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    letting out anger!

    Ppickles
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    letting out anger! Empty letting out anger!

    Post by Ppickles Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:53 pm

    Why can’t I be good at something other then rap?
    Look at me I suck at math
    Fuck school I want to drop all that
    But I look at my future and know that I cant
    I want to trade this gift for something better
    I would love to be smart and cleaver
    Get good grades and do good in life
    but I cant so i will just write.

    Rap music has taken over and i have lost all composure
    i want to diss on all these posers
    who talk big shit before they even know ya
    Better luck then a 4-leaf clover
    See ya later nice to know ya
    gone faster then a wounded soilder
    raps are bigger then any boulder
    Hit you hard knocked out your molders
    Your as plain as a vanilla folder
    don’t try and step to me
    cuz my words are deadlier then HIV
    Lock you up with Tommy Tucker
    and he will bend you over and fuck ya
    Cuz your a bigger bitch then him
    words are spicy like Mexican
    look left and im gone again
    Hurting more then a kick to the shin
    Words hitting like a punch to the chin
    Get way drunk off this gin
    End up slicing your throat with a pen
    You use the same lines in every rhyme
    your a waste of time
    your a fucking poser
    Who steals people’s shit
    but when it comes to shove your afraid to get hit
    Your nothing but a bitch
    The kind of kid fast to snitch
    if it means you get something out of it
    crooked cops chilling at your crib
    always telling stories to the pigs
    like where you got it and where he lives
    who he works for and who is big
    setting people up just to get your fix
    find you dead on the side of the street
    all because you let your lips leak
    don’t even burry you throw you down the creek
    never shall you rest in peace!
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    Post by Verse2 Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:02 pm

    i liked da topic...and when i saw dat felt compelled 2 read it...

    and ya 1st few bar set up...i was like dis is gonna b good...lol...

    and den i got down 2 da 2nd part...and it like transformed n2 sumth~n totally diff...it was aiight...but it didn't really sound like vent~n...more like u were call~n out somebody...i liked da way u started it off..and even da beginning of da 2nd part...but u kinda lost me after like da 1st 10 bars...it was like da whole point changed...kno what i mean


    overall ya lines were aiiight...naa mean...keep doin ya thing...and jus try and stay alil more on topic...aiight homie

    keep doin ya thing


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