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    first attempt at writing in a while-lux

    projectlux
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    Post by projectlux Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:06 am

    see where i come from there's no such thing as all for one, one for all
    it's always been all for none, and take but give none to all
    in this tiny box inside my head i feel like a contorsionist
    enveloped in an endless battle of biblical proportions
    keep in mind that i am a very hard act to follow
    yeah i'm small, but i carry a hell of alotta' cargo
    there's an indestructable soldier standing strong inside of me
    just look into my eyes for a moment and then you'll see
    standing there with no fear, silent as the storm grows near
    born of pain, reborn again, a phoenix burning through the rain
    any normal man would think she's entirely insane
    but little do they know that her pride is what made her this way
    my fists are tattered and torn but now can finally rest
    it's been so long that i've been at it i can't help but be restless
    i normally wouldn't let anybody protect me
    but in this case i'm feelin' quite comfortable in your safety
    i'm grateful every day for this chance that i have with you
    before the only time you would see me was in the i.c.u.
    tubes runnin' under my skin as if they were a part of me
    an internal labirynth of flesh and metal like some damn machine
    trapped in that bed for hours just to find out later on
    none of the docs could figure out what the hell was goin' on
    come'on, you can't be serious you have to be kidding
    just put me up for auction, everyone start the bidding!
    going once, going twice for this girl pronounced dead at the scene
    i've been through hell and back, around a block or two or three
    there's so much weight on my shoulders i don't think i can make it through
    i'm keepin' my head in the clouds and i swear it's because of you
    i can't really understand it, yet it's perfectly fine
    because everything around me has completely been redesigned
    see, i said you were an artist and you didn't believe me
    like i knew you could you singlehandedly surpassed davinci
    and thats cake for you, cuz' no one can compare to you
    you got some talent, kid and i swear it you're gonna' make it too
    straight to the top just like you said you would do
    and if you just so happen to fall, i promise i'll catch you
    i'll be behind you all the way so don't worry 'bout that
    just do your thing and don't forget that your girl's got your back
    i thought that being happy again was impossibly possible
    kinda like fitting a giant ship inside a tiny a glass bottle
    so bravo to the handsome stranger that won the kiss
    that transformed him to this dork that she proudly calls her prince
    and farewell to the ghosts of the passed that will never be missed
    sorry if this came out funny, i know i suck but fuck it
    ktw
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    Post by ktw Thu Apr 08, 2010 6:37 pm

    not bad.

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