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    Jokawild Rhyme

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    blazzin311
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    Post by blazzin311 Thu Dec 17, 2009 5:47 am

    Jokawild

    I'm the Jokawild
    Yea the crazy child
    I'm Far from mild
    You can see my bloody smile
    From a wide ass mile

    I'm always dialed in
    It's a fact it's a sin
    Don't talk smack
    You cannot win
    Cuz I'll bust your fuckin chin
    Bitch, I'm from the looney bin

    Am I crazy or insane
    You see to me it's all the same
    Instead I'm only playin
    Because to me it's all a game
    I come to bring the pain
    I don't do it to gain fame

    So tell me did ya know
    I epitomize original
    But some would say I'm a bit pitiful
    A different class of criminal
    Fuckin twisted in da skull
    A crazy individual

    I find it hard to keep my cool
    Careful now or I'll school you
    Kickin ass is what I do
    Creep on, I might fuck up you
    And your whole damn crew
    So don't be steppin on my shoes
    Or I'm gonna subdue you

    I might slay you with Kung-Fu
    Or curse on you Hoodoo
    It's kinda like Voodoo.
    Double cross me
    And your screwed
    I'll crucify ya like a Jew
    My thoughts are perverse, who knew
    So don't get shit misconstrued
    I'm a bit fuckin cuckoo

    Yea I got some screws loose
    Cause of the drugs I choose to use
    I got'em galore
    I want'em more and more
    Can never get enough
    Especially when the going gets tough
    To this I must admit
    And certainly not acquit
    I'm legitly misfit
    With Severe Issues

    Now hear me out
    Please me excuse,
    I'm about to snap
    Lace up the bootstraps
    And kick some fuckin ass
    Light you on fire
    With flammable gas
    Don't call it crass

    Matter of fact
    If you do
    You'll get whacked
    Maybe even drowned
    I'll pack your corpse
    In the ground
    Then spread dirt all around
    Six feet deep
    Tis the sow I reep
    The dead I keep
    So don't fall asleep

    Haunt you in your dreams
    Like Freddy
    There'll be bloodstreams and screams
    So get ready
    To see new extremes

    That you've never seen before
    They'll be very hardcore
    Filled with lots of guts and gore
    They'll be hard to ignore
    And you'll have no savior

    No matter how hard you pray
    I'll never go away
    This is no fuckin play
    It doesn't end halfway
    I am a mainstay

    I'm like an impasse
    An immovable landmass
    That you can never
    Remove, disprove, or surpass
    Like an hourglass
    Glued to the table
    You can see thru
    Me like a ghoul
    But I ain't no fuckin fable

    Not just a fixation
    In your imagination
    And never gonna straighten
    Out my act
    This I know for fact
    That never will I fade
    Away into the shade

    I know I've gone on for a while
    But at the end of the day
    We've got to part ways
    So at the end of this rhyme
    All I got time
    For is to say
    Know by know it sound cliche
    Take it to the grave
    I'm the Jokawild
    And Havoc I crave!
    ktw
    ktw
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    Jokawild Rhyme Empty Re: Jokawild Rhyme

    Post by ktw Sun Jan 10, 2010 9:09 am

    verses too weak.and where's ya chorus? this is written work,not written freestyles

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