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    Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:05 pm

    Death is unavoidable so fishy y do you hide?
    is it because you know all of your rhymes r lies?
    you're just 1 more jackass with too much pride
    this is only a text battle but yet you're dying inside
    I ain't in no rush I'll take this in strides
    I'm beating rich the bitch ery time we collide
    fuck peace I won't put our differences aside
    for him there will never be a bright side
    only slugs and Colombian neck-ties
    this beef won't ever subside
    I guess thats why that ho rock never replied
    nigga how are you ever gonna win when you never try?
    well I'm still killin you anyway so in the end u still die

    finally t-money the last of the guppies
    I'm so tired of these bitch ass rookies
    so ignorant and pushy
    does the t mean tranni?
    cause you rap like you gat dick and a pussy
    you're like a roach hard outside inside mushy
    I ain't scared I'll shoot ya in ya tushy
    and hide your body somewhere bushy
    you don't want it lil nigga trust me
    ask rich I'l leave ya battered and dusty
    part 2 is coming don't rush me



    Aight this for the homos who wanted beef, part 2 coming up soon please stay tuned.
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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Shook Ones Back On Up on Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:23 pm

    Death Star you name is right
    your name is played out death should come to it like dead stars in the sky at night
    I'm not hiding from death your a facade
    because who rhymes did you just rob

    "you're like a roach hard outside inside mushy
    I ain't scared I'll shoot ya in ya tushy"

    yhea thats right I heard that rhyme before
    oh yhea when i was reading a pre-k book when i was four
    so come quick or get the door closed on you leave you shook
    because ain't so thing as a halfway crook yhea I'm a bite-er
    suck rhymes out of ya like a vampire
    come quick and smooth
    whats your going to do
    when shook ones back on up comes for you

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by ayce on Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:39 pm

    all of yal or soft, and little on the right side
    insecure kids a little lost, i can tell u just a bunch of nice guys
    i gota hunch u even a bitch who likes to nightride
    or a gay kid who thinks of gay pride when i say look on the bright side
    theirs no bright side of nothin tho
    a kid to young, and old man, to fukin old
    unless age is made up and ur jus on the blunted smoke
    means ur a kid with some breasts and his respect is runnin low
    alot of BIGGIE TRACKS and thought he could FLOW
    i got girls who MISS ME bad but you prolly dont BONE
    u sit at home alone dreamin about gettin a girls face wet
    then u yellin at ur moms cuz she askin why u always chill with the same sex
    talk shit about weight and techs,
    how you ran from the cops and sprayed at the rest
    yal kids are all the same
    yall are as smart as ur sex life, aint got no brain
    rhymes on u is a waste jus a little somthin so u no ur place in this place
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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Shook Ones Back On Up on Sat Feb 20, 2010 8:14 pm

    you may have a miss lead
    ayce you are addicted to the same sex you a fiend
    I'm a young one trying to soft
    because people like you end up in the penn and then turn hard
    sagging way past your knees
    getting rape and begging oh please
    come get some i know you new
    but just like trash your rhymes are crap just like you
    whats you age oh yea your to afraid
    that you go online stealin other people lame
    throwbacks
    I'm quick to come out quick to come back
    i'm a baseball player aiming for your dead lonely mic wit a bat

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Tue Feb 23, 2010 8:15 am

    nigga you only 14 are you already losing head
    tryna rap against thugs when u still piss in the bed
    this battle is unofficial I don't even wanna diss u
    don't put urself in the open I won't miss u
    oh yeah ya'll other pussies this still ain't part 2

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Gi on Tue Feb 23, 2010 8:16 pm

    I AINT AFRAID OF NO DEATH, COS I BE DEATH AT YOUR DOOR KID
    EVADE YOUR LAST BREATH, OR THIS IS GONNA GET AWKWARD
    I KNOW YOU FEELIN STRESSED, D'YA NEED SOMEBODY TO TALK WITH?
    WANNA GET THINGS OFF YO CHEST?, TALK ABOUT THAT ABORTION?
    Y'KNW... THE PORTION SHOOK GOT CAUTIONED, BOUT HOW U WANT HIS LIL' TUSH
    AND HOW YOU JUST GOTTA SHOOT UP IT, COS YOU AFRAID OF BUSH
    AND HOW WHEN PUSH COMES TO SHOVE, YOU WANNA SHOVE AND PUSH IT IN HIS MUSH
    AND WHEN IT COMES TO THAT MAN LOVE N' LUST, YOU STAKEOUT TOYS R US....

