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    Deathstar is Soft

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    Post by FrankWhite781 Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:49 pm

    I'm harder then asphault and concrete
    Two pipebombs underneath ya car seat
    Turn you into raw meet
    Have ya bone fragments fallin from the sky
    Oh my
    I'm so high
    Get away from me bitch.... go die
    No lie fuck you small fries
    I War like nato
    38 snub
    Slugs turn ya head into play do
    Leave you
    lookin like a broccoli and cheese baked potatoe
    Fuck wit my payroll
    Ya chest get eight wholes
    Bulldog revolver
    chainsaw covered in all rust
    I rev it up and turn ya whole head into saw dust
    I'm a big dawg get ya paws crushed
    We could fight to the death
    I'm a fuckin maniac I will bite you to death
    Stick a swithblade right in ya chest
    I confess.... I sin
    But most a the time you gotta cut corners to win
    i Spin lies
    Like spider webs
    Turn victoms into flies
    Cut em down to size
    Tangle em up
    Bunji cord around the throat
    Strangle em up
    Chainsaw chuck
    Ill mangle you up
    I don't give a fuck
    Duck when you see me aimin'
    i Shoot amazin'
    38 turn ya grape to a raisen
    Federal agents mad cuzz I'm flagrent
    I think they know I got a meth lab in the basement
    I'm blantant bold and arrogant
    Ignorant
    Smooth criminal
    Leave no fingerprints
    Rubber on the pistol grip
    Hollow point missile tips
    Get ya heart tissue split
    Vicious and militant
    Fuck wit me get you ya wife and ya children hit
    Natural born killer shit
    Back on my xanax weed and corn liquor shit
    Devil in disguise
    Hellfire in my eyes
    Ghostrider I'll take for a ride
    I'm foul
    You a sweet potato pie
    Wanna kill me try
    you a rat that lives in a pigsty
    I did enough shit talkin imma say my goodbyes
    Peice out
    The beasts out
    This iz my yard keep out
    Keep runnin ya mouth Imma knock ya teeth out
    You cant fuck wit me deathstar
    you get flesh scars
    kevlar vest and a pump
    chump..holla at me if u wanna hear the next bar
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    Post by Death Star Fri Mar 19, 2010 8:29 am

    now listen pussy you've bin seen posting on my threads
    ur the type to snitch to the feds
    cuz I held you at gun point while I fucked ya wife in ur bed
    talkin about you'll bite me
    men biting men is gay and unsightly
    you ain't talented not even slightly
    so when you adress me do it politely
    you dumb faggot dyke freak
    talkin bout guns that type a shit excites me
    while you rhymin like an over hype banshee

    hell yeah let me hear the next bar
    "you spin lies like spider webs" now thats bizarre
    you gata lie cuz you don't know who you are
    and I'll kill ya kids and that hoar
    eat half ur brain and put the rest in the refrigerator

    stop writin three letter rhymes
    I know you just wanna make up ur lines
    ur work is quantity all u see is quality in mine
    you thought you were hot but you still behind
    I'm feared by all mankind
    my work is vision and poetry intertwined
    I'm like a beast and angel combined
    I'm so lyrically inclined
    I'm built tough like a ford design

    so nigga you could say ur goodbyes
    u said it ur self all you spit is lies
    so battling a real nigga is just not wise
    u betta fall back call all ya allies
    u just a pussy in a thug disguise
    stop spittin man I strongly advise
    you will never win I'm an unpleasant surprise
    talkin bout fire nigga that was bugar in ya eyes
    yeah this is my reply
    the truth you can't deny
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    Post by justiiice Sat Mar 20, 2010 1:26 pm

    haha whats the matter death hurt ya too bad in the other forum??? Too bad frank murdered ya bitch ass. Now I will. an please. stop with ya gay rappen and be forreal.
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    Post by justiiice Sat Mar 20, 2010 1:48 pm

    I hope someone votes on this,
    killed ya once with potent spits,
    You hidden nigga, you opposed to this?
    i'm the real nigga hosten this,
    let me serve ya dish i know you can't hold,
    like a bad hand nigga you stacken folds,
    Whats a Death Star, oh you mean from starwars?
    what the fuck are you 8? rappen about cars and whores,
    nigga you ate brains but you aint Hannibal,
    listen just wait and i'll show you a cannibal,
    please motha fucka stop posten threads,
    we're good at this shit like ya mom gives head,
    i took my 12 gauge and dumped it down her throat,
    shit hit so hard made that bitch choak,
    nigga we've invisible, only rock cloaks,
    keep a 9 mil visible, for you jokes,
    spit somethen back now make that shit hot,
    ask ya mom about it, while she's riden my cock.
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    Post by Death Star Mon Mar 22, 2010 10:38 am

    nigga I didn't even remember we battled haha? u think somewhere in your gay or transsexual mind that any of your ignorant annoying raps hurt me? well please don't be mislead you pinch of shit you don't even cross my mind when I think of a challenge causer deep down in your pathetic mind you know the truth.............. I'm just better bitch live with it or kill urself BITCH!!
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    Post by Death Star Mon Mar 22, 2010 10:44 am

