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    Aly B= Lyrical L.O.V.E.

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    Post by MizAlyB Sun Aug 16, 2009 7:11 pm

    Broadcastin live from purely vivid mind its Aly B back on to excite/
    Inciting violent waves of bright when I write of this internal light...
    Try as I might, just can't close my eyes/
    The skies are red in the morning and so I refuse to comply..I
    Decry the oppression of the people by evil treasonous forces/
    Need a clean break from regression like battered women need divorces...
    Stand up and tell em find some other sources of income/
    Cus they wanna tax the people to death and then some.....
    I've BEEN done, don't know bout yall/
    Balls 2 da walls til da tyranny falls/
    Can't mistake the spirit that whispers n calls/
    All stand togetha n tall..
    Some are straight RAW and others talk a good one/
    Each one should teach one until never again is lesson a misunderstood one...
    If ya life is a hood one, raise da fuckin L/
    Keep it reala n the streets than they do up n da cell....
    If you got a little knowledge, make sure thats what you tell/
    Speak the truth and tell it effin well...
    That's how I do...Never lie boo/
    This light green sticky sweet dream is the inspirational theme of my haiku...
    From a gleam in my eye to...expressions of love in sounds/
    Bending the words around into something abstract and profound/
    When time and space become sublime and compound/
    From your eyes on the skies to the dirt on the ground/
    Creation is there to be found...
    What u gon' spit about?The system in a nutshell/
    Not in tune with the views these news media sluts sell...
    What's hell? With leaders like these who needs enemies?/
    Not ya fam and not ya friend but they sure as shit pretend to be...
    Some find liberation over shots of Hennessy or just a beer/
    Sincere as that may be, hesitation will easily cease when the lense is clear....
    Propaganda has one purpose:FEAR.../
    Appropriate reaction must be undertaken/
    cus inaction is a mistake when the end of days is near...
    Kill the distractions with lyrical spear and watch all the HYPE dissapear...
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    Post by Mak $AY Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:16 pm

    niiiiice
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    Post by Mak $AY Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:25 pm

    but lemme show u how to spit
    cuz im a lyrical dynamo
    ego as big as a dino
    and each of my verses hit harder than a rhino
    yes im on the grapes but dun call me a wino
    on the prowl lookin for, not u but a fine hoe
    u probly confused by now, wit ya mind in a gyro
    vocal chords pack fire so im sumthin like a pyro
    die slow, broke hoe, this aint english class no mo
    put ur poetry away, u aint shakespeare
    so ill shake ur soul, til u ghost, disapear
    flow got u drownin like u fell off the pier
    and im the ravenous shark in wait
    lickin my choppers as i await the bait
    this is ur fate, i jus cleaned ur mindslate
    cant fuk wit my enlightened mindstate
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    Post by MizAlyB Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:55 pm

    Don't fuck with a force beyond your mental abilities/
    Spittin wack shit tryna chill wit me spells FUTILITY/
    Your instability and lack of humility really seem weak/
    So don't include the words I speak in your tweak/
    Off that smack and crack for a week and you geek/
    Your future's lookin bleak from my unique point of view/
    Fuckin frisco faggots we can't count the dicks you blew/
    But judgin from the skeezy little picture that you drew/
    ain't no question that its more than just a few...
    You lose, and I don't even have to try/
    Cest la vie, adios, ciao, seeya and goodbye/
    Go back to the coffeeshop and sip ya a little chai/
    Cus you SOFT.... despite the fact u like your tofu fried.../
    Should've complied with the vibe/
    instead of actin snide/ but when you gone
    they gon' say thats why you died/
    Rappers like actors are a thorn in hiphop's side/
    Ya shoulda stayed under the rock where ya reside...
    Twisted Evil
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    Post by MizAlyB Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:57 pm

    Its all LOVE but don't tread on me bitch...I gets ILL....
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    Post by Verse2 Sun Aug 23, 2009 5:58 pm

    ahhh...a philospher...a diamond n da rough...1st off let me say i respect ya craft...and now i have come 2 add...lol


    Are we really dat different/
    humans gradually drift~n/
    quit assume~n/
    there is nuff~n we can do/
    when we got voices LISTEN/
    sooo tired of handcuffs/
    doomed sentenced 2 prison/
    we all know right from wrong/
    at least sense da premonition/
    a world of chaos/
    where bills are never paid off/
    ig'nant people say~n i'm on da same shit dat dey on/
    dey young and dumb/
    type 2 sign their full name n crayon/
    da world worse~ns/
    turn on ya t.v. 2 watch a seyance/
    everybodies throw~n darts/
    maneuver thru wit caution/
    explain~n why no one ever hits da target/
    marksman?/
    naa/
    we're all fail~n by huge margins/
    if aliens do exist/
    we're easily conquered by martians/
    so what's a bless~n/
    point me n dat direction/
    cuz even da church takes our few dollars n2 possession/
    i'm sorry god/
    i answer 2 (U) n my confession/
    not some preacher/
    who is discrettly~secretly~molest~n/
    racisms back hard/
    now how is dat y'all/
    like we ain't kill~n ourselves enough n our backyard/
    i always liked 2 belive dat we could achieve/
    dat we could dance/
    without stand~n on our partners feet/
    or learn 2 teach/
    but no one has learned any parts of speech/
    they're all drop~outs/
    all they know
    is parts of street/
    or maybe avenues/
    Aly i'm jus pass~n thru/
    i kno u govern~n dis area/
    and i ain't mad atchu/
    do ya thing/
    Where's Real when u need her/
    i would luv it if u could only jus meet her/


