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    Multi Cypher

    Post by E-Klypse on Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:03 pm

    OK so here's your famous multi cypher. I will start it off then leave a multi for the next person

    Rockin Boxin Pants
    hold~the~mic fag I'm "rockin boxin' pants"//
    ya kno wuss iight, bag 'em shit I'm "talkin' glocs~n~gats//
    throwin rocks at Jakkz', he raggin like dat fat bitch, who "popped that blockin ass?"//
    kid I'm walkin unlock the can~a~RAID, Doc it's the man of "rage"
    if you think it's awkward **cocks the gloc~n~shot his ass**

    hmmm next multi

    Ciggarette Smoke


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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Matt The Ripper on Mon Mar 31, 2008 2:02 am

    I inhaled 1 of those prime-time cigarette's 'n I was sicker than I ever get!
    I'll never let you think about that forever yet!
    I'm not a gamblin' man, I never bet! So I never lose!
    I never let myself-let myself down! You'll never see myself frown!
    That's a lie from a clown, but i'm anti-suicide, so i'll never let myself drown!
    I, myself, a noun, 'n now announce that I pronounce myself an ounce of
    "medicinal"-marijuana.. to keep myself sane for now, 'n for later!
    For haters without lives, this is for you! My shit is dangerous, but
    more safer! It's another way for you to pay for your sins!
    It's innocent in a sense, 'n in another, it's intensely violent!
    It doesn't make sense to be silent! So I say speak yr. mind 'n BE violent...

    ...or maybe I just need another cigarette!

    Next multi:

    "I'm not high enough..."

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Guest on Mon Mar 31, 2008 9:49 am

    Thot you might some new shit in you, E...This been' played already, hit this up with another one.

    C'mon. cyclops

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Chrispy on Mon Mar 31, 2008 10:55 am

    Matt I don't thin kyou understand the meaning of a multi cypher. You supposed to carry out the rhyme "ciggarette smoke" till the very end of your drop. I'm not even sure if you used the multi provided... scratch
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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Matt The Ripper on Mon Mar 31, 2008 4:53 pm

    lol. Probably.

    Fail.

    Hahaha... oh well... i'll give that to someone else, then...

    Cigarrete Smoke
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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by poetikassasin on Tue Jul 08, 2008 3:36 pm

    i been-the-best-yo send ya sets i live-to-wrecc-hoes//
    mix-the-mets-for ig-nor-ant-folk//
    shao's beligerant-grown, simple-yet-known//
    quicc-to-fade-blokes blaze makes these fakes choke like cigarrete smoke//


    naughty by nature-next multi

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Akkadian on Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:34 am

    i come from a land were they be haughty, my culture.
    They thinking they all that, his paints taught, he high weight, sure.
    I can bust out flowing, free thought thee spry spate, were
    you there? that line before? pick up the drops of words that flowed like water, brought she, fly date, sir
    you're done now serve us, That juice I just let go, you think you taught me?! sigh, wait hur.
    punk really think you all that top me, my girl, with your top hat, I'll take you on the wrestling mat, you brat make sure, you prepared to find out: I'm naughty by nature

    grass in glass-next multi
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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by poetikassasin on Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:52 pm

    Akkadian wrote:i come from a land were they be haughty, my culture.
    They thinking they all that, his paints taught, he high weight, sure.
    I can bust out flowing, free thought thee spry spate, were
    you there? that line before? pick up the drops of words that flowed like water, brought she, fly date, sir
    you're done now serve us, That juice I just let go, you think you taught me?! sigh, wait hur.
    punk really think you all that top me, my girl, with your top hat, I'll take you on the wrestling mat, you brat make sure, you prepared to find out: I'm naughty by nature

    grass in glass-next multi


    where are your multies???
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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by poetikassasin on Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:58 pm

    anyway.....grass in glass

    look,

    ask-these-cats whose best n the say assas-is-bacc//
    n hes attacc-ing-traccs callem an asthma-blast//
    he ill and toting magnum-frags, can you fathom-that//
    he's not ya average-cat n he leaves herbs bottled like grass-in-glass//



    next multi
    commandeer-it-wit-a-villainous-strut

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Kyree on Fri Jul 18, 2008 9:25 am

    Addicted to the beat like I was addicted to crack

    Kyree is back wit this lyrical batch

    Of fresh baked lyrics to battle the wack

    This shit is verbal payback

    Vicous nouns and terrifying abverbs

    And these angry adjectives kill all these wack herbs

    Dont think your ill

    Just cause you O.D. on pills

    Real skills like mine are the ones that get you to Beverly Hills

    And Kyree kills with this lyrical 9mm which pierces the skin

    You cant fight back so you gotta take it on the chin

    Cause this situation is a win-win for me

    You just came up short like Robert E. Lee

    And na bitch this aint no Civil War

    Im responsible for this rap that is hardcore

    I explore upon your wackness like I was Lewis & Clark

    Beatin your ass is like a walk in the park

    Writtin up on you like Jesus in the Gospel of Mark

    Ima snap ya neck for every stupid remark you make

    God created lyrical flow on the seventh day

    And gave it me in a similar way

    Kyree is the name Im the beast

    You must feed me rappers or feed me the beats

    Cause I am something that cannot be beat

    Salvage the beast or be salvaged by

    The illest rapper whos odds he defys
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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by poetikassasin on Fri Jul 18, 2008 3:26 pm

    you were supposed to some off the next multi (commandeer-it-wit-a-villanous-strut)
    Kyree wrote:Addicted to the beat like I was addicted to crack

