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    daniel872
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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by daniel872 on Tue Oct 13, 2009 8:49 pm

    look lil pickles, ill slice u with these sharp ass sickles,
    i should be kicked off???
    u should be ticked off,
    cuz when im done,
    u gonna run an be gone,
    cuzz my shits hotter than ur son,
    if u think ur shit was tight, bitch give me back the mike,
    ill give it to AlyB an destroy ya fake ass wannabe,
    never in ur life will u beat me,
    now get the fuck back, no time for chit-chat,
    ill tie u to the back of my car an drag ya,
    stop slit ur throat an still bag ya,
    u never had a chance, ill spear u with a lance,
    kick u in the face with my vans,
    im have invincible powers, drop u down faster than than twin towers,
    go ahead run u fuckin coward......


    u cant beat me dude....
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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by Ppickles on Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:52 pm

    First off bitch those lines wernt aimed at you
    but now you pissed me off so heres what im gunna do
    its gunna be worst then what hitler did to the jews
    im gunna play you like a Kazoo
    then beat your ass like a kangaroo
    best make way cuz im comin through
    and i got my red dot aimed right at you
    so im gunna give you a count of two
    then im gunna unload all 4 clips on you
    then curb stomp your ass with my nike shoe
    talking shit "i cant beat you"
    but i knock you on your ass with my 1-2
    im wasting my time battling you
    you lost you have no clue
    but the beating must continue untill im threw
    the weed i roll is sticky as glue
    while your a punk bitch gettin high off fumes
    lil bitch getting smashed like prunes
    when i finsh you off with the harpoon

    what danile you ask for it i brought it WHAT WHAT 503 bitch
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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by MizAlyB on Wed Oct 14, 2009 11:08 am

    Damn its an ill vibe takin over this entire room/
    This wind gets to blowin, inviting a monsoon/
    Sweepin out some ignorance/
    like dirty porches with a broom/
    Born a little soon/
    cus I was torchin moms's womb.../
    And since birth its been DOOM...
    Til death never silent/
    come off with some brilliance/
    resiliant like the violence/
    I let my pen straight spill it/
    ...do all the sick defilin..../
    ...Kill lies with priceless skills/
    cus I am willfull wit defiance/
    No compliance to agendas fake/
    Leave treasonous thieves n snakes/
    and they spies with lost lives in my wake/
    Take sides with my tribe/
    in these ties that we break/
    Times are too high and/
    our lives are at stake/
    So make somethin a little realer/
    You say you a fuckin killer.?../
    How bout a classified info spiller?/
    Wudup? Big props to my MaryJ dealers.../
    As long as you not a roxycodone piller
    I guess its aight tho..../
    But why yall always
    wanna fuss and fight tho?/
    Scream in the night
    like a couple of dykes yo/
    Cus your ego's about to implode.../
    Instigators go lick a fuckin toad!/
    Or play a little number/
    on your hairy little chodes..../
    If you not up on some humble/ spit
    You riskin a shitty road/
    You might just have to reap/
    the repercussions of seeds ill-sowed..../
    When it comes to fuckin wit that AlyB flow
    thats a realm thats still vastly UNKNOWN/
    You could never dethrone the queen of this zone/
    So its best to just leave it alone/
    ALL YALL ASSES need a little more practice
    cus I'm TRASHIN that wackness you've shown...

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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by Verse2 on Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:56 pm

    lol

    i'ma jus diffuse da whole situation we got goin here...and take us back 2 where we were...itz funny how jus a tiny bit of negative...and animosity can make sumth~n get so ugly...naa mean...dis a site 4 growth...letz not take dat step back...naa mean...and jus jot some rhymes like da title say...lmao


    aiiight


    been a min since i jus wrote sumth~n 4 da heck of it...and it had no purpose...or wasn't goin at somebody....


