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    My second freestyle ever....A few bars

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    Block Boy
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    Join date : 2009-10-20

    My second freestyle ever....A few bars Empty My second freestyle ever....A few bars

    Post by Block Boy Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:40 am

    Wassup, I posted this on bboys.com, but it didnt go through, I gotta go back and see whats up with them, maybe I didnt post enough feedback there or somethin.
    Aight


    Im a nigga that'll leave ya brain on ur shirt
    Next word u say take u from ur grave to the dirt
    half my niggas still pushin cane call it work
    We duffle bag niggas, u still slave for the dirt
    Im shining like I sold a tray full of purp
    Save ya gun money nigga it aint gon' be worth
    Take ur flack jacket back nigga, it aint gon' work
    You a public enemy, like u said kay slay is a jerk

    Leave ur world so dark theyll need a blowtorch to view it
    The shit that Im on I'll even leave ya broad toothless
    The crib's full of crack but this aint a dope boy union

    gangbangers horrified, they think I grew up in harlem
    My nine leave ur chestpiece looser than ur harlot
    Sendin snipers that clappin rippin through ya bosses
    I'm harder to copy than the fewer artists
    Dope runs cross country, like puttin ruthless in the carter

    Im nicer with the razors, Ill leave ya throat danglin
    Im sour like corona, they say I sound spanglish

    Fuck the diamond in the dirt my nine'll excert
    why u do that for papi? cause violence'll hurt
    Ya'll should never sign me, cause my talent'll hurt
    Leave urself out, u aint pushin crack on the turf
    My nigga locked up so I dont smile when Im hurt


    I spit toxic, my mic needs a brethalyzer
    I deform ur face and then get hella dollars
    The shit I seen'll make a goodfella wiser

    U know I kill the beef cause Im really into koshir
    Arab tony soprano, keep my heat in the holster
    Bribe missing persons, they'll never see a poster

    Wall street cats losin' kilos in their stock
    The angel of death, nigga Im breathin on ur block

    Car windows dusty like I was brewin crack
    Pull out the sunroof, niggas hear the ruger clap

    Sneak into ur crib, ur goin down on a officer
    Say one word, I'll send ur crown to the coroner
    Married to my Berretta, foreved down and Im holdin her


    My two links of feedback (Lol I dont see why we gotta do this when the mods can keep track of our posts themselves, but here goes)

    https://freestylerap.forumakers.com/written-lyricism-f11/first-one-tell-me-how-it-sounds-new-freestyler-t487.htm

    https://freestylerap.forumakers.com/written-lyricism-f11/corporate-thugs-t511.htm

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