    Oh and frank you still a pussy ansa back stop writing hit me back today cause this bitch you sent is about to be destroyed so send some more of ya friends for me to feast on.
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    Post by justiiice Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:40 am

    Right right. better. You only got to intermediate by suckin dick. FUCK YOU. spit somethen hot other that ya gay shit. ya faggot ass raps aint shit. you know i destroyed you thats why you aint post back.
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    Post by FrankWhite781 Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:09 pm

    Skitzophrenic
    Energetic
    A-k ...whiteboy shootin like jj reddick
    Paramedics panickin'
    Lookin at the damage like they just seen an alien
    I ball like shawn marion
    Awkward shot release
    6 up in ya wig piece
    You deceased mmmwaw
    May you rest in peice
    I eat
    You famish I feast
    You a man imma beast
    You just started walkin ya block
    I ran the streets
    You can't comete
    I will tie up ya hands and feet
    Throw you out a speedin car
    Leave you breathin hard
    Bleedin fast
    Other cars can't see u cuzz their speedin past
    You die in the cold
    Cops find u dead on the side a the road
    you get john doe'd
    Imma lost soul
    Hidin in the bushes outside a Costco
    shootin muthafuckas in the chest wit a crossbow
    Tonto tipped knife
    Throat slitter
    Chrome gripper
    Dome splitter
    Go getter
    Patron sipper
    Stop spittin that junk
    Punk u no killer
    I'm so sick a
    You fake as fake gets
    Muthafuckas thinkin you tuff cuzz you play wit ya weight sets
    You could lift them dumbells
    I hit you wit dumb shells
    I smoke dumd l's
    Pop todem poles
    Pop shots leave ya shoulders fulla bullet wholes
    you a snake
    Crooked like a broke nose
    I put u in a chokehold till u go cold
    Stilleto switchblade
    For you pickpockets
    Rockets in the clapper
    For you bum carjackers
    Brass knuckles for scuffles
    Dufflebag fulla pistols
    Crystal clear shootin eye
    Do or die
    Death awaits thee who dare tast my fate
    I'm dirty
    I don't believe in clean slates
    Nickel plate 38
    Danger is my soulmate
    Bullets like colgate
    Ill put em in ya mouth
    I just built a pipebomb
    Imma put it in ya house
    Shoot ya crib up
    Send bullets thru ya couch
    Mutilate ya spouse
    Knock ya daughters brains out
    This is my backstreet
    Stay on the main route
    Big fun
    I hit you wit a big gun
    Then yell yeah baby! like big pun
    Fuck yes
    Its benjamin blanks
    One man bonnie and clyde
    Emptyin banks
    I carry two guns and several shanks
    you a flunkie I got general ranks
    I go to war hard I got war scars
    I'm in charge
    You a fuckin dishonarable discharge
    This is a gut check
    Fagot I bust techs
    Wreck lifes
    And snap quicker then a ducks neck
    Deathstar ya rhyme style is horrible
    You about to get blitzed hard better call an audible
    Its Francis M to the is H Phenominal
    Gun rest under the vest by the abdominal
    Tech shells make you spin like a ride at the carnival
    I dance wit the devil never end up in the hospital
    If you gonna come at me don’t come weak
    Come to MY HOOD I have you stuffed in a trunk in one week
    church
    you Fuckin fagot….real recognize real
    I leave you paralyzed
    Little boy you faker then O.J’s aliby
    You condemned house im a wrecking ball
    I make ya body fall you softer then a cottonball
    Softer than pussy walls
    You all vagina
    I will slap saliva ouuta ya mouth
    Punch the blood out ya face
    This a marathon you cant win
    Drop outta the race
    muthafucka
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    Post by Death Star Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:52 am

    spit something hot for what nigga ?
    this ain't no juke box you a frank aren't worthy but I'll set ya'll up on a battle tho real talk I got a message yesterday from a member and he said he needs a challenge and he wants me to hook it up ya'll down cause to be totally realistic witjh both of you I'm the best here nothing will change that you will never defeat me ok ya'll are fucking rookie pussies stay off my dick hit me back if ya'll want me to hook ya'll up on a battle bitches. so I could let one of these new rookies destroy ya'll . man up niggas
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    Post by Death Star Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:57 am

    and justice you could say you destroyedf me but the whole forum knows your a lying piece of shit. remember the first step to recovery is admitting you have a problem and while you sorting that out deal with ya gay tendencies the same time cuz u ain't shit and aibn't neva gon be shit except shit ya dig i'm tired of all ya'll weak pieces a shit thinkin ya'll could rap and shit
    your work is like some shit I wrote in grade 7 . man up nigga man up.
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    Post by Death Star Tue Mar 23, 2010 8:23 am

    listen .... you could search ya mind pull out whatever you find
    this story ends with you dead ya family standin over crying
    fuck all the hating and the lying
    gravity:just another law I'm defying
    so while you below hating I'm above you overflying
    deep inside its killing you ur dying
    you just keep tryin and retryin
    yet still end up disappointed and sighing
    cut ur losses start indemnifying
    you could say what you want but I ain't complying
    learn how to rap and stop misapplying

