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    Bouncen On The Devil

    Lil' Slim
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    Post by Lil' Slim Mon Nov 16, 2009 3:51 pm

    [Chorus] x2
    Bounce on the devil put the pedal to the flo
    Bounce on the devil put the pedal to the flo
    Bounce on the devil put the pedal to the flo
    Bounce on the devil
    Bounce bounce on the devil


    Light's shade cast a valley of shadows,
    in my direction no reflection could balance what's hollow.
    For the lesson intercepted from a message in bottle,
    said to swallow my pride, start accepting my sorrow.
    No saviour, no caped crusader, there's no hero,
    Just a cold day in hell...it's 30 below zero.
    This world seems to be a place where minds wander,
    but no wonder, inglorious deeds turned sole blunders.
    Insomnia taking over our dreams from no slumber,
    half the population is open to closed numbers.


    a second of darkness lies within every blinking eye
    with the vision's in ties with the future's living disguise
    swimming in cries, as help denies instincts implied
    sinking in lies, it's not our world, we just visiting life
    cause friction's our pride...going head to head with truth
    reason my actions spreads its use, and sheds abuse
    tell me who, the hell can prove...we live for a reason
    own enough sins to dry out the leafs of our seasons


    My mind shutters from happiness and smiles,
    i live for a while but then lose the track of time by a mile.
    I walk alone on the concrete jungle but always seem to stumble,
    crossing borders of rejection and acception...
    ... just to have my cookie world crumble.
    My plot for exceeding expectations is minimal,
    i deprive the visible but slowly paint a visual.
    Hours turn to sand with a glass case barrier,
    i connect the dots of our future cause i am my own carrier.


    Ma first drop leave a comment, tell me what yall think
    Ppickles
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    Post by Ppickles Mon Nov 16, 2009 3:52 pm

    thats pretty ill dude

    you should get a mic
    Lil' Slim
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    Post by Lil' Slim Mon Nov 16, 2009 3:54 pm

    hahah, thanx man i got one just need the finish setting up my recording shit, and ill being doin it audio
    geezy
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    Post by geezy Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:01 pm

    Oooo thats sick brah.

    Keep it up .

    I like it.
    Lil' Slim
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    Post by Lil' Slim Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:03 pm

    thanx
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    Post by jdubbs4456 Sun Feb 07, 2010 9:56 pm

    "a second of darkness lies within every blinking eye
    with the vision's in ties with the future's living disguise"

    - favorite lines.. you really got a talent kid def keep posting more the meaning really gets across from beginning to end

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