    Kyree is back wit this lyrical batch

    Of fresh baked lyrics to battle the wack

    This shit is verbal payback

    Vicous nouns and terrifying abverbs

    And these angry adjectives kill all these wack herbs

    Dont think your ill

    Just cause you O.D. on pills

    Real skills like mine are the ones that get you to Beverly Hills

    And Kyree kills with this lyrical 9mm which pierces the skin

    You cant fight back so you gotta take it on the chin

    Cause this situation is a win-win for me

    You just came up short like Robert E. Lee

    And na bitch this aint no Civil War

    Im responsible for this rap that is hardcore

    I explore upon your wackness like I was Lewis & Clark

    Beatin your ass is like a walk in the park

    Writtin up on you like Jesus in the Gospel of Mark

    Ima snap ya neck for every stupid remark you make

    God created lyrical flow on the seventh day

    And gave it me in a similar way

    Kyree is the name Im the beast

    You must feed me rappers or feed me the beats

    Cause I am something that cannot be beat

    Salvage the beast or be salvaged by

    The illest rapper whos odds he defys

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Akkadian on Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:54 pm

    poetikassasin wrote:where are your multies???

    my multies are at the end of each of my lines

    naughty by nature
    ...haughty my culture
    ...taught, he high weight, sure.
    ...brought she, fly date, sir
    ...naughty by nature

    I don't see where you used grass-in-glass in your verse though :\

    poetikassasin wrote:
    look,

    ask-these-cats whose best n the say assas-is-bacc//
    n hes attacc-ing-traccs callem an asthma-blast//
    he ill and toting magnum-frags, can you fathom-that//
    he's not ya average-cat n he leaves herbs bottled like grass-in-glass//

    did the dashes represent the words that were your multies? you didnt rhyme them so maybe you were going for words with either slant rhyme or the same syllable but how did that work out since you wrote "attac-ing-traccs" I'm sorry i missed it Neutral also if you would'nt quote such large chunks of text just to write one sentence (especially when the text was the last post) it would make the page easier to load and give your critique more cerdibility :-P just simply use an up arrow like )"^" or write, "the post above" or "posters name", if it isn't clear what you are talking about.

    for those who don't know about multies:

    What are multies?

    Multi is short for multi-syllable rhyme. Multies are phrases in which more than one syllable rhymes. Multies can be double, triple, quadruple (etc) rhymes.

    Normal rhyme: cat / hat
    Multi rhyme: my cat / hi-hat
    Or a longer multi: bit my cat / hit the hi-hat

    Southern rapper Ludacris loves featuring multies in his verses. Luda has a trademark delivery, in which he slows down and emphasizes the end of each line. This delivery works well when he slips in some clever multies.

    Im never going nowhere, so dont try me,
    my music sticks in fans veins like an I.V.


    In the example from the track Number One Spot, Luadacris creates a multi with try me and I.V. He could have just rhymed me with V., but by rhyming with the additional syllables (try with I) it becomes a multi.


    http://www.flocabulary.com/multies.html
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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by poetikassasin on Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:34 pm

    this guy above me

    ha my bad about the whole quote thing lol im not too good with the internet forum thing lol

    i guess i can kinda see where ur multies are lol its really hard to tell when you cant hear the person actualy say the verse ya know?

    yea the dashes were my multies

    been-the-best-yo = cig-ar-rette-smoke
    live-to-wrecc-hoe = cig-ar-rette-moke
    mix-the-mets-for = cig-ar-rette-smoke
    ig-nor-ant-folk = cig-ar-rette-smoke(slightly slanted)
    beligerant-grown = cigarette smoke(slanted but still rhymes)
    simple-yet-known = cigarr-ette-smoke
    quicc-to-fade-blokes = slanted
    cigarette smoke= cigarette smoke


    get it?