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:12 am

    ayce I heard you think I'm soft
    remember ery action comes with a cost
    my lyrics intoxicates the make you vomit remorse
    I'm like wrong turn 3 and ur an idiot lost
    my line is the one you'll wish you didn't cross
    the only way you marry to the game is if I get a divorce
    I'm from the 242 but I'll give you a correspondence course

    firstly lil faggot you don't know me
    I'l have ya mama screamin my name like its holy
    flip that pussy 360, ollie
    fuck ya wife take ya place like bartoli
    ur just a peasant dirty and lowly
    u should turn around and walk away slowly
    I ain't nice my flow is unholy
    compare this to all the dumb shit you told me

    secondly I gat techs
    gun butt ya teeth out mangle ya neck
    splatter ya brains across the deck
    if that what i gatta do for respect
    ya silly rhyme only insults my intellect
    u lookin fa fame the results i'l be death
    battling demons il have ya strung out on meth
    hold on to your dignity cause you gat nothin left

    lastly my flow is so vast and nasty
    I'm ready for what ever the task be
    ur just another rapper on my trash heap
    make you pussy niggas lose sleep
    no form of relief i play for keeps
    think you gat me ur under false belief
    don't think I'm done this is only a side of beef
    when I'm done with you boy you're gonna hide from me

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:45 am

    ok this is for gi
    he must be high
    or some perverted gay guy
    I saw ur shit nigga. why?
    I had so many ways to diss you i couldn't decide
    u know you're not a rapper don't you have any pride?
    hip hop forums ain't for seeking gay brides
    so please bra easy with the gay rhymes
    we don't wanna know what you do in your past time
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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Shook Ones Back On Up on Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:28 pm

    I'll admit it your not joe frazier but your rhymes are smokin
    but death star diss me and you end up get all bones in your body broken
    I'm still fresh meat because my rhymes are new
    toss you around this post Gi like my gym shoes
    leave you in the gutter all soaked I' bring down the rain
    you went from frame to no game a shame
    don't get mad as red as an apple
    i'll just make you snap like a cold can of snapple

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Thu Feb 25, 2010 6:23 pm

    aight I don't care if you 14
    u wanna be a rapper lil fucka I kill dreams
    my coke is lined up in the hood like drill teams
    I'l take it to extremes destroy regimes
    u talk like I'm afraid of you is that how it seems?
    I'l turn ya quiet ambiance to mayhem and screams
    A k clips il make ya house lean
    I'll come clean u little pomp stain
    battling me il only lower ur self esteem
    ur much to green
    my styles super supreme
    ur just trash I'll dunk ya like Hakeem or Kareem
    I'll achieve what you wouldn't believe
    tell that bitch Gi I don't even wanna hear him breathe
    or I'll make you watch while I make him bleed
    I gave u a warning for your sake take heed


    notyhin personal lil dude I ain't gat nothin against kids

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Gi on Fri Feb 26, 2010 1:03 am

    NOW I GOT TIME TO STEP BACK IN THE RHYME N' START HAUNTING
    BEGIN FLAUNTIN' MY LYRICAL STYLE N START THE TAUNTING
    DEATH STAR HAS BEEN MISSIN MY ASS, HE WANTS SOME MORE AND
    SHOOK ONE BEEN SKIPPIN THE CLASS, AND MISSIN LESSONS
    YOU GOT TECHS, I GOT A WRECKIN EFFECT THATS SO ELECTRICAL
    I BET DEATH, HE DONT WANT NONE OF THIS, NONE OF THESE LYRICALS
    SAT THERE STRESSED,IN THAT BAHAMA HEAT,AND GETTIN CRITICAL
    PRAYIN N' HOPIN FOR A MIRACLE, BEFORE I STEP BACK IN AND SPIT AT YOU
    ILL MAME AND CRIPPLE YOU, MAKE IT MY BUSINESS TO GET RID OF YOU
    I'LL SHAME AND SHIT ON YOU, TAKE NO PRISONERS, JUST GET SICK ON FOOLS
    