I'm NEW and ready to SPEW..

Yo i'm ready to flow like an average joe
I'm new at the freestyle just so you know
I'm white but I'm tryin to spit like a hose
You beef with me haters i could break yo nose
Come up on me yo ima bust yo dome
The gun chrome could make you go like foam
Yes i'm white but don't think I can't fight
I got a right hand that could leave you layin all night
That gat I got could make you see the light
If i'm threatened man losing your life you just might

Meh I don't know I wrote that in like 5 minutes.



Haha wow and I wanna get better at freestyling for fun. I'm white, 18, I listen to lil wayne, Eminem, and hell other rap music and have been for a few years now. I've only been doing freestyle for a year but i'm just starting to get better and I thought coming to a forum like this would get me better at spitting. So work with me and help and don't make fun cause i'm a n00b. Damn I wish I started doing this when I was 15!

man you got to have confidence!

keep at it and dont get mad if people diss on you its gunna happen man

zanitari bout to get played like atari
ima rap beast, so u on a safari
lion king, call me mufasa
me u shall dread jus like a rasta
puffin on that barley like my name was marley
watch me go full throttle, gimme the car key
fuk a red light, i wont cease to go
and the dough in the bank got so much yeast
it wont cease to grow
blowin away this white boy like a line of snow
come walk on the dark side, like anakin
u jus a fukin phony, a rap mannequin

This dude zanitari, is a rhymin fairy,
dudes cant bare me, i bloody beats like mary,
dont get lairy, cos u cant compare me,
to dirty cunts, cos i spit sanitary,
mak aint scary, his bars is dairy,
and im lactose intolerant,
im the posterboy of this forum,
yall should make me a monument,
these cats mimic me, cant mirror me,
i am the metaphor, you're just similies,
you cant touch me lyrically, let alone physically,
i cant take you clowns seriously, you're weak like your capillaries,
theres no denying my ability,
lyrically, my artillery, be killin you visciously,
your weak drops are killin me,
i'm gettin so sick of em,
one wanabe rapper after the next,
take your pick of em,
i've seen more lyrical talent out in twickenham.
HA.

lemme decimate spence
wit my spit so intense
u jus a pussy i cud smell ya fragrance
im too bright for ya eyes
the rap prince make ya wince
and i spit so nasty my mouth needs a rinse
sickest ever since the swine flu
and since u jus a pussy i will dine u
hear my lyrics divine make u have to resign
turn in ur mic cuz ur lyrics r in decline
my vocab, u cannot refine
thas y me and ur bitches bodies intertwine
not off that wine, but im off that grape
and now this pussy is yellin rape
im the shit so u kno i go ape
so fukin high that the sky i scrape
i rap in blue ray, u jus a broken casette tape

This goes out to spence who really needs to learn
Your messin with a beast, I'll make you squirm like a worm
It's my turn to show you that I am unmatched
I'm hittin you with words because you can't catch
Your dealin with a proffesional, I'm on another rank
I drown you with my flow so you simply just sank
At the bottom of the ocean that's where you belong
You have a long way to and you've been doin it all wrong

i spit flames like dragons wit a bad case of heart burn
I'll leave yo ass scard like a str8 guy in in gay porn
got tatts all up n dowm my arm i swear this true
and i got a special lil place for after i murder you
i can stash ur body there and no one will locate
your rottin bloody corpse man isnt that great
commint the perfect crime and never do time

Mike is actually a bitch, suckin pussy all night
Fuckin transvestite lovin these lesbians, this fool's a dike
Don't pass him the mic cuz he'll stick it up his clit
This is a freestyle battle not some gay porn shit
By the way you flow you sound like a rapist
I'll put a shot between your eyes and now your faceless
Leavin you headless just like the guillotine
And rob your pockets, You got no more green

crap after crap, thas all i read
now lemme show u my limelight greed
cuz im outshinin u, im diamond ur zirconia
u jus a fukin outkast and i aint talkin stankonia
fuk wit my and i might bank on ya
fuk wit my guerrilas, and we'll send the tank on ya
on doja, so ova like i lost the game
but its all good cuz skill wise we r not the same
u lame, faced turnd down due to shame
jus a fukin square, so ima put u in a frame
in this battle whole crowd cheerin for me
like u at an away game