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    poetic freestyle

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    Mak $AY
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    poetic freestyle

    Post by Mak $AY on Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:26 am

    upon the clouds i am sitting
    and other minds i am outwitting
    my head has become hollow
    so dont bother to follow
    a fellow rendered mellow
    melodical like a cello
    goodbye but before hello
    goodmornin before good night
    now its night time and u have lost ur sight
    the dark blankets our eyes
    and trips out our highs
    like my shoes werent tied
    into the tide i will ride
    into the horizon
    squad deep like verizon
    dro i chief and im huntin the bison

    SpitItReal27
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    Re: poetic freestyle

    Post by SpitItReal27 on Sat May 30, 2009 11:47 am

    Gotta admit, that was very nice...

    While you are in the clouds
    Outwitting those below
    Perhaps I stay on the ground
    To keep the balance I show
    The reason no one follows
    The reason no one goes
    Is not because you're better
    Instead you lack in what you compose
    The light you claim to take
    The blindness others suffer
    I think you've been mistakened
    And use your lines as a buffer
    But if we shall stay on topic
    And speak of rhyming as the day
    Only one can be darkness
    And the other light of today

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