-11

Post n°24

Re: Multi Cypher

by InFamous Mon May 11, 2009 7:06 am

It was a mess huh like the time i came on yo bitches breasts it was the best she said I am better then the rest she loved to lick my chest and dickeven my shit
Sold her drugs got her on the crack pipe nigger whats the hype...
On the mic i rap faster the pussy atracts dikes
Time to rape yo mama oh shit syk

Ppickles: Intermediate Member; Posts : 136
Join date : 2009-05-07
Age : 31
Location : NorthWest

Post n°25

Re: Multi Cypher

by Ppickles Sun Sep 13, 2009 11:00 pm

infamous huh ya for what taking a dick deep into the butt

you think you sly you think you fast
but i slow you down like that cali grass
and fuck you up like a brick of hash
cut you with a razor your face like SLASH
still your money why doing the monstermash
get shot up for touching my stash
you should know better then to get in between a man and his cash

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