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    Deathstar is wet garbage..Word to Allah

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    FrankWhite781
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    Deathstar is wet garbage..Word to Allah

    Post by FrankWhite781 on Tue Mar 30, 2010 6:54 pm

    yeah
    Its chainsaw frank
    benjamin blanx
    i got guns soldiers use to defend against tanks
    im an armor piercin bullet you a muthafuckin blank
    me call a truce wit you no thanks
    the beefs fresh why spoil it
    imma drown your ass in a public bathroom toilet
    shit head
    you a wind up stiff dead
    you think im soft u been mislead
    i put a shotgun to ya kids head
    sick like ebola
    squeeze leave brain matter all over the stroller
    colder than cryogenics
    lennox lewis a rap
    move like speedy gonzales in the trap
    i snap quicker then the last straw on the camels back
    cock the hammer back
    bullets like craig mack
    i put that brand new flavor in ya ear
    smear ya brains on the wall
    hit ya chest blow you 7 feet down the hall
    i keep my eye on the ball
    im not easily distracted
    i leave you wit some cracked ribs
    smack ya bitch
    hold you at gunpoint make you dig her ditch
    keep thinkin your animal
    im the zoo keeper
    two heaters muthafucker i'll handle you
    i mix moonshine wit hard liquor
    keep thinkin you goddzilla
    you gone get shot quicker

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    frank white is dried up semen

    Post by Death Star on Wed Mar 31, 2010 8:24 am

    nigga I 'm a grown ass man ain gat time for kids
    you just tryna catch up u lil shit skid
    I'm all about my money ur just a pussy a counterfeit
    an unorthodox transvestite a piece a shit

    Ill shit on the floor hold u at knife point and make you eat it
    I'm thuggin while u gettin fucked in ya ass screaming "beat it"!!
    ya'll gay rappers are so conceited
    you don't even have the sense to know when your defeated
    can all my real thugs stand up while frank bitch remains seated
    forty said don't get personal so why are you so heated
    this has just begun my rhymes are anti depleted
    don't sweat me il secrete it
    you had your chance you shoulda packed up and retreated

    up against me your usless il leave you confused toothless
    I'm totally ruthless
    pickin beef out my teeth as I use you like a tooth pick
    you can't fuck with me I'm too sick
    you just a bitch lookin for new dick
    can't fool me you aint rick slick
    just another faggot oilin niggas dip sticks
    bring ya crew i destroy clicks
    while you home posting I'm cutting bricks

    you could sniff my angel of death dust
    since you think ur so robust
    I'll make you spontaneously combust
    my thought il blow you away like wind gusts
    ask your wife I MADE HER COME WITH ONE THRUST
    CAUSE YA LIL DICK WASN'T GOOD ENOUGH
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    Re: Deathstar is wet garbage..Word to Allah

    Post by ktw on Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:09 am

    that was good.both of yall did nice.but deathstars used more similes, while frankwhite used more metaphors.

    similes- a comparison using the words-like or as

    metaphors- a comparison without using the words- like or as

    yall did good.
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    Re: Deathstar is wet garbage..Word to Allah

    Post by ktw on Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:49 am

    FrankWhite781 wrote:yeah
    Its chainsaw frank
    benjamin blanx
    i got guns soldiers use to defend against tanks
    im an armor piercin bullet you a muthafuckin blank
    me call a truce wit you no thanks
    the beefs fresh why spoil it
    imma drown your ass in a public bathroom toilet
    shit head
    you a wind up stiff dead
    you think im soft u been mislead
    i put a shotgun to ya kids head
    sick like ebola
    squeeze leave brain matter all over the stroller
    colder than cryogenics
    lennox lewis a rap
    move like speedy gonzales in the trap
    i snap quicker then the last straw on the camels back
    cock the hammer back
    bullets like craig mack
    i put that brand new flavor in ya ear
    smear ya brains on the wall
    hit ya chest blow you 7 feet down the hall
    i keep my eye on the ball
    im not easily distracted
    i leave you wit some cracked ribs
    smack ya bitch
    hold you at gunpoint make you dig her ditch
    keep thinkin your animal
    im the zoo keeper
    two heaters muthafucker i'll handle you
    i mix moonshine wit hard liquor
    keep thinkin you goddzilla
    you gone get shot quicker

    frank white ass 781- u clown ass kid. u live in boston, Massachusetts. that's just a weak ass city and nobody there ever get killed, shot, raped, or nothing. you talking like you live in the hood and they be shooting over there or something,lame ass boy. you just a posing ass hater who try to say that your city is so bad and dangerous- if you want to see dangerous come to Chicago, Illinois and come to my area goofy. you don't own no guns little ass boy.talking about how you did 5 years in Walpole-nigga you aint never goto jail in yo life, so quit making shit up. and if you so raw, why you aint famous and making money by now. so shut the fuck up, punk ass pussy having lame ass clown ass nigga.

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    Re: Deathstar is wet garbage..Word to Allah

    Post by Death Star on Thu Apr 01, 2010 8:42 am

    lololol talking bout he in the studio laughin at me fuckin lyin ass bitch if u were in a studio y are you at te cpu battling me? get your bitch ass to the mic and rap show some footage whats ur studio name ? any body can sit in a studio but not ery1 in the studio are rappers so be real niggas cause thats all i recognize and right now ktw is simply being real with you stop tryna insult real niggas intelligence you ain't no gangsta and you ain't no rapper
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    Re: Deathstar is wet garbage..Word to Allah

    Post by Bad Ass Menace on Thu Apr 01, 2010 2:29 pm

    Yeah i thought dat was ok still... Always room for improvement tho...


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    Re: Deathstar is wet garbage..Word to Allah

    Post by Bad Ass Menace on Thu Apr 01, 2010 2:32 pm

    But if he tried to come hard with rhymes then why wasn't this battle on the cards like a proper challenge? If he in studio then ya'll can upload yourselfs to the audio battle arena or something.

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    Re: Deathstar is wet garbage..Word to Allah

    Post by Death Star on Thu Apr 01, 2010 4:31 pm

    yeah that what im sayn if he in the studio let us hear some vocals

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    Re: Deathstar is wet garbage..Word to Allah

    Post by FrankWhite781 on Tue Apr 06, 2010 2:39 am

    i already murdered u twinkle star and u know it...and ktw..u little prepubescent dickhead...i will blow ya fuckin cerembellum out ya skull muthafucka...fuck illinois...you pussy..i already told u u little herb...get in the call outs forum and i'll have my nitch tear ya head off...just to insult ya manhood...i mean boyhood...lmfao..u fuckin lupe fiasco ass nigga go do a kickflip skater boy...only thing u ever shot was a basketball..i make ya casketfall...i aint even gonna get started..stop bumpin ya gums in these random forums pussy...get in the call outs and respond to the child abuse i had to administer to ya cornball ass..u fuckin herb....

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    Re: Deathstar is wet garbage..Word to Allah

    Post by FrankWhite781 on Tue Apr 06, 2010 2:41 am

    i meant my bitch not nitch..if u couldnt figure that out..i know u still learnin the alphabet and shit...u fuckin 7th grader tryin to tell me whats hood and what isnt..i will slap the baby teeth out ya mouth little nigga

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    Re: Deathstar is wet garbage..Word to Allah

    Post by Death Star on Sat Apr 10, 2010 4:52 pm

    nigga get flexible and suck ur own dick

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