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    Gud morning vietnaam!

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    splinter
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    Join date : 2009-10-12

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    Post by splinter Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:27 am

    Another day in my life feels like a war zone. i get up anyway/
    Acting like i have nothing to say, but in my mind internal dialogue rages on, you gotta be strong, while my other half cries out i cant hold on/
    im half the man i was meant to be, how can i do right when evil descends upon me, smiling at me fondly like its my destiny/
    i keep on reaching out 2 a dangling string,i change my route sick of misfortune which it brings. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
    another day in my life i call it nam, where your only friend is a cracked pipe we ain't got no fam, i test to see if im alive by brawling the enemy, the best is when i driveby crawling indefinatly, you call it a home i call it nam, i feel so alone, god dam. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
    waking up 2 another bad day, we all human made 4m clay/
    livng in hells guest house, cursed by my own spouse/
    bleekness fills my vision once more, my natural disposition is im rotten 2 the core/
    but in my moment of missery, i felt a perculiar energy, a white lite came down from the heavens above/
    it befriended me, in hinds sight it appeard 2 take the form of a dove/
    Piercing the darkness it edged ever closer, i had no defence, earlier i forgot my holster, my body began 2 feel tense/
    this could be my last moments was my anticipation, with no hesitation i recited the shahaada/
    i had to 1st decipher the beings words which took me by surprise.....
    although you've been looking forward to your demise all is not lost, i cum with a message brought down from above, one that teaches compassion and love/
    your life long struggle was not in vein, theres a reason for all your heartache and pain/
    you are amongst the cherished children of this rehlm, if your heart longed for physical gain we'de adore u with a helm/
    encrusted stones and a treasure lyk no other, entrusted alone because u hav a heart 2nd to none/
    this mesage is meant for you rightly, i confirm this fact with your rememberance of the almighty/
    your struggle is preparation for the final days, and while they huddle in recreation this is what i convey/
    you have the ability 2 enlighten those enslaved by there own inhibition, you are the true definition of a slave so teach them submission, i declare this 2 b your mission. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
    another day in my lyf, u call it nam, wer every persin i see, i treat as fam. i test to see if im alive by debating the enemy, the best is when i driveby creating a friend in he, u call it a home i call it nam, thus i atone believing i can!

    pls tell me what you think and dont hold back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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