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    MC Ghosty
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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by MC Ghosty on Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:13 pm

    yes but rap battling is not storytelling, it's using punchlines. Trying to be the best

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by The Rave on Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:16 pm

    Well your words are harder to stay tuned to. Because nothing's going on. This isn't vocal. You've had time to think.

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by The Rave on Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:18 pm

    You're a punch liner. I'm a story teller. Let's see which prevails, shall we.

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by MC Ghosty on Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:19 pm

    it's called text battling for a reason. You've done nothing but waffle on. Every single post, the rhyme scheme is the same. You can never create a punchline, you aren't hitting harder enough like I said before it's called text battling for a reason. I think you need to learn what a punchline is before you try to battle.

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by MC Ghosty on Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:21 pm

    You a storyteller? I thought I was looking at words that was typed by someone with special needs

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by The Rave on Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:27 pm

    I have different views is all. It's not an exact science, wouldn't you say?

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by The Rave on Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:28 pm

    Dude, you have no idea how special. Just looking for an outlet, and interaction, I guess.

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by MC Ghosty on Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:31 pm

    I'm not being rude or harsh. The topic title is rap battle.

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by The Rave on Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:59 pm

    Okay Ghosty wants a battle when faced with he who has special needs.
    The need's to be greedy while I trample everything he sees.
    Don't fuck with the vulnerable, honor's gone when I'm all on ya'.
    No shrink can get me off ya', cause you've shown where you open up.

    You breathe that wack shit, so I rip your nose off of ya'.
    In need of plastics. So they ship ya' to California.
    Hold on I'm not done, you've got a sadist hot on your ass.
    You come from the doc., and you're wearing the Jackson mask.

    So I rip it off, and you tell me, "No Rave, Punch Line!"
    And I say, "You're right. Have you heard the one bout Princess Di?"
    And you say, "Dude you so sick. What the hell have I got myself into?"
    I say, "Fuck you asshole! Don't interrupt me till I am through."

    Ghosty then cries like bitch, saying, "I just wanted to freestyle!
    But you're wiling out. Can I put my mask back on now!?"
    I say, "No boy, you're looking good. All decked out for Hollywood.
    Scar nose's the new Underwood. All good for the new Tales From The Hood."





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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by The Rave on Wed Feb 01, 2012 3:28 pm

    Verse 1
    The filthy minded, psychotic rhymer's
    coming for the Ghosty. He's next in the line up.
    His time's up. And I'm feeling frisky.
    I'm needing me a new hoe boy to get busy with.

    He knows that he's into that homo fag shit,
    but he won't admit to it, till I let 'em have it.
    Always seemed so damned hardcore when spittin'.
    Then my drawers hit the floor, and he started sniffin'.

    But shit he's got a repulsive od--or.
    I said, "Wait nigga. Hold up, man you gotta roll up.
    And take this," as I handed him soap and scope,
    and told gurgle your throat and make good use of the soap.

    Damn, who would've thought he could be so unrefined?
    You know, dressed so nice, clean cut, mannered when we he dined.
    It just goes to show, you never know bout these rap boys.
    Behind closed doors, you'll find they've got inflamed hemorrhoids.

    Hook
    That's what I found out when fucking with the Ghosty. (What?)
    Fucking with the Ghosty (What?) Fucking with the Ghosty. (Uh Huh)
    That's what I found out when fucking with the Ghosty. (What?)
    Fucking with Ghosty (What?) M - C - Ghosty.

    That's what I found out when fucking with the Ghosty. (What?)
    Fucking with the Ghosty (What?) Fucking with the Ghosty. (Uh Huh)
    That's what I found out when fucking with the Ghosty. (What?)
    Fucking with Ghosty (What?) M - C - Ghosty.

    Verse 2
    I thought fuck it, I'd give him another shot.
    He said he had recovered from his anal blood clot.
    "So no more medicine?" I had asked, and he said, "Yeah."
    So we danced, and we walked everywhere.

    Went back to his place, and he went to his safe,
    and he took out a whip, some chains and a cane.
    "What you gon' do with that?" I screamed in utter rage,
    then he took a gun from the safe and came my way.

    Oh, this might be fun, I thought unto myself,
    then he chained himself to the bed and screamed for help.
    Oh Holy Moses it's time to hit road, I gassed to the door.
    And met the damn po-pos! Oh No!


