new to the rap game

I've been reading other peoples freestyles and stuff and it looks like hella fun so ima start trying ha whack as hell but hopefully i'll get better-

theres a first time for everything so ima give a shot with a lyrical heavy swing
nothing to loose spittin the first words my brain will choose
although it will vary, always stay blazed thought of sober just scares me
3ft bong before spittin and i cleared it just barely
buds in one hand stacks in another makin a fortune its just undercover
people get at me with raps i spit back they suffer
you say you got game but i smell a bluffer
see im typin hot on the spot not like you all plannin a rap plot
got mad respect for the real guys not making a fake lyrical life filled with real lies
ima keep practicing my rap limit is the sky

Nobody better test me, Cuz i dont wanna get messy.
Especially when i step inside this bitch, dick freshly.
New lugz, give the crew hugs, guzzel two mugs.
Before i do drugs that makes me throw up like flu bugs.
True thugs, rugged unshaved messy scrubs.
Whippin 40-bottles like fucking pepsi clubs.


Stab your abdomen with a hand crafted pocketknife and spill your antacid.
Sprayed your motherfucking crib up when i ran passed it.
fuckin felon headed to hell in a headbasket.
Talkin shit will get you your girl and your man blasted.
kidnapped and slapped in a van wrapped in saran plastic.


Im going aO HARD .
fucking nikkz thinkin they can beat me.
I take out the shyte and make whole body look like a wave ''B''

yo motivations get poppin before bodies start droppin inhumane is the

name of the game i'll set u on fire an uncontrolable rage is about to emerge from

depths of these shadows and gallows is were u'll be hangin for all of eternity

while im sippin on beer at a fraternity and just to let u know im ur praternity.

listen im about up to here with ur shit talking all this nonsense and makin me

tense im about to pull out the gat and put it to ya face and make u tell me

how my rhymes are such a grace and ur gonna wail while i sip on my holy

grail. im done and about to run u up on this gun thats a wrap we ending this take

of a movie remake i am soldier numbuh 1 im feelin so good i can lift a ton with

my heart and u know im real smart so just dart outta here before shit gets real

and i have to end ya life with 1 stab of a knife so please just leave....


whatcha think?