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yo, i bin writing lyrics for a while now
never realy shared them with anyone so i thought id write a new one and put it up
see what ya think
comment back
peace

Ive got to say something just incase im right/
My feelings usualy stay locked up tight/
But not tonight/
Ive always wanted to be a rapper/
But ive never taken the risk/
To scared of people thinking who the fuck is this/
Scared of being a washed up lyricist thats easy to diss/
So mom im gonna make it/
I dont care if you approve/
Ill do everythin in my power/
Just to make it the truth/
So dont worry mom, im a rapper with a plan/
Ill make my way with cash in my hand/
I dont need no studio that aint the way/
Real raps from the street, fuck eminem and dre/

So its two years later/
And what two years it has been/
I still havent made it/
But thats cuz i havent been seen/
So wait till they get a taste of what im realy like/
Ill get up and going like first learning to ride my bike/
Kept falling at first but now i can do it/
Now im having a hard time but i no ill get through it/
So just have faith mom i dont have any regrets/
Just dont make me a son that you try your best to forget/
You should see it out here mom, just on going protests/
Ive hade my fair share of concerts/
Just not yet been noticed/

yo bro, work on this some more. its hella tight tho. while writing this write someother shit. write for a lady. i wrote for this girl in my class and she loved it. i write tons of stuff everyday in class and its good but i know i can do better so i just throw it away. practice makes perfect. and dont diss on anyone if you dont wanna be dissed. like eminem and dre.