    lol....nuff~n serious...jus was bored...and stumbled on ya page...and saw dat u were good...keep it up...ur 1st rate ma...i might have 2 stop thru occasionally if u write like dat...lol


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    Post by daniel872 Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:41 pm

    hey alyB ur good chica....
    i like how u spit...very ...how can i say it....articulate with ur words....yea thats it...
    theres not many girls who spit....but u blew me away, the way u write is....poetic in a way...
    props to u...
    keep writing id like to see more of ur stuff...




    now pass da mike, as recite my take on life,
    i see moms struggling to strife,
    gettin up at five, as a drunken husband begins to strike,
    because hes mad an his day went bad,
    kids hate him an dont even call him dad,
    an the wife is sad,
    trying to keep the family together & forever,
    no matter how hard the pain is,
    to sustain this,
    an its breakin her heart,
    i only ask why is life so hard...??,
    but with the pull of a trigger u can die so rapidly,
    if only life were so easy,
    i see a kid gettin bullied at school,
    they use him as a tool,
    an cuts his wrists an smokes weed to make pain go away,
    trying to survive for the next day,
    as he begins to pray,
    that tomorrow he wont be the prey,
    but in a later day,
    they find his body in the river,
    cops call it homicide,
    but naw it was a suicide,
    so horrible the way he died,
    leaving his family scarred,
    yet again i ask why is life so hard...?
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    Post by daniel872 Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:44 pm

    props to MizAlyB...
    the way u put lines an words together is tight....
    an like verse2 said.....philosopher
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    Post by MizAlyB Wed Sep 02, 2009 9:57 pm

    I appreciate that... yall are pretty tight yall selves...especially the two of ya that came real and correct. Feelin that....chalk up another small victory for hiphop when true artists get a chance to beautifully collide... MAD LOVE...
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    Post by Verse2 Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:02 pm

    no doubt...every artist needs 2 b assured every now and again...dat their artwork has meaning...and dat da world doesn't jus look at it as paint on a canvas...or melodic spoken words on a melody...u're good ma...u gotta drop some more knowledge on em...dis site needs more like u...alot of these so called "hip hop heads" could learn a lesson or 2 from u...i kno i could...lol.......gun talk...and gay jokes ain't hip hop...ya way of rap gets back 2 da essence...dats why i had 2 stop thru again...not D ride~n or noth~n...jus speak~n real while i'm here...and i appreciate da respect u gave back...well let me not jus talk alot of hot gas...and leave a drop dis a rap site after all...lol


    See da distinction n da portrait/
    all da deffintion dats centered around da fortress/
    (da) image is rather awkward/
    da money isn't good/
    but da vision is what i'm marked wit/
    paint brush is vivid/
    but dis pen's jus what i talk wit/
    dat there's da collesium/
    over there's da mausuleum/
    behind boths da devil's advocate/
    nod if u see em/
    u color blind den jus let a brotha kno/
    some of it's transparent/
    used invisible marker and subtle strokes/
    over there's da bing/
    and back there's da crack house/
    notice da drug dealer and da fiend dats passed out/
    da pitbulls fight~n/
    it's broken up by da pigs/
    and da last animal trapped in da squad car is Vick/ (lol)
    shittttt/
    dens da lil girl watch~n da prosti/
    pimp wit da cane/
    wit da new york shades/
    and his posse/
    his hands out/her hands up n her pocket/
    and da boyz got dey eyes bout 2 pop outta da sockets/
    black kid walk~n da strip listen~n 2 foxxy/
    few white kids follow~n him bout 2 box em/
    denz da niggaz follow~n dem bout 2 ox them/
    and da cops sit n da drop wit tasers ready 2 shock them/~all
    dis guy wit da ball/
    dis time next fall/
    has a chance 2 dance n da NBA play~offs/
    cuz he don't take a day off/
    but his best friends fuck~n up/
    push~n weight/
    n da wrong place/
    mess~n dey slates uppp/



    eghhhh...gett~n bored wit dis...so i'ma drop dat there...felt like it was goin down town anyway...lol


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