"Kentucky Skriptz"

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Will edit in other link in a bit... this is a song in progress will post song when finished.......... let me know what you think........


Ayo it's ya boy from Kentucky about to murder the beat..
I spit that fiyah so my words even burn when I speak...
Poppin pills, smokin' weed, and writtin' lyrics..
The skill that I spill when I spit real shit no one comes near it...
I'm the illest lyricist to ever spit from Kentucky bitch..
I'm about to make a vist to get a refil on my skript...
Vikodens, loratabs, perkoset, and oxies..
I don't give a fuck my body's filled up wit' toxins...
When I'm droppin rhymes it burns like lines of zanax..
Going strait to your heart in need of a zantax...
Prylosac, anything to get the burn from your chest..
Killa Effect's the best you need to learn wit' the rest...
I'm natural born hustling, take ya for what ya worth..
Aint nothing changed I been this way since my birth...
Lines I write aint a rhyme but a way of life..
The skriptz I'm droppin' is strictly for that 859...

It's Kentucky Skriptz and this is what it is,
I don't give a shit I'm bout to show you how i live..
Gettin steady refills on them Kentucky Skriptz,
Writtin scriptures to show these Kentucky Skriptz..

It's not about where you at but where your from..
Country love! I'll always be stuck in this Kentucky mud...
Puttin it down for all my people in the loo..
About to show everybody what this country boy can do...
And I don't give a fuck who started out doubtin me..
I'm a white boy from Kentucky and I'll say it proudly...
Shoutin it out right through my lips..
Your never thinkin when your speakin about them Kentucky Skriptz...
From the words that burn in each one of my lyrics..
To the shit that my doctor gives to lift spirits...
Set the mood, time to get your mind right..
Break out a fat line or grab another blunt to light...
Either way pull out the head phones and put em on..
Drift away in another KY skript turned into a song...
I'll always have in my heart that country love..
My roots are deep, my boots'll be covered in Kentucky mud...

It's Kentucky Skriptz and this is what it is,
I don't give a shit I'm bout to show you how i live..
Gettin steady refills on them Kentucky Skriptz,
Writtin scriptures to show these Kentucky Skriptz..

From Waterloo to Colorado I'm gettin it in..
Holding it down for mile high from the city of cin...
It's Killa Effect and I'm always representin..
Holdin it down for Kentucky in every fuckin sentence...
You can be a witness to the scriptures thats writtin..
Kentucky Skriptz is hittin like pens to prescriptions...
It's all about havin fun and doin what you love..
Smokin a blunt and makin sure you have something in your cup...
Fill it up to the rim..
The preasures I'm under will never make me brake slip or bend...
I'm a be the way til the end, my death..
Spittin the best til the day I take my last breath...
I stay holdin it down for all of Kentucky..
I've earned this, had nothin to do wit me bein lucky...
That's why I spit Kentucky Skriptz out my mouth..
Til my death I'ma hold it down for N B H South.....

It's Kentucky Skriptz and this is what it is,
I don't give a shit I'm bout to show you how i live..
Gettin steady refills on them Kentucky Skriptz,
Writtin scriptures to show these Kentucky Skriptz..
Kentucky Skriptz..................

I liked it. Very few problemz here. You pretty much got it. As I've said in other threads get some more rolling rhyme schemes, and multi syllable rhymes. And we get it. You're from Kentucky. Keep the Kentucky Scriptz to the chorus and don't let it spill over into the actual bars. It's sign of laziness.