Pass this one up (reverse psychology)

Snow

A structure so crystalline
only to be seen with a shimmer and gleam
silently sailing
dancing with grace and ease
seemingly without purpose
other than to lead
those who follow
on the cold winter breeze

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The space between

celestial beings
careening in and out of my dreams
oh how surreal it seems
flying disc and brightened beams
but how odd we both must seem
two far out creatures with an equal distance between
gazing back and forth
drawn by an unknown force
setting our crafts a'sail on an unknown course
worlds apart yet both our hearts
draw us closer together only to once again part

I guess my poetry leaves people speechless

Im simplitistically tactful- shake u up like the raffle
Lazerbeam your bitch ass- just like aliens do cattle
I baffle- this instigation aims to be precise
Give me one Ajax- and a vanilla shake with fries
Consumption- gotta feed the beast- It is I
Talkin that sailor slang- will getcha shot in the eye
You'll probably cry- chicks usually do- its true
I understand how your feeling- cause I understand weird fucks like you
I got enough shit ta do then da continually keep fuckin with you
Gotta Go!

awful comeback... too poetry? you must be thinking too simplitistically.... bc this isn't a rap battle

wat is there in psychology to reverse?
shuld i do it with a line or a verse?
if my baby cry shuld i call a nurse?
or shuld i call it a family curse?
if in class i'm on the top three?
will i get laid for free?
or my teacher will pay my fee?
what will be the color of my pee?
do i sound negative or selective?
i'm i too emotional to be objective?
i'm i free or a captive?
is my thought secure?
is love the cure?
is it good to be dirty or pure?
shuld i offer my apology?
or shuld i reverse my psychology?