    all you do is put words together
    fuck that I'll rap about whateva
    no matter what it still sounds clever
    I'm successful in every endeavour
    you hurt me? nigga never
    I'm ready for whatever whenever wherever

    frank white already exist
    so y did u introduce urself as this?
    livin another man's life now thats some bitch shit
    go battle some rookies I ain't to be fucked with
    you might come home and meet my dick on ya wife's lips
    I did you a favor cause you know shes a trick
    to bad you was suckin my dick when ya'll kiss
    ur like a racoon in a cage just sit there and hiss
    if I don't respond it means I ain't feelin the shit
    fuck what ya'll say deep down ya'll know I'm sick


    there you go since you wanna beg and shit real rap nigga fuck the word matching
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    Post by ayce Wed Mar 24, 2010 2:29 am

    this is for that fukin star in the sky,
    the kid who thinks alot of bars in his lines will make him hard with the lines,
    get knocked out, see some chikens, thinking theirs a farm in the sky,
    he got guns but his tech flopped,
    now he runs around with a needle like "ima inject you with my death shot,"
    its a known fact hes just a known act,
    became angry, started to rap when he got his dope jacked,
    make some rhymes like he was gona get his dope back
    maybe become a known cat,
    you dont beleive you own facts,
    money and gats bitch LOOK AT THESE LIES,
    your name should have been shooting star,
    cuz u may have had a gat if u WISHED FOR IT 3 TIMES,
    you dont even no who you are u need a fukin lesson
    when u see my steel bat to your face in a second, you gona wish u had a real gat real fast like a shooting star for steppin,
    who u reppin,
    death star, how i wonder where your teks are,
    up above the world he's so high,
    like he's grindin when he's dope with lies,
    seems like more and more nigas at A STAND wit you,
    stop thinkin ur good cuz fukin nursary rhymes are to AD-VANCED for you,
    let the whole site laugh at you,
    thinkin they cant handle you,
    bitch watch what my back hand'l do,
    continue ur life, i'l continue doing ur wife,
    i mean ur girl in bed,
    ima kill u and then this whole site will be like "Say Word He's Dead"
    u jus a punk man kickin kids ass who no me, like gim dem shoes dude
    but you gona get fucked cuz u just an ant homie, and im timbaland boots,
    fukin step on him then he's dead,
    "Ima eat you like a Bon Bon", yeah...thats what she said.

    get at me niga









    check her throat tho she may be a fuckin dude,


    'i'l eat you like a bon bon' -Death star
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    Post by Death Star Wed Mar 24, 2010 10:05 am

    nigga now y u gatta go and bite my shit I don't respect that at all atleast be a whack bitch ass niggas with pride dawg didn't you see me use the bon bon line already man I know u like it but find ur own shit ok and when you do that il respond I hope you ain't proud of urself because that shit u wrote might be long but its lacks contents take it from a real rapper il gat back at ya tho its just ya'll are so boring I have no incentive
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    Post by Death Star Wed Mar 24, 2010 10:08 am

    and where were u when i did respond to ya other dumb raps u took so long i forgot u existed in here does it take you that long to write that ass wipe u call rap?
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    Post by ayce Wed Mar 24, 2010 7:31 pm

    u used it in the other forum, i aint biting that garbage line trust me im just provin ur shit is wak as fuck pussy. i even put it in quotes and at the bottom with your stupid name death pussy.

    i never replied cuz the verse was garbage not on my level but i was bored
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    Post by Death Star Fri Mar 26, 2010 8:33 am

    yeah right you read that on my thread bitch stoplying what you gata lie for man its only some words that one line you wrote from m,y shit sounds better than erything else you wrote nothing you wrote is even near good or sorta good its terrible nigga just being real IT STINKS I WILL NOT RESPOND WRITE SOMETHING ELSE YOU WHACK BITCH.
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    Post by ayce Fri Mar 26, 2010 1:57 pm

    ima eat you like a Bon Bon- Death Star

    its in "why do yall hide from death" forum i aint lying about shit look it up you said it why you denying ur own lines hahah

    so you gona reply or jus keep sayin ur beter than me puss star.

    Frank White already murdered you. ima give you another chance tho.
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    Post by FrankWhite781 Tue Apr 06, 2010 3:33 am

    Defiinatly did murder that old grandpa...all he does is talk shit he never responds wit a verse i think its cuzz his arthritis is actin up..lol
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    Post by rhino1111 Sun Mar 13, 2011 8:55 pm

    Yo you all sound like a bunch of kids
    you wont be laughin when i storm your crib
    you'll know its not a game, when i empty the clip
    you'll know you made a mistake when you meet this crip.
    Im fuckin cryptic - Im the one with the logistics
    run the goods like i run the hood
    stick ya for yur riches - like Robin Wood
    I go hard like Weezy's hook
    You say I got swine - your right im too sick
    flow goes hard - "hard dick" no homo.




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