    Versed wit a structure dat defyz mediocrity/
    punches at da speed of light massed at high velocities/
    da magic happens here / take a look n my hat /
    there's more den rabbits jus close da cap/
    ***keep it moving***
    feeling good / trynna get my life 2gether /
    gotta smile at dis calm current weather /
    nice breeze / n my sight...see /
    and da bookz coming 2gether quite nice~ly /
    yess / stre~~~tch...i'm jus calm~n da "storm" /
    da X powers i posess / guess jus aren't da norm /
    still love 2 help / u can see it n da "forum" /
    pass me da "mal~it" won't stop da court from being adjourned/
    living da vida loca / sckitz and and steaming colder /
    once da "shrinks" grow up / den we can think dis over /
    passed no way out / here's da merry~go~round /
    won da race / so u can donate dis 2 charity now /
    i could never b down / at least not 4 long /
    at least until da new D~block song...

    jus a quick whatever
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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by Ppickles on Wed Oct 21, 2009 10:36 pm

    yo man thanks for getting it back on track
    its hard when you on a site always on the attack
    always got to be watching your back
    to make sure your lines dont get jacked

    see people are like sharks when they bite
    looking for something that they like
    then they try and drop it when they on the mic

    people read shit not even aimed at them
    then they get offended and wana face you in the pin
    hit you with low blows aimed at your shins
    i cant just sit there take it and grin
    naturaly i throw my gaurd up and wana deffend

    yo verse and alyb way to keep it real!

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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by Verse2 on Thu Oct 22, 2009 11:35 pm

    no doubt homie...


    gotta keep da fun n rap ya kno...there's a time 2 get on ya batle ish and murk a nigga...and there's a time 2 bring great minds 2gether and jus have a lyrical get~2gether....lmao....if u kno what i mean...alot of people are swayed by da battles and think dats what rap has mutated 2...wit all da negative n hip hop now...da wrong aura is given...but naaa...rap is still fun and alive...and n dis lil room 4 a min everybody had dat old rap vibe...where u listening 2 da other person or better said reading what da other person said like...yeaaaa...dats hot...and u feel compelled 2 get n it...and den dat battle stuff struck...and da good passed...den da bad came...and we had 2 stop it b4 we saw da ugly...

    niggaz is here 2 get better...and have fun....naaa mean...when people wanna battle...keep it civil...send a nigga a pm...and tell em 2 meetchu n da call outz....dats how u keep it thourough


    keep doin ya thing P


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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by Fish187 on Sat Oct 24, 2009 3:03 pm

    Now that well said- your well bred- and well raised
    To the knowledge of this universe and how it plays
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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by daniel872 on Sat Nov 21, 2009 5:45 pm

    wats with all the negativity, this bad activity,
    i called u guys here for festivity an productivity,
    it was meant for sickass creativity an progressivity,
    all i feel is this bad aura this vibe,
    that i cant describe,
    we should get together an make 1 tribe,
    an together we will thrive an strive,
    an make this site come alive,

    ok here i go...

    wats with rap these days,
    everyone just yearning for checks an pays,
    lookin for fame an praise,
    its all bout whos rockin the newest jays,
    but im here to bring it back,
    dont matter if u white hispanic chinese or black,
    im ready to set this shit right on track,
    cuz all these new rappers is wack, all they talk is smack,
    but lyrical skills is what they lack,
    dont u guys remember NWA an the big dog DR DRE,
    an fuckin NAUGHTY BY NATURE, not cause i hate ya,
    thats them lines we bangin to, dont say no cuz u know u do,
    or wat about the O.C. or the big SNOOP D O DOUBLE-G,
    wat about pac nas an jayz,
    theres thousands millions more,
    who opened the door,
    straight to rap core,
    we kept listenin an asked for more,
    watch wattafuck u type,
    this the shit this da hype,
    fuck it here ill pass u da mike......



    no fightin..
    like i said only rhyme recitin...
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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by Fish187 on Sun Nov 22, 2009 4:43 pm

    Check this shit cause its a comin of age
    Im gettin lost in this beat like a goddamn maze
    Im hittin long ass treys N nettin those mid-range jays
    Im drinkin mutherfuckin Segrams on the dock of the bay
    I came in hear ta make ur head bounce N swivell
    I see the bitches in the back- I can hear them Ho's giggle
    My dro's got sum purple ice-sickles
    I ride these tricks like by-cycles
    A funny ass kat remind old dudes of- Don Rickles
    Just dont ask about the biz
    I know U understand how it is
    N U comprehend how it aint
    Ima bless sum dum fuckers- but I aint no saint