    Hook
    That's what I found out when fucking with the Ghosty. (What?)
    Fucking with the Ghosty (What?) Fucking with the Ghosty. (Uh Huh)
    That's what I found out when fucking with the Ghosty. (What?)
    Fucking with Ghosty (What?) M - C - Ghosty.

    That's what I found out when fucking with the Ghosty. (What?)
    Fucking with the Ghosty (What?) Fucking with the Ghosty. (Uh Huh)
    That's what I found out when fucking with the Ghosty. (What?)
    Fucking with Ghosty (What?) M - C - Ghosty.


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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by MC Ghosty on Wed Feb 01, 2012 3:42 pm

    Princess Di? Get with the times.

    I dont play games. Today Ill spray hot flame, and stop these gay lames
    I create pain. You couldnt even go off track even if you were stray trains

    Im contemplatin, debatin on whenever not to be hatin on his so-called ill flows
    While my punchlines go through pussies like females masturbating with dildos

    I grab the mic, I know I'm gonna murk this until I metaphorically close his curtain
    I fuck with insane sounds, you gonna get laughed at more than a clown at a circus

    Murdered more children than abortions, I shrink these bitches faster than slim fast portions
    I've just entered the building, he's more gassed up than a german shower performence

    Look I could kill the entire audience, still get an applause for my ill metaphors
    Ive got more skill; ya couldnt even cut into the game with a pair of chainsaws

    Tales from the hood?

    I'm the mean machine, youve only touched the hood when brushing past a limousine
    I'm a dope fiend, you ain't even close to me while I deliver bars like a vending machine

    Princess Di? Do I care? I'll watch as you crumble into the ground like the twin towers
    You spit weak shit, come on who burnt the white house down, fool I got insane powers

    I'









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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by MC Ghosty on Wed Feb 01, 2012 3:56 pm

    I'll flame, maim, shame and name this lame. Acting like's hanging out with hard dude
    Me and you? I'm the illest in the game, you got more imagination than single cartoon

    I'll fuck up faster than tornado disaster, but your ass needs to watch it before I blast ya
    You are acting touch, standing up. Bitch you normally can't get any heat, just llike Alaska

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by The Rave on Wed Feb 01, 2012 4:20 pm

    The weekend starts here, your boy has got to go away.
    Keep the shallow shit pumping for a couple of days.
    One Fag Out.

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by MC Ghosty on Thu Feb 02, 2012 7:00 am

    All the punchlines Im flaunting got me embarrassing this vegetable
    You rap like you got at least six figures, thats just Star Wars collectibles

    Im ahead in this race, cuz ya face is a disgrace, ya momma made mistakes
    Im about to blaze ya, climbing the ladder, only in that game with snakes

    Im known as a hot threat, if you dont believe thats just fucking nonsense dude
    Im outta this world, but to battle me? I think you should change your concept too

    When I spit, I spit the dopest rhymes. You need to watch out for these warning lines
    Im swarming like flies, Tetris is the only time you get a scoreboard for forming lines

    I rock the underground, your storytelling doesnt matter, especially since that shits fake
    Youll never have a dope post or quote, until you allow me to ghost-write your mix tapes

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by Jnexus on Thu Feb 02, 2012 10:00 am

    Just saying hi, ill join this battle soon guys, Peace


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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by Kastaway on Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:47 am

    i'll admit that mc ghostly got some skills, but im here to prove at least half my rhymes are ill,
    you newbie fuckers better go pop some pills,
    that way you can suppress all your childhood memories,
    like the first time you let a guy suck on your mammaries,
    im as badass as the products from sony,
    while y'all sit at home fucking your hand cuz you lonely,
    you write a bitch rap and you try to go ahead and out do me,
    bitch, go drink a jamba juice smoothie.
    I got a fucking gun in my hand and i'll pull the trigger smoothly,
    nothing can hold me back, not even when a bitch tries to soothe me,
    you walk hesitantly like your a prison parolee.
    well i chill out just and start chuggin some whisky,
    i may only be 16 but hell i spit shit so quickly,
    i keep corpses in my basement to admire sickly,
    and i always make sure my rhymes end with cruelty.
    so i hope you realize that dissing me is full of difficulty,
    but all of you fuck dudes, you know your guilty.

