aight so im new to all this, i've been writtin poetry just for fun a lil bit so let me know what you think. please give me some advice.
dear lord can you hear me?/ should I write you a letter?/ u must hate when I talk to ya cause u neva resond neva
you say knock and the door shall be answered/ so i knocked, it locked, blocked, stocked, mcdonald's fast food fasta
you gave the jews a father, but you neva gave me one but a bother, that beat me till I couldn’t see farther, than my hand in front of my face, thinkin bout all the times I prayed, to stop the pain, almost got me insane, holdin on wishin on for them betta days
and ever since the start, I was marked, dumped into a play without a part, fucked by a family without a heart, dear lord why
why do you work in such mysterious ways, would it be so bad to give out the rules to the game. And nowadays,things change, now flyin like birds
did you catch those airplanes, that crashed into the world trade?
was that mercy to the human race?
Boddies bein thrOwn from windows,out to feel the wind blow, gassed like stoves,
watchin your husband on the tv go/ fall , dear lord did you catch him or did the ashfault, catchem and mess him up like rudy
Dear lord how do you let these people get away, sit there and spray ,behind masks, and dance while 8 million of ur peoplel getting gassed,
In chambers they screamed for mercy, but did you hear?,cause even more died of thirst see, cause even hitler got off easy, a bullet to his brain, its insane, that punk shoulda been tortured till his last day and then slayed, and hung in the streets, label him a mockery but no,
he got to pull the trigger to his head, while eight million innocent people already dead ,lyin severed, dear lord I need answers, so holla at me when your free, please read my letter, truley yours, kid sneaks
dear lord can you hear me?/ should I write you a letter?/ u must hate when I talk to ya cause u neva resond neva
you say knock and the door shall be answered/ so i knocked, it locked, blocked, stocked, mcdonald's fast food fasta
you gave the jews a father, but you neva gave me one but a bother, that beat me till I couldn’t see farther, than my hand in front of my face, thinkin bout all the times I prayed, to stop the pain, almost got me insane, holdin on wishin on for them betta days
and ever since the start, I was marked, dumped into a play without a part, fucked by a family without a heart, dear lord why
why do you work in such mysterious ways, would it be so bad to give out the rules to the game. And nowadays,things change, now flyin like birds
did you catch those airplanes, that crashed into the world trade?
was that mercy to the human race?
Boddies bein thrOwn from windows,out to feel the wind blow, gassed like stoves,
watchin your husband on the tv go/ fall , dear lord did you catch him or did the ashfault, catchem and mess him up like rudy
Dear lord how do you let these people get away, sit there and spray ,behind masks, and dance while 8 million of ur peoplel getting gassed,
In chambers they screamed for mercy, but did you hear?,cause even more died of thirst see, cause even hitler got off easy, a bullet to his brain, its insane, that punk shoulda been tortured till his last day and then slayed, and hung in the streets, label him a mockery but no,
he got to pull the trigger to his head, while eight million innocent people already dead ,lyin severed, dear lord I need answers, so holla at me when your free, please read my letter, truley yours, kid sneaks