Im 16 young and need tips, but i got some flow

My bad emcee solidify
WHen you step to me, your rhymes say goodbye
I spit crazy beats, keepn young niggas off the streets
The whole world is crashin down, im the king wit out a crown
IM tryin to keep my life afloat but all i do is drown.

IN todays game, rappers dont make sense
Dissin back and forth, shits gettn kinda tense
But i spit fromt the heart
been doin this shit from the start
The road just started n its already to long
Kick it like cypress hill n take hit from the bong
Im trapped in the world n i cant find the lock
Surrounded by bars,watchin the clock tick tock
I got dreams bigga then biggie smalls
ill get to em when i break down these four walls
WHen it comes to spittn shit you shine,but when it comes to spittn fire i glow
Grab the doe,get to tha show, throw a kilo on the flo' n they all gonna blow
The names nick but im a real ILL TRIP
DOnt fuck wit me or you get a busted fat lip
THe economy sucks now a days
The only thing we got is dro n purple haze
I dont wanna grow up to plumb or teach
Gettn taxed by the government stickn to you like a leach
Listn to my words i aint tryin to preach, its seems like a fame is outta reach

-ILL trip hit me up 847 987 8798

Pretty good for a first spit just keep practicing and you will be much better but a good first spit

Not bad kid, but don't take advice from Ghosty, he's a low life 30 year old who needs a life, and is NOT an MC. Keep spitten tho you get that flow

i like yo style, but the rap is ok. but you could have used bigger words and bigger rhymes.ya flow is..........ok.just keep rapping-that is the only way to get better, the only way, so dont look for tips.i mean like, tips can help you speed up your rap career a little more, but the only true thing that can help you be good is practice. so practice freesetyling, and write down songs or freestyles.good to see somebody from illinois though

justice shut the fuck up you are not a fucking MC you fucking faggot

lol ok mr. everythingispitisfuckingretareded haha read that bitch