    keep bouncing my niggas bounce

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by ExCeed on Sat Mar 24, 2012 6:46 pm

    If you don't like me, you can change your station
    If I don't like you, now, change that nation
    Bitch i'm talkin out of here, space station
    And bitch i'm talkin fast, wave at your procrastination.
    There's signs when I rhyme like pi and sin it's the sign of the times
    New man in his prime new 1 in the room so now there's a new #2 too
    argue with 3 what he gotta proove
    smarter than you, more stubborn too.
    Speak soft and carry it big, I do one of the two.
    I stay humble, even though I maintain the wealth.
    I put my technology on a carpenter made shelf the spark that I make starts
    The dark which was made white, the left that was read right
    Can make one ponder all night.

    I don't talk much anymore, do my actions lie?
    Feelin kind of militant, where my factions lie?
    Some people spillin it, I don't ask them why.
    Light at the end of the tunnel? That's that moth to the light, aight?
    I'll still be left when i'm right.

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by The Rave on Tue Apr 03, 2012 10:52 pm

    I'm that faggot that has had it with all you half rapping asses,
    looking drastic without classics, needing classes or some glasses
    to at last see it's me who's bright like the 4th of July,
    and as high as ever like the Burj Khalifa in Dubai.

    Call me Cyclops, cause I'll burn you up with one glance of my eyes,
    Or Magneto as I shut shit down with the strength of my mind.
    In one rhyme or ninety lines, you can spit bullshit all you want.
    I stay blunt, not Young Buck, but still teach you how to stunt.

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by ExCeed on Wed Apr 04, 2012 4:32 pm

    The Rave wrote:I'm that faggot that has had it with all you half rapping asses,
    looking drastic without classics, needing classes or some glasses
    to at last see it's me who's bright like the 4th of July,
    and as high as ever like the Burj Khalifa in Dubai.

    Call me Cyclops, cause I'll burn you up with one glance of my eyes,
    Or Magneto as I shut shit down with the strength of my mind.
    In one rhyme or ninety lines, you can spit bullshit all you want.
    I stay blunt, not Young Buck, but still teach you how to stunt.

    Your bars are shit, flush because the lines should be on top.
    you got no wit, make EYE CONTACT with a MUSIC SHOP
    It's ok though, we keep your comical ass around.
    Go back into your bag, the one that drowned.

    Ppl call you cycplos, when you go clubbin'
    You already know I'm top dog you must feel threatened
    When they play "let's get retarded", you're already reppin'
    Please the need is for you at 7'11

    Please, My mind is sharp enough to cut through fake
    Mind sharp enough to cut through great
    Heart on a stake, head on a plate
    How doth the two still conversate?

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by Kastaway on Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:31 pm

    well you see im endowed with a gift, in a rap battle my way it will shift. try to talk shit and you'll end up with more than a fat lip. inside of you i will unload a whole clip. you'll hit your head in the shower and they'll say you "slipped". im flowing with the wind because im ripped. smoke over 30 bowls before i fill you with bullet holes, or maybe ill reap you of your soul. i got demon blood flowing through my veins, im a creature formed from the flames. im the place where you put your shame. im a rabid beast you cannot tame. i foam from the mouth like a rabbid dog, i first started killing in prague. i've drank and i've fucked and i've been bad lucked. and ask your girl my dicks been sucked. so why not back down while you still can, because your a bitch and im the man.

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by RonG on Thu Apr 05, 2012 5:15 pm

    I've gotta admit after readin these raps
    I've got mad respect for TheRave, and that is a fact
    I feel bad for any wanna-be rapper
    Goin up against him, he's a beast, runnin laps
    Round these pussies, who rap just for a joke and a laugh
    Like MC Ghostly, EXceed, and even KAST-
    taway
    This is RonG here, my rhymes are like tacks
    Millions of daggers stickin outta the backs
    Of these faggots who thrive, when they honestly lack
    What is needed to beat it, and rain fire on the track
    No I aint dick-eatin so hop of my cock
    I am to rap, what Elvis is to rock
    Well, I'm out, just makin a pit-stop
    So tell your mom I'll be over, dont act like you're shocked

