A raw Freestyle !

* honestly - a freestyle ~ and I've never flowed like this before (vocally), and... to be additionally honest... it gave me a rush. There... I said it.*


You Ass is Mine in this shit - Full-Time-Comitted
Movin' fast ~ actin'-like-you "badass" ~ but-the-fact-is-YOU-ISN'T
My Game? ~ Bitchin'! ~ You shoulda'-asked-to-battle-the-"WeakestLink"-in-illestminds!
Ya' Skills-isn't-even-CLOSE-to-"Border-Ill" compared-to-Mine!
I "feather" my Bars ~ You bunchin''em Up in Couples!
I "punch" with a "Fisted" crunch to kill ya' shit, like Nothin'!
So, What The Fuck? I get thee Urge to "unbuckle" this belt
"cuff" you with the "Bronze" itself ~ I'm-Heavily-Armed ~ and "the-Harm-that's-Felt!...

Well... there you have it...

Wut's Good?, Fam!

PLZZZZZ FEEEEED !

You Ass is Mine in this shit - Full-Time-Comitted
Movin' fast ~ actin'-like-you "badass" ~ but-the-fact-is-YOU-ISN'T

I felt the punch, just proves to hit you don't need hella complex wordplay and all that jazz.
Multies flowed... Good bar.

My Game? ~ Bitchin'! ~ You shoulda'-asked-to-battle-the-"WeakestLink"-in-illestminds!
Ya' Skills-isn't-even-CLOSE-to-"Border-Ill" compared-to-Mine!

Cool wordplay, stretched the multie but it worked. Maybe use something other than he's weak you good... Ya feel me? Decent bar... Almost a filler tho.

I "feather" my Bars ~ You bunchin''em Up in Couples!
I "punch" with a "Fisted" crunch to kill ya' shit, like Nothin'!

Weak bar, end rhyme was bad. Short, flow was off pretty much a filler.

So, What The Fuck? I get thee Urge to "unbuckle" this belt
"cuff" you with the "Bronze" itself ~ I'm-Heavily-Armed ~ and "the-Harm-that's-Felt!...

Nice closer, although it coulda wrapped better and end line could been worded better. Good bar tho.

7.25/10

Aiight, yo...
I appreciate you taking the time to feed elaborately...

Thanx for the feed, Pan-.
Uppin'