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    rapslayer u thought I didn't see you but I did.

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    Death Star
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    rapslayer u thought I didn't see you but I did.

    Post by Death Star on Wed Feb 17, 2010 7:07 pm

    I'm sorry it has to end this way
    ur like a sculptor with no water or clay
    for me this forum is a field day
    all u faggots tend to stink and decay
    do you mr. slayer have anything creative to say?
    I ain't gat time for that weak child's play
    your work tells me you should go take up crochet
    if you gat beef I like it sorbet or souffle
    In my rhymes I live what I portray
    r kelly told you to fly now you screamin may day! may day!
    this is what you get for your dumb cliche
    now your on the menu and I'm having buffet
    when a sign says stay away you kids never obey
    understand the cycle of life you're just prey
    why you dissin death? NO thats not okay
    did you see how I turned fish187 into fish fillet?
    when ya'll respond its like I'm reading a retarded child's essay
    ur so soft u should consider ballet
    it won't be long before the loop holes in your career give way
    u battling me u only made urself a jackass on display
    as you can see i could find a rhyme all day
    if you're real y is your rap so gay?

    okay I'm off that causin cardiac attacks
    I bring mayhem to tracks
    nothing u cud come up with will have an impact
    in reality you're a bitch so you can't stick to facts
    for rappers like me you're just a door mat
    look in the mirror how do you face that?






    study nigga get ya vocab up don't stabbed up

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    Re: rapslayer u thought I didn't see you but I did.

    Post by rapslayer on Sat Feb 20, 2010 6:59 pm

    i bring heat to my raps like fire
    bitch its time for you to retire

    give you a third degree burn
    when will chumps like you ever learn?
    stop making bad choices, take a 360 degree turn


    end your rap "career"
    your headin' in the wrong path..
    whats the matter dawg,cant steer?
    unlike you,i know why im here

    boy,why you rhyme every word like hip-hop?
    this is a rapping forum and your lines straight flop
    if i ever robbed,id go to jail to find you as a cop
    or maybe your that janitor at school,6 bucks an hour to cleanly mop

    dayum,i rap and i [rock]
    you suck so much that your posts get locked
    ever wonder why no one chats with you online?its cause you got blocked
    and im not trying to mock..
    but im being honest,you just suck cock

    now whats with this post "thought i didnt see you but i did"
    dont fuckin act tough,
    i called your bluff
    now imma get real rough

    i challenged you in the first place
    before i was just playin,callit "tying my shoe lace"
    but now imma really get in yer sweaty ass face


    this is a no trespassing zone,and your on My [grass lawn]
    im not in the mood for beef,imma eat you like fish prawn
    if you dont respond to this soon,i'll suspect that your scared and long gone..

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    Re: rapslayer u thought I didn't see you but I did.

    Post by Death Star on Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:11 am

    oh finally after three days you show your ugly face again
    are you lookin for a friend?
    someone of which you can depend
    you against me makes no sense
    I'll put you in the past tence

    lights camera action
    I'll breakup the lines since you like to rhyme in fractions
    fasten your seat belt cause we'll be clashin/ crashin
    coroner tryna figure out why your face is bashed in

    you don't want it
    little young snot/ vomit
    want beef? I'm on it
    quicker than a sonic
    I gat butter your just the bitch with the blue bonnet

    Angelo the angel of Death
    to you I'm pain and regret
    I'm goin vocal but for now i'll destroy with text
    you're just a boy I'm a vet
    I'l leave ya life wrecked
    If you wanna battle I'll check
    inspect my intellect
    have some respect
    don't die for the little pride you protect

    rapslayer who did you slay?
    this time could you respond with no delay?
    I've got something for erything you say
    I put bitches in they place and make stay
    u ain't no gangsta thats just what you portray
    fuckin pussy check the date will you respond today?

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    Re: rapslayer u thought I didn't see you but I did.

    Post by Death Star on Thu Mar 11, 2010 11:25 am

    ok I guess u give up

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    Re: rapslayer u thought I didn't see you but I did.

    Post by brick layer on Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:11 am

    death star is ur name and i guess u carry the flame, the circus is in town and ur the subject that i can tame, i might spit slow sometimes even fast but when i let go i take a chunk out yo ass! no homo trick this aint the shit u wanna lick cause u still live at home u think u so hip and cool but where i live its a must that i carry the tool. so bustin heads wide open no toll booth nigga and theres no need for a token. not sure where u from and i really dnt give a fuck, be get u some support cause u goign to need a lot of luck!

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    Re: rapslayer u thought I didn't see you but I did.

    Post by Death Star on Fri Mar 12, 2010 8:37 am

    lol yeah you right nigga I carry the flame
    let ya mama suck my dick balls licked by ur dame
    after me you won't remain
    ur style is sloppy unappealing and not mean
    superman is dead and you can't stop trains
    ya pockets are malnourished in desperate need of weight gain
    read this carefully the truth is plain
    I gat you in my pocket cuz ur much to green
    u started this so when i start on you don't complain
    u couldn't beat me with eminem on ya team
    stupid lame

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