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    lil poetry
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    Post by lil poetry Thu Aug 21, 2008 4:50 am

    He’d never been in love before so he poured his heart out
    overwhelmed with emotions his heart burning, on flames
    she’d taken what she needed so his heart she ripped and stomped it out
    she forgot about his him when she was in the clubs out and about
    all she ever wanted and was always looking for were the famous ones
    she just wanted to have fame attached to her name
    using him to get wat she wanted she played him like a game
    around people in the hood she be like i love you boo
    but that changed when she got hitched she told him fuck you
    you don’t know me and cant treat me like am suppose to be
    you’ll always be in the gutter but im a star set to shine
    and when the timer goes of the world will soon be mine
    but she was naive to believe this dream she could achieve
    how long was she gonna be with the rap star
    he only saw her as a ho so the relationship fell
    and as predicted the sex addicted rap star got with another ho
    her dream of fame hadn’t even exploded let alone ignited
    but because of her the world was set to witness the birth of a genius
    a rumour so powerful all the big money makers were getting excited
    record companies, producers, fans and haters anticipated and waited
    this was gonna be the biggest party of the summer so everybody was invited
    everyone wanted to see the rumoured legend born
    cause after his girl left, packed her bags and said im gone
    the young boy held firm, got his shit together and held firm
    he’d worked hard so he wasn’t gonna let anybody ruin his life
    let alone a two timing, gold digging, pathetic excuse of a wife
    he wanted to get out of the gutter so bad he held the pen and showed true dedication
    there were times when he was tempted to lay the pen down but he showed true concentration
    to him this wasn’t just about being regarded as an artist
    he packed his bags and started his quest all around the world
    all four corners of the earth: north, south, east and west
    he wanted everyone to acknowledge him as the best of the best
    as the rumours faded down times started to get hard
    everybody was spitting about guns and cars they never had so gigs he couldn’t get
    everyone said he couldn’t and will never make it so against him the whole world bet
    he talked about what he knew and never swore so what would it take to get him on B.E.T
    he’d lived his life in the gutter and just wanted for once to be the V.I.P, the game’s M.V.P
    he was told many better than you have tried and most of them have failed
    many better than you have tried and most of them have packed and bailed
    but he’d made it this far with all the doubt on his shoulders so quitting is not an option
    plus he wasn’t just doing this for the money and fame anymore it was an addiction
    and every addict knows once yuh get in so far there’s almost no goin back
    so after a quiet few years it was time for him to attack
    he wanted prove to the world he was worth it and could still make it
    he was thinking about his mom so he didn’t want to disappoint
    of all the people he just wanted to make his mom proud
    so he got on his knees and to God he vowed
    the world was once again soon to witness the birth of a true legend

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