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    alil sumth~n i wrote da other day

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    Post by Verse2 Tue Feb 09, 2010 8:54 am

    honestly feel like itz 1 of my top 10 verses ever...well 2 a beat anyway...i get more concious without a beat...but dis 1 was aiight 2 me

    at da end beat ends early...but jus use ur imagination...lmao

    drop at :12...

    dey chase~n my bars like a dog do his tail
    hard body ish ~ take 3 like Wolverine's nails
    ain't cut from da same cloth ~ dey seams jus don't gel
    put em parallel 2 me ~balance beam~ watch da scale
    ain't make~n hot songz ~ but street cred like Maino
    can't build a career ~ itz not as easy as da legoz
    bez~zles ~ watches ~ and den les~boz
    think itz all mustard ~ end up salty like a pretzel
    **yea**
    give em my Drake impres~sion
    i keep it all da way real like Ricki Lake confessions
    u confused ~ i play shrink ~ jus embrace da lesson
    noth~n but da naked truth ~ and can't wait 2 address it
    dem niggaz all wack wit dem lines dats so basic
    my styles rare like a desert housed wit an oasis
    give me 7 dayz ~ i'm n dat ass like Craig David (no homo)
    den watch dis nobody ~ quickly dead yo fan favorite
    got bars dat a bartender could stand behind
    got bars dat da army could use as land mines
    got bars dat scorch ~ give chicks tan lines
    1 bar 2 da head make Mick Foley n2 Mankind
    damn i'm...da Grand kind...jus too Nell
    way outta my uck~n mind ~ i am not too well
    i'm okay at almost everything ~ who needs a specialist
    talked 2 Moses thru burning bushes ~ itz n da testament
    copped my blueprints ~ new arrested development
    settle n ~ never man ~ construct~n my own settlements
    Arwen sprinkles my wounds wit elven medicine
    fast 4ward da cycle ~ while dey b back peddle~n
    throw em 8 by 8z ~ who need~n exact measurements
    dey say i give food 4 thought ~ get in~destion and ~
    i am not da 1 ~ dis Morpheous better tell em since
    da 1 coming right after me ~ low~key
    catch 24 from Steve on any given sunday
    Verse me ~ hook from Skizz ~ u gon fall 1 way
    I'm n2 da Samurai and Nin~ja
    commit Hara~kiri or die by dis kunai all n ya
    i make heads roll without use~n da gullitine
    got a few terrorist friends 4 thee initial theme (jus play~n jibzeey...lol)
    da lil things count
    dats how dey dwindle leads down
    u wasn't a G den
    y would ju b 1 now
    u and me split ~ hurt my pride!? ~ wat a croak
    da people outside ~ da inner circle ~ inside jokes
    niggaz far from da heart ~ not even close
    dey start~n 2 look like a poltergeist ~ not far from ghost (can't c u)
    swept wit da broom ~ approach~n da dust pan
    if i can't trust a bank wit my money ~ den who can i trust den (lol)
    dey don't like me ~ fuck em! ~ i'm like bye
    we stay at odds ~ even when we even ~ ain't it odd?
    ain't it funny
    let me chill ~ cuz i ain't trynna get intricate
    always press~n my buttons ~ Dennis da Menace prickz
    draped n corporate casual ~ when i hit em wit da buissiness sense
    let me find my way out ~ cuz i ain't trynna get n2 it

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    Post by Shook Ones Back On Up Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:12 pm

    this is my favorite raps by you the words or so vivid keep it up homie
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    Post by Verse2 Mon Feb 22, 2010 5:16 pm

    thanx homie....


    still a bit rusty....but itz aiiight 4 wat it was...lol

    thanx 4 da luv tho
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    Post by Verse2 Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:23 pm

    say a hard head always makes 4 soft asscheekz/
    rhymes been hor'dourves since Usher played n da Faculty/
    i'm major / jus putt~n it accurately/
    if u not a fan of hip~hop / tune n we'll pull u gradually/
    making new games / ain't 4 da hearing impaired/
    u and ya crew circle my verses / call it lyrical stares/
    dese been unbearable years / but Verse2 could never faulter /
    point is / ya boy shit n tip~top & getting sharper/
    dey said i was good / i got better /
    and when dey said i got better / i swear i heard dat slot machine lever/
    time is money / so fast 4word is madd cheaper/
    face freeze when dey glance~n up at da cab meter/
    my math weaker / but dats merely a minor set back /
    my work speaks 4 itself / b patient 4 his next statz/
    name got questioned when 1st called out /
    but i saw dat same reaction when dey introduced slaughterhouse/
    dey was hot?! / (NOT!) 2 me dey like Revanon/
    about 7 lucky charms short of a leprachan/
    dey jus filth/ i would never let dey words settle /
    hit da grounds /mow em down / call me da dirt devil /
    dey got sweet bars /so tell me how dat cute? /
    tell em "Verse2 sickkk" but wit Alphabet Soup/
    u out 2 get supped / V out 2 get chu /
    u ain't deaf y'all / he jus voice lost and bout mute /
    bars so real like da niggaz dat surround Nell /
    mine sound like thunder claps / urs more like a cow~bells
    always on dis plateau ~ dey jus never could reach it
    instead of being an ass about it ~ i let em lease it
    da niceness i showed 2 niggas dey took as weakness
    don't hear nor see no evil ~ don't even think it
    keep it short like Jada Pinkett
    don't wanna clash
    cuz if my mind ~ sense a sub~lime ~ datz gon b yo ass
    dat won't b a dream dog ~ i'll play it like itz fab
    do i really have 2 spell it out ~ "THROW EM N DA BAG"
    bars fall n sequence ~ leave punchlines as trinkets
    thoughts clouded since da comic books ~ like " datz genius!! "
    dese cowards ain't hard ~ get brolic 4 misdemeanors
    wit a dirty ass house ~ ain't heard of vaccum clean~erzzzzz (lol)
    ......pick up da pen and den toss it
    lets play a game ~ can his head really fit n da toilet
    i never had competition ~ better den da opposition
    girlz jog my lap ~ better tell em dat da clock is tick~n
    de~fine percision ~ dats Verse n a nutshell
    I been dat way ~ since dey brought out da chuck talez (chuck taylors)
    da livest ~ i beat death wit fly~n colors
    while y'all run around wit paint ball gunz shoot~n ya brothers
    got thick skin ~ hard 2 pierce like whale blubber
    i'm da 1 dat set the bridge up 4 niggaz 2 sail under

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