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    My new rap need feedback

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    MC Ghosty
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    Post by MC Ghosty Wed Apr 07, 2010 3:06 pm

    Yeah I am out to get all those fake singers actors and actresses
    Miley Cyrus Justin Bieber and all those fake Disney fake stars
    Well you can watch out

    I am just like Sylar mess with you are going to get your skull sliced open
    I'm out to get you because you are fake stars well could you stop moping
    Come near me you are going to be soaking in your own blood and choking
    Hoping for me to back off well I'm not got more chance of Madeline coping
    I do not want no gay boy next to probably might start to feel my fucking legs
    What with the begs I am not fucking gay I will fucking smash you with a kegs
    Yeah how fucking funny you have just been splattered by runny fucking eggs
    You have to then I will have to force you to fucking drink the fucking liquid dregs
    Disney I can't remember when it was good probably when Toy Story 2 was out
    Miley Cyrus stop fucking whining you are a bitchy whore all you fucking do is pout
    I you were in my bedroom I would fuck you then I will fucking cut you like a trout
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    Post by MC Ghosty Wed Apr 07, 2010 3:37 pm

    Well Miley I will fucking cut off your nose and force you to change route
    I'm not going to behave so you can watch out for my group ShockWave
    Well if you can't stand me well I don't give a fuck go and crawl into a cave
    Well Well Miley yes my fucking shitty small trailer does need a fucking slave
    I do not give a fuck if you don not like it because you have to be fucking brave

    Could you at least clean the floor you fucking whore
    Yeah I said could you clean the floor you fucking whore
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    Post by ufo Thu Apr 08, 2010 5:46 pm

    shit dont make no sense n it was wak

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