ima new rapper(mostly freestyler)

this is my first freestyle.dont comment bad stuff bout it cuz i aint neva freestyled in my life.here goes.:


ima animal
phenomenal
mo den wat u hataz will ever be.
im gon be famous wit no publicity
like jeezy,i put on for my city
i got so many hataz but im gon let em sleep
didnt u know kt own da streetz
my hataz stick to me like a leech
i can freestyle off any beat.
i handle hataz like a freestyle beast,cuz im da best
u makin me sleepy so ima take a rest
u wanna box,step in da ring
kt is da swaggaking.

p.s.: who ready fa obama?fuck da drama,im just trying to get alot of numbers(money niggaz).but still gotta get a diploma.time fa kt to stop rhymin,i dont got dimesi get moneyno time fa hataz they waste ur timeand think its funny
bytheway in case u aint know dimes rhymes wit time,.money rhymes wit funny.

can u rap hell naw
u need more than jus a lil practice
spittin out needles so u can call me cactus
now u lookin like u at the chiropractor
u are not a problem, u r not a factor
jus a fukin actor, pretendin to rap
pop this weak ass nigga like he was bubble wrap
now u deflated and by evryone hated
flowin so crazy it need to be sedated
im jus get pumped
my ego's gettin inflated

Mak $AY wrote:can u rap hell naw
u need more than jus a lil practice
spittin out needles so u can call me cactus
now u lookin like u at the chiropractor
u are not a problem, u r not a factor
jus a fukin actor, pretendin to rap
pop this weak ass nigga like he was bubble wrap
now u deflated and by evryone hated
flowin so crazy it need to be sedated
im jus get pumped
my ego's gettin inflated

nigga dat was my first fuckin freestyle damn!!!get yo hatin ass outta here

i dont need to practice
u a cactus
well im like god so call me mr.holy baptiste
u keep sayin im acting but nigga dis my life
u said i cant rap but im mo den aiight
my spits stab u in da gut like a killa knife
u lossed too many times,3 strikes,ur out
now its bout time u learned wat im all about
u say im actin,i know im real so i aint gon pout
u said im weak,maybe u aint here me,maybe i gotta shout
have u reading dis freestyle wit a bad feelin like ouch
u got nursery rhymes,but im pullin out new shit like a kangaroo pouch
i got so many rhymes u can use em to build a house
u da outcast of da freestyle scene like a tiny mouse
cuz no one's listenin to ya
u garbage
im hungry fa freestyle battles like a bad starvage
or betta yet a cravin
u finna sorrenda i see da white flags so get to wavin
my freestyles hit u harder den a sidewalk pavement
bitch ass im ktw

my freestyle go so wild
up but never riled
u aint a thug u's a child
barz the sickest ever compiled
piled up is my dough
i got more than a baker
wrestlin status
kill ya w a neck breaker
shinin more than a jewelry maker
shake ya ass up
like u was nothin but a salt shaker
now u bein buried
call me the undertaker
talk bout blowin tree
i got more than an acre
ur jus a bitch a liar a faker
spit so epic
so now call me movie maker
so come on kt gimme ya best shot
u's a stain on chi-town
runnin aroun wit an imaginary crown
bitch im the talk of the town
lyrically im way too profoun
i just cut ya ass up
like i was wearin a surgical gown

Wow, now i know u realli all gay,
u can sit here and type all this bullshit all day
I bet while u typin u havin phone sex
and u mailin each other photos of u and ur pecks
and u guys is jerkin off in ur basements,
just pretendin to be gangstas and can't afford to pay the rent
u mothafuckas gotta go get laid by sum women
Most guys like bitches, u guys like fellas,
u come home and dress like cinderella
in ur house, u all lyk wearin bras
and u lyk to get massages at an all male spa

damn Mak $ay u straight murdered kt
that was ill yo

jb c
c all u do is give bj
ur jus a lost soul gone astray
quit rappin faggot go dance ballet
amongst the trees and i aint talkin a chalet
dont need a job i gets my pay
everytime ur girls comes aroun
she pay before she play wit mak say
shes like the cap on my glue stick
jumpin on it like a pogo stick
and after im dun i tell the ho go trip
u kno y this fag likes kissin her
cuz he taste my cum on her lip