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Freestyle Rap

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    First Spit - JesteR

    JesteR
    JesteR
    Fresh Meat


    Posts : 1
    Join date : 2009-03-18
    Location : Shanghai, China

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    Post by JesteR Wed Mar 18, 2009 8:06 am

    Introducing myself, I'm a teenage prodigy
    I'm just deluding myself, and there's no verbal remedy
    I try to act tough, but on the streets it's for show
    I gotta step to the bounce, till I can't no mo'
    So I smoke an ounce, and drift back lazily
    dangerously, but you have no idea it's me.
    I live in Shanghai, with the rude Chinese
    There's no reason why, I just do as I please,
    Think I'm a sleaze, got legs like Christopher Reeves,
    Shoot holes in your sleeves, watch a mothaf**ker bleed.
    My business is predicted to make at least a hundred grand,
    equal funds to the amount Bush gave to the Taliban,
    I'm terrorized by nightmares, like Al'Qaeda going to the US man,
    Those soldiers of doom, eternal imprisonment inside of a tomb.
    I leave ya soaking in the dust, and you're dying all alone,
    Leave ya there overnight, say good-morning to the chrome,
    Get f**ked up on substance, illusions in your own home,
    Death under influence, powerdrill to your dome.

    ~JesteR
    17years
    Any feedback is appreciated
    /Peace Cool
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    InFamous
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    Posts : 51
    Join date : 2009-05-11

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    Post by InFamous Mon May 11, 2009 6:43 am

    Your buisness is looking bland your never gonna come near 100 grand
    I leave you in the sand face down in the gutter i take yo bread and butter
    So lose the aditude or your gonna get bruised up screwed up and spewed up

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