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    Post by SpitItReal27 Sun Sep 06, 2009 8:12 pm

    Been on that independent stuff, the things that make you “one”
    That sentiment, element, that most others shun

    Hold up, let me start this right…

    I’m content with myself, driven by my own accord
    Motivation and strive are all I can afford
    My style plays on like a piano and a chord
    Several pieces come together to make a harmony restored
    But my meaning and purpose, are merely scattered on a board
    The feeling I’ve poured
    Pain leaving me beached, shored
    But still I compose to keep myself reassured
    On, I continue, evermore not ignored

    Debauchery and flagrant sin are not company at my table
    We do often mingle, but soon they’re dismissed when I’m stable
    Uneasy and hesitant are not in my nature, not if I’m able
    To hold back the transgressions and refrain from a label…

    So that’s my tall tell of how I avoid misconceptions
    The way I keep myself in compromising conditions
    The visions, decisions, blurred judgment in missions
    But still I compose to keep up with traditions

    Maybe you know more now of where I reside
    Perhaps you can decipher my message inside
    My splurging, outright trail of pride
    This is I, SpitItReal, and truth is never denied…


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    Post by Verse2 Mon Sep 07, 2009 1:23 am

    U AND ALY B GOT DIS WAY WIT WORDS I SWEAR...ITZ STR8 CRAZY...EGHHH

    man i'm bout 2 start study~n da dictionary...
    str8 walk~n read~n a thesaurus and ish...
    words don't jus b linger~n n my head like dat...
    eghhhhhhhhhhh study y'all got me on y ish
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    Post by SpitItReal27 Mon Sep 07, 2009 1:57 pm

    Y'all?? Oh ok, so now I'm in the same boat as somebody else....


    But I'm glad that at least I can keep you on your toes... keep you tryin to figure things out =) That's my mission every time...
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    Post by Verse2 Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:09 pm

    lol...trynna make it seem like i'm take~n credit from u...

    u kno u live...i ain't gotta say dat...u already kno...but y'all both have a way with words dat i jus wish i had...it drives me nuts...

    at 1st i thought it was jus a girl thing...lol...dat would jus b immaturity talk~n like dat...plus if u apply dat 2 da actual rap game...dats a no...cuz there ain't a female n da rap game dat raps like dat...itz cuz y'all are poets...it took me a minute 2 get dat...i've never been good at poetry so i'll never have dat way with words like y'all do....but u gotta read some of her stuff...you'll see what i'm say~n...she reminds me of u...

    but u already kno i think u dope...lol...datz a give~n geek
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    Post by SpitItReal27 Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:45 pm

    lol, no doubt

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