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Akkadian on Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:59 pm

    ... those aren't rhymes. A slant rhyme (so we can use the term properly here) is a rhyme in which either the vowels or the consonants of stressed syllables are identical, as in eyes, light; years, yours.

    your rhymes contain some slanted rhymes but they do not follow the standard concepts of multies. although using a slanted rhyme can be a poets alteration of the "norm" to give strength to his writing your multies. The post I quoted and commented on earlier, and the one you are reffeering to here both are not "proper"

    hope this helps your understanding and brings your rhymes to a new level!
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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by poetikassasin on Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:33 pm

    akkadian.....i know what a slanted rhyme is... i also know what a multi is

    please do not patronize me

    im not trying to be proper by any means....and the few bars i posted had multies in the EMCEE way.

    there is a difference in the definitions of multies and slanted rhymes when speaking in the emcee sense and the literary sense...

    much respect

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Shot1 on Fri Sep 05, 2008 5:46 am

    uh next topic:

    i wanna make it clear that a multie may be slanted
    im gonna use a lot of them so it dont make me frantic
    we dont need the whole lowdown on the technique from flocabulary
    its a good source, but its not gonna reck me and my vocabulary

    i cant be screwed rhymin

    next multie:
    fade away fast

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by CRACK ATTACK on Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:32 am

    yo! u choke on da flow like a hoe, inhaling ciggarette smoke, ur site is gross u got a big nose, keep ur legs closed, u need a breathmint for refreshment, ur vagina is infected, u cough up cancer and TB bitch thers no way u could please me, just leave me and go smoke anotha ciggee, ur a dirty slut, fuck poeple for drugs, thats the reason y ur pussy infested with bugs, so dnt push me and dnt try ya luck, bitch u smoke ciggaretts the way i smoke blunts

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by CRACK ATTACK on Thu Nov 20, 2008 3:35 am

    CRACK ATTACK wrote:yo! u choke on da flow like a hoe, inhaling ciggarette smoke, ur site is gross u got a big nose, keep ur legs closed, u need a breathmint for refreshment, ur vagina is infected, u cough up cancer and TB bitch thers no way u could please me, just leave me and go smoke anotha ciggee, ur a dirty slut, fuck poeple for drugs, thats the reason y ur pussy infested with bugs, so dnt push me and dnt try ya luck, bitch u smoke ciggaretts the way i smoke blunts

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    ciggarette smoke

    Post by CRACK ATTACK on Thu Nov 20, 2008 3:39 am

    CRACK ATTACK wrote:yo! u choke on da flow like a hoe, inhaling ciggarette smoke, ur site is gross u got a big nose, keep ur legs closed, u need a breathmint for refreshment, ur vagina is infected, u cough up cancer and TB bitch thers no way u could please me, just leave me and go smoke anotha ciggee, ur a dirty slut, fuck poeple for drugs, thats the reason y ur pussy infested with bugs, so dnt push me and dnt try ya luck, bitch u smoke ciggaretts the way i smoke blunts

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by rondizz on Thu Dec 11, 2008 1:06 pm

    ima killa like charles masnon
    got hydraulics so the cars dancin

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Ness on Thu Jan 08, 2009 9:19 pm

    i give you hell take flmaes to da max
    killing these wack MCs like lyrical anthrax
    please dont test, i aint need to reply
    put yah to rest wacth these tricks just die
    and they mamas cry, blastin shots on these haters
    my rhymes as many as daily prayers
    so dont judge me, im 14 yah can never touch me
    started out young but im known to blast MCs
    burning like a flmaethrower yall cant go against me
    so dont hate, ima make ur name, late great
    so stfu for your names sake
    cause im reap what i sow
    spitting my rhymes slowly killin on the lowly while being heard these bitches all noe me
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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Tro on Mon Jan 12, 2009 2:23 pm

    Understanding is the way we ought live in life
    Not withstanding the ways we want to live this life
    No need to brandish the things we acquire
    Or be attracted to things we don't require
    We need to just chill
    Believe, n' thus build
    The skills that we need to heave us uphill
    It's not that easy I agree, but still
    If we don't take that step- someone else with guts will...
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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Ppickles on Sun May 10, 2009 4:11 pm

    yo tro little do you know but i turned you sister into a fucking hoe she was walking down the street around 3:30 i whistled at her like i was a birdy she looked at me and said whats up and i told her shes gunna take it in the butt she turned all red but never said no so i bent her over and said lets go took her to your house got that brian o hell yes but i forgot to say sorry about the bloddy mess i never ment to pound her that hard but in your bed it was so fun!

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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by InFamous on Mon May 11, 2009 7:06 am

    It was a mess huh like the time i came on yo bitches breasts it was the best she said I am better then the rest she loved to lick my chest and dickeven my shit
    Sold her drugs got her on the crack pipe nigger whats the hype...
    On the mic i rap faster the pussy atracts dikes
    Time to rape yo mama oh shit syk
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    Re: Multi Cypher

    Post by Ppickles on Sun Sep 13, 2009 11:00 pm

    infamous huh ya for what taking a dick deep into the butt


    you think you sly you think you fast
    but i slow you down like that cali grass
    and fuck you up like a brick of hash
    cut you with a razor your face like SLASH
    still your money why doing the monstermash
    get shot up for touching my stash
    you should know better then to get in between a man and his cash

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