This is my first rap

My raps and lyrics are causing little children to have a reaction
I don't want any trouble just let me rap I only do it for satisfaction
I'm white so you think I'm just an fucking big fairground attraction
Went on my local radio and the listeners want to take legal action
Crowd of people outside my trailer they are loud and are protesting
They are testing me why dont they stop it's not like I'm molesting
Have you seen what they are suggesting what they are requesting
They want me put in a nuthouse and so they can do mental testing
It's not my fault I have the Attention-Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder
I'm standing here and still waiting for the fucking New World Order
My mother used to shout and scream well she has Manic Disorder
If the crowd had thier way they would kill me and leave me at border
Yeah so what if I'm white but everyone in the neighborhood is black
They cause mayhem on the streets and don't care and they sell crack
They don't stop even if their friends or even family get shot in the back

not bad at all for a first simple rap.i like the way u tryed to paint a picture in our minds telling about yourself and your hood.

Thank you for your comment any tips to get better?

yeah that was nice dude uppin and trust me dawg I'm a critic