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    Im 16 young and need tips, but i got some flow

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    EMCEE ILL TRIP
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    Im 16 young and need tips, but i got some flow

    Post by EMCEE ILL TRIP on Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:33 am

    My bad emcee solidify
    WHen you step to me, your rhymes say goodbye
    I spit crazy beats, keepn young niggas off the streets
    The whole world is crashin down, im the king wit out a crown
    IM tryin to keep my life afloat but all i do is drown.

    IN todays game, rappers dont make sense
    Dissin back and forth, shits gettn kinda tense
    But i spit fromt the heart
    been doin this shit from the start
    The road just started n its already to long
    Kick it like cypress hill n take hit from the bong
    Im trapped in the world n i cant find the lock
    Surrounded by bars,watchin the clock tick tock
    I got dreams bigga then biggie smalls
    ill get to em when i break down these four walls
    WHen it comes to spittn shit you shine,but when it comes to spittn fire i glow
    Grab the doe,get to tha show, throw a kilo on the flo' n they all gonna blow
    The names nick but im a real ILL TRIP
    DOnt fuck wit me or you get a busted fat lip
    THe economy sucks now a days
    The only thing we got is dro n purple haze
    I dont wanna grow up to plumb or teach
    Gettn taxed by the government stickn to you like a leach
    Listn to my words i aint tryin to preach, its seems like a fame is outta reach

    -ILL trip hit me up 847 987 8798

    MC Ghosty
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    Re: Im 16 young and need tips, but i got some flow

    Post by MC Ghosty on Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:38 am

    Pretty good for a first spit just keep practicing and you will be much better but a good first spit
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    justiiice
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    Re: Im 16 young and need tips, but i got some flow

    Post by justiiice on Mon Apr 12, 2010 3:47 pm

    Not bad kid, but don't take advice from Ghosty, he's a low life 30 year old who needs a life, and is NOT an MC. Keep spitten tho you get that flow
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    ktw
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    Re: Im 16 young and need tips, but i got some flow

    Post by ktw on Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:54 pm

    i like yo style, but the rap is ok. but you could have used bigger words and bigger rhymes.ya flow is..........ok.just keep rapping-that is the only way to get better, the only way, so dont look for tips.i mean like, tips can help you speed up your rap career a little more, but the only true thing that can help you be good is practice. so practice freesetyling, and write down songs or freestyles.good to see somebody from illinois though

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    Re: Im 16 young and need tips, but i got some flow

    Post by MC Ghosty on Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:50 am

    justice shut the fuck up you are not a fucking MC you fucking faggot
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    Re: Im 16 young and need tips, but i got some flow

    Post by justiiice on Wed Apr 14, 2010 1:13 pm

    lol ok mr. everythingispitisfuckingretareded haha read that bitch

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