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    Layin Down some Rhymes

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    dman004
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    Join date : 2010-03-20

    Layin Down some Rhymes Empty Layin Down some Rhymes

    Post by dman004 Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:43 pm

    Yo no offence to anybody in particular but most of the rhymes I've read here suck. You try to get the message through instead of just lettin the rhymes flow. Sometimes you gotta just spit what's on the top of your head.


    All your rhymes that I hear
    Just irritate my fuckin ear
    But have no Fear
    I get better every year
    Now wait for a minute
    And I fuckin just got better
    I get right back in it
    Like a fuckin double-header
    You see me rollin in my whip
    And throwin down my last chip
    But I never run out
    Need more money just shout
    All the drinks are on the house
    But only for me
    I see what it means to be
    The fuckin boss of it all
    Never get a single phone call
    They all go through my Crew
    And they'd never answer for your
    But I'd answer for your girl
    She knows I always make her toes curl
    Bitches love the way I live my life
    they all want to be my wife
    But I only fuck that kinda chick
    They can play with me dick
    But not with my money
    I got 20 dollars worth of dimes on my dick
    And my flow is out of control
    Red light means stop but I go
    Can't stop the fuckin show
    Unless you take me in a bag
    Like my Homie left the streets
    That's why I create these feats
    And spread them all over
    Until the day I fall over
    And land six feet deep
    Til then Imma keep hustlin these streets
    Til I'm flyin above em like some parakeets
    That way when I'm comin the the ground
    I can look all around
    Land on my bank account
    No one can spend that amount
    But I just keep tryin
    Even if it means dyin
    Of a drug Overdose
    Going comatose
    But I'd still spit flows
    That get hoes
    You'd still get hosed (no hoes)
    What you expect from them bitch ass flows
    Since I'm still throwin these blows
    It's kind of ironic but my shit is so sick
    Listen to it and I'll cure your rhymes quick
    Just learn a little bit
    Before I throw a hit
    Cuz once that happens ain't nothin else happens

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