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    Sign of the Archer

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    Patroxdajernt
    Fresh Meat


    Posts : 2
    Join date : 2009-09-02

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    Post by Patroxdajernt Wed Sep 02, 2009 1:57 pm

    pirat

    Knee deep in fifty caliber shotgun shells/
    Where fifty challengers lost theirselves/

    Mr. Last man standing...dead man walking with a cane/
    Luggin'this muthafuckin' oxygen tank/ the opposite way/
    Of where I'm headed/
    Complicated brain/ causes complications on the way/ for Paramedics/
    Dare to question/ My skin tone/ aerodescent/
    I shit on/ comparative suggestions/
    Get pissed off...rain down hell's fire and brimstone/
    Like tales from the treacherous/
    Can't tell me no different/
    'Cause I just won't listen/
    My mind pays no attention/
    To opinions/ contradictin'/ my existing/ belief system/
    Got 'em sifting/ through ashes/
    Cold and fridged/
    Feeling as bad as bad 'ol Pat did/ when no one noticed/ he was missing/
    And so goes/ the woes/ for the potentially gifted/
    Itchin'/ to go/ out with a bang/
    Soundin' the same/
    As my talents/ unchallenged/
    Tryin' to get outta this/ cage/
    Move about five mountains a day/
    On the way/ to where I'm goin'/
    Scared of no one/
    Dare to show up/
    At high noon/
    As time moves/
    Blind to/ the kind who/ find you/ like I do/
    Unworthy...of none concern to me/
    Can't none conduct such surgery/ verbally/
    Than I can/ my eyes have/ a shine that/ a timespan/
    Might have/ been sidetracked/ in climax/ and I can't/
    Do nothin' to save it/
    So where does that leaves us baby?
    Barrellin' blind folded through flesh impaired perils all the way to the snake pit/
    Stuck between two paychecks/ hopin' that I make it.
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    Verse2
    Intermediate Member
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    Posts : 136
    Join date : 2009-05-28
    Age : 36
    Location : blackwood,NJ

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    Post by Verse2 Fri Sep 11, 2009 11:01 am

    Can't tell me no different/
    'Cause I just won't listen/
    My mind pays no attention/
    To opinions/ contradictin'/ my existing/ belief system/
    Got 'em sifting/ through ashes/
    Cold and fridged/
    Feeling as bad as bad 'ol Pat did/ when no one noticed/ he was missing/
    And so goes/ the woes/ for the potentially gifted/
    Itchin'/ to go/ out with a bang/
    Soundin' the same/
    As my talents/ unchallenged/
    Tryin' to get outta this/ cage/
    Move about five mountains a day/
    On the way/ to where I'm goin'/
    Scared of no one/
    Dare to show up/
    At high noon/
    As time moves/
    Blind to/ the kind who/ find you/ like I do/


    ^liked da word play...u another person wit a way wit words...itz alwayz chill when i'm on here and find a dude who ain't gett~n out~spit by da girls...dat was really good homie...keep doin u...it works 4 u...lol


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