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by MC Ghosty on Fri Apr 06, 2012 1:22 pm

    You are all fucking pussies


    I still take drastic measures against pussies, you hold nothing but plastic treasures
    Im majestic and fantastic, you will always be lightweight like floating magic feathers

    In this battle there's too much pressure, when I just kick it sicker, quicker and fresher
    I'm dangerous like contaminated liquor, Ill hit you with so many signs like wild protester

    I'm like a loaded chamber, because I'm going after this young pussy like a child molester
    I'm sick and ill when I kick it, you are nothing but a student while I'm master professor

    My words are known to hurt. I'll eat an this fool's heart as soon as the first verse can start
    I'll beat this dude so badly. You ain't sick. He still couldn't even seen large flows on Noah's Aark

    I'm throwing half-ass papers at this wack, crap hater as Im the eliminator in his rap battle simulator
    I'm the terminator, hyped up. This dude's raps are more gassed up than a Hitler's finest gas chamber

    When I come through I'll turn you and your whole crew into mince my two feet on so-called elite defence
    Why don't you piss on a electric fence? I'm the best, camping's the only time you've ever been intense

    You ain't spittin classics, your dumber than the Human Torch playing with gasses and matches
    Fuck what your sayin. I'm ill when I'm sprayin while battlin you I come out with nothin but scratches

    I'm lyrically sick on a track, isn't it extremely funny how much you dickride The Rave on this page
    My words will have you buried in a grave, even with sticks of dynamite you couldn't blow up the stage

    So leave this website and do your research. I'll have your blood stained and dripping down by t-shirt
    Enough bullshit, you little bitch. My words will circle around you just like the words on a wordsearch





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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by ExCeed on Sat Apr 07, 2012 9:49 am

    My logic is a weapon, amongst a society tainted.
    The ancient wisdom, lost in translation
    I made my pavement, much frustration, it took much patience,
    Then I found it, excalibur, the sword of the ancients.

    So you see you're off track, like a christmas present on easter
    My flow sicker than additive beasters__
    that turn to smoke, and give brain teasers.
    Your flow's strain weaker, you short circut speakers
    I bring life to the mic like angel's wings on sneaks
    If somebody got a problem with that carry it through what you speak.

    Number one in this place is where I think my lines is at,
    You think you the one to beat me? Minus signs for that.

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by JayWilliams2011 on Fri Apr 20, 2012 3:02 am

    Yall should stop rapping,
    cause all yall wrapping is my chicken sandwich,
    yall suck ass,
    lets leave yall back in the past,
    where we all started to rap when parts broke up in a cast,
    leaving you to suffer, bleeding next to jason's hockey mask,
    nuclear bombings came in to destory,
    leaving you with a political bill saying avoid,
    you pricks just bitch shit I tried to be not annoyed,
    but I could hear the loud noise,
    I tried to say STFU BITCH and play with your toy,
    how can all yall be bad if you not a big boy,
    you look fuckin skinnier then McCoy,
    well fuck that I rather sit back locked up in rehab,
    better then sitting here typing getting arm flab,
    you can try to stab me with your words with a knife jab,
    but you can put all that shit on my life tab,
    cause I don't give two fucks if you are mad.

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    Re: never ending rapp batle

    Post by Chill Ocheeno on Wed May 16, 2012 10:16 am

    you niggaz wanna go line for line, well im inclined/
    to rip you wack niggaz rapz, with a couple of lines/
    wut im hearing... bullshit rhymez bout a couple of nines/
    i think you need to step ya caliber up, b4 you go fuckin wit mines/
    THISis50.. datz the size of these shellz so you better get ya fuckin head rite/
    i bet 2 quarters niggas thought i was talkin bout the fuckin website/
    jay williams? but nothin bout ya name say you're a baller/
    joined 4/20 wit 4 posts.. to me that just says you're a staller //
    i hope u think you got a bad bitch, mad sick.. suckz dick and use mad spit,
    cuz i might fuck her...and say "get da fuck out" when she leaves her number and ask me if ima call her//
    1-900-real nigga,hitme on a touch tone nigga/
    press 1 if you got a gun and you ready to bust chrome nigga/
    if not, press 9-1 and another 1/
    cuz i kill alot of niggaz, and you just became another 1


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