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    D Light
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    Post by D Light Wed Jul 15, 2009 11:04 am

    some written work I did while my mind was in da sky

    I hold no aggression whenever Im progressin
    but when a nigga hold me back I jab at his intestins
    My rymes are immune had all its injections
    a dude get seperated in all type of sections
    im a lil filled wit pain you could see it in my eyes
    cuz I stay ill doctors still wonderin why
    I precide to my own cuz I know truth from lies
    so all yall fake dudes betta move aside
    I thunder skies so dont stick your head outside
    It seems like yall dont hear me like yall all deaf
    ill stretch ya neck and throw ya body in a vortex
    filled wit that bang bang like hard sex
    bury me and ill creep out from the hole i was in
    crush ya soul wit my tims and have ya life goals look thin
    lets get back to me I do things accuretly
    at school I smacked everybody in the faculty
    shit cuz i felt they were harrasaing me
    but wit no school my rap game grew massively
    some niggaz like to talk smack well i like to talk fist crushing chins busting lips no miss or assist
    madlyricaal
    madlyricaal
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    Post by madlyricaal Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:45 pm

    ur nice with it.
    MizAlyB
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    Post by MizAlyB Sat Aug 15, 2009 8:52 pm

    This flow was grimy as hell and its like that...
    Despite that we got cats like yourself who have
    the lyrical wealth to write that and not be mentally broke
    A talented flow is addictive as coke
    but upliftin as hydro when smoked....
    Some of these clowns are spittin a joke
    but you kept shit tight the vibe was right
    and the rhyme was totally LOC....
    Straight DOPE...left me wanting another toke....

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