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    Literal Vs Fortys and Nine

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    LIterAl
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    Literal Vs Fortys and Nine

    Post by LIterAl on Mon Apr 05, 2010 5:30 pm

    1st Round Is 5 bars
    2nd round is 4 bars
    3rd round is 2 bars


    3-0 KO
    4-1 TKO

    When you vote you do not have to post every catagorie just the Main ones

    wORDPLAY
    mULITES
    pUNCHES
    mETAPHORES
    PERSONALS

    EPLAIN oNE or as many bars as you want and if you can tell us what we are lacking and what we could do to improve.

    No DickRydin votes or your Crew votes and people just because his name is alll ove dont just give him the win. Much respect to vote fair its all I ask.

    DEATH STAR you are not allowed to vote on this you Piece of shit.

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    Re: Literal Vs Fortys and Nine

    Post by LIterAl on Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:11 pm

    I started out throwing Punches//Hes four dimes,a Nickle, and some pennies//he aint even half of a enemy/
    /showin he's gutless// RAP id Ly punch ONe BAR to make Him FIFTy,

    OR Are you Nine u NEED tO STAY IN sCHOOL cuz yur flows ARE upsETTINg NO NEed foR wHats NExt //
    Cuz U cant EVEN read MY enGLish//"HEs from the UK BAD ENGLISH"


    Torchoring with mean text// blowing air through ur nose playing the OrganS// BReaking bacK ur neck //
    SO my LINes will bleed out ur reP, seconds left// the spleens next//

    exploding THIS GREEN DAY of mine //RE=ALING UR SPINECUZ ur rhymeS NEED hOppING aND PRAISE THERE BROKEN AND PLAYED[/b[b]] OUTSPAKENLY GAY DROP GRAB UR ANKLE THEN PRAY THE SONGS OVER ITS "Closing TIME" with pain.


    Its like u bring a knife to a gun fight /// I know you can carry a Knife but not a gun//Beating you with my Batton... it against the law for me to bring heat in the united kingdomn //Your already beat and what the fuck do all of you eat/// do you chew on bricks// whats up with all of your teeth.. //is thats whats fucked up on how you speak// You see today is that there are no real men in uK//// cuz ur led by a queen
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    Re: Literal Vs Fortys and Nine

    Post by fortys-and-nines on Tue Apr 06, 2010 7:36 am

    1st of all 5 bars is 10 lines of rhymin. 1 bar is 2 lines that rhyme...

    Check...


    So im 4 dimes and and not even half an enemy,
    i could spit 1 bar and not even rhyme and murda you LITERALly,

    Nines is plural so im comin at you wit many techs,
    technically my rhymes leave you runnin tongue tied and face wrecked,

    You are LITERALly garbage i dump your body on rubbish tip,
    decapitate you and fuck your throat like necrofilia im fuckin you on this,

    Shove your head up your ass so you can see the shit you talk,
    remainin limbs LITERALly littered in the ally and torso spread on the side walk,

    I'll force ya family to evacuate their house like its 9/11,
    call me kelloggs coz this is a serial (cereal) 187!


    Last edited by fortys-and-nines on Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:53 am; edited 1 time in total

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    Re: Literal Vs Fortys and Nine

    Post by zomby trash on Thu Apr 15, 2010 8:02 am

    ^^^^^that aint four bars you total prick
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    Re: Literal Vs Fortys and Nine

    Post by fortys-and-nines on Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:54 am

    better????
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    Re: Literal Vs Fortys and Nine

    Post by fortys-and-nines on Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:01 pm

    2nd round...............
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    Re: Literal Vs Fortys and Nine

    Post by fortys-and-nines on Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:54 pm

    this fagit gone into hybernation on this cyberstation,
    no exageration this bastad talks shit and should practice constipation

    this bitch is masterbatin over my spits and posts,
    tryin to be just like me this pricks a joke

    this jester will mollest ya and literal ya cant test this,
    ima teacher schoolin ya and ya about to get downgraded

    lifes faded you'll lose ya identity when i cut u into 8ths,
    brains spread on floor and limbs in each corner of the united states
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    Re: Literal Vs Fortys and Nine

    Post by fortys-and-nines on Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:46 am

    this gotta go down as a no show

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