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    what a verse without bars

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    cmacc tha don
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    Post by cmacc tha don Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:04 am

    BLACK SHADES AS I SIT ON THE THRONE
    BLUE DODGER CAP THE KING IS HOME
    THE FLOW BUZZ IT ATTACK LIKE A BEE STING
    THE STREET LIKE MY LOVER RAP A GOOD FLING
    THEY KNOW ABOUT EACH OTHER NO FIGHTING IN BETWEEN
    87 FLEETWOOD WITH THE GANGSTA LEAN
    I SO GHETTO BUT LOOK HOW I REVOLVE
    I MOBHITS PRESIDENT THE MAN IN CHARGE
    I WASN'T GOING RAP NOMORE, BUT THE FLOW IS SICK
    AND YOU CAN'T BUILD A FOUNDATION WITHOUT THE FIRST BRICK
    I LOVE MUSIC SO MUCH I SWITCH MY CONTENTS
    SO I BE LOVE FROM THE U.S. TO THE SOVIETS
    THEY THOUGHT THE DOGS KILL ME, BUT I RETURN A EAGLE LIKE MICHEAL VICK
    TAKING PHOTO'S HOLDING MY DICK
    I HEARD THIS VERSE CAT WAS GETTING BOLD IN HIS RAPS
    BUT I FINISH HIM LIKE BUSH DID SADDAM IN IRAQ
    ONCE MY EYE ON YOU ,YOU NEVER COMING BACK
    SO I'M GOING TO TOSS YOUR NAME DOWN IN HISTORY
    NOW BACK TO THE SHOW.... LOL
    RAP ALWAYS SEEM LIKE A GOOD PARTY FAVOR
    I'M LOOKING LIKE A EX CON OUT ON GOOD BEHAVIOR
    MINDSTATE GROWN LIKE CASSETTE PLAYER
    I REMEMBER WHEN A HOE WAS CALL A STRAWBERRY
    I WAS A LITTLE KID SITTING ON THE BENCH, A MAUBURY PLAYER
    HOW YOU GOING BATTLE ME, I WAS SALING DOPE WHEN PAC DIED PLAYER
    16 POLO SHOES, DOCKERS,WHITE TEE, & A EDDIE BAUIER WINDBREAKER
    TALKING TO THE LITTLE HOODRATS WAITING FOR THE DASH BUS
    TRYING GET THE NUMBER AND THE ADDRESS QUICK, TOUCH ON THE ASS AND THE BREAST
    MOM AINT HOME COMEOVER SO WE CAN HAVE SEX
    I HOPE U AIN'T SCARED I STAY IN THE PROJECTS
    NAW BABY I GOT A GUN AND U SPEAKING NONSENSE
    WHAT A VERSE WITHOUT BARS
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    Verse2
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    what a verse without bars Empty Re: what a verse without bars

    Post by Verse2 Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:19 pm

    aside from da diss...lol...

    again da piece woulda been right if u had got all ya words right...
    datz ya main flaw wit ya stuff....ya lines would b pretty straight....
    still wouldn't b uck~n wit mines...
    hahahahaha
    jus go back and read it and find all da small mistakes u made...
    it don't take dat long and dat way u negate comeback material...
    i ain't a hater...i keepz it real...dats what i do...

    I HEARD THIS VERSE CAT WAS GETTING BOLD IN HIS RAPS
    BUT I FINISH HIM LIKE BUSH DID SADDAM IN IRAQ

    dat 2 me was da best line n da verse...lol...
    keep doin ya thing

    ghosttt

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