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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by Verse2 on Wed Jan 27, 2010 8:55 am

    ^^^not bad...i hardly write music anymore but wat da hell...lol...dis was jus alil sumth~n i wrote recently...nuff~n serious...jus sumth~n diff den regular story write~n


    see me i'ma lox fan
    sell~n outz a no~no
    lets talk some hip~hop
    gotta set aside da logos
    u kno yo...everybody tripp~n n here
    y u wanna rap?
    go out son and get a career
    game full of no~names
    haters and loose change
    scripted realty shows
    dese clones have no shame
    i'm talk~n Flava Flav
    &I luv New York
    whats next...huh?
    a show where there's muslims eat~n pork?!
    i'm n deep thought y'all
    past dese lil short bars
    dey focus~n on chains
    but not da Fz on their report card
    been warned dog
    man..we quite damned wit our future
    better drop ya pen and pad
    and start 2 dab n computers
    better plan 2 hit da sea, homes
    acquainted wit da scuba
    Bein a nigga 2day is jus not~so~hot
    So much ignorance on screen u gotta fight 4 ya props
    U choo~choo~n on a train dats jus not~gon~stop
    It’s jus 2 much goin on /
    Dog, where’s da talent at
    Scrutinize da man n da mirror
    Y u profile~n catz?!
    Buck scream~n uck 50
    50 like wateva
    hold~n his head while he swings
    Say~n “what, can’t do no better?!”
    Is it jus me?
    Am I da only 1 witness~n?!
    …….Fuck talk~n hip~hop and jus 4get it den
    stay in ya wheel chair
    proceed witcha pose~n
    pic says a thousand words
    they feel~n like Greg Oden
    Shit…
    I’m at dat point of no return
    and I know my way back
    Da bread crumbs jus confirm
    If I’m ever lost…itz jus a loss of words
    Nervousness and confusion…please get off my nerves
    I kno half dese lines
    prolly pass ya mind
    Studied death’s design
    Mastered it n half da time
    Had 2 smile God said my destination was final
    Had a dream dat night where I was actually Spinal
    Yea…da 1 from killer instinct
    Instead of fear
    I jus wondered how I could fix things
    Told myself I don’t have 2 trash rap…
    But when u give ur all
    U do expect sumth~n back
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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by Fish187 on Sat Feb 06, 2010 3:03 pm

    Ya see Verse 2 just speakin the truth N keepin it smooth
    He'll infiltrate ur mind - cause thats just what he do
    And thats why Rappers they rap- cause that rap shit iz cool
    And Haters flap they jaws like we back in elementary school
    Im tryin ta stay around fur centuries dude
    Collectin memories too - of all the people I've screwed
    Think back to the days when I was muchin on a Charelson Chew
    Had I known then what I know now I would've been runnin my school
    U can have the horns just know it comes with the bull
    Dont be reckless - thats just pitiful
    Go ahead and take a hit and give it a pull





    affraid study

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    Post by Verse2 on Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:50 pm

    ^^^keep it up homie...gett~n good...i'ma follow up next time i stop thru haven't been so much n a rapping mood lately...but i gotchu next time fashizzzle...lol
    who even sayz dat anymore besides Snoop...lol
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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by Randz on Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:02 pm

    and your the one rapping words like tommorow sorrow bigger trigger why not try something smarter? or you just to stupid to understand people who are better then you? if i was a child id have trouble understanding adults when they speak also.

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    Re: just jot ur rhymes down to no especific persona

    Post by Cik Bodybag J on Sun Sep 11, 2011 7:42 pm

    Psycho, Skitzo, about to fuckin' lose it,
    Maybe it comes from the drugs I was usin',
    Or maybe its tha mental stress that's built up over the years,
    All the tears,
    Couple guns to my head made me get over my fears,
    All the thugs in tha pit, got the slugs and tha clips,
    grew up with the bloods and the crips,
    Got that trigger finger itch,
    Tragedies, Attackin G's,
    Spreadin' blood like calories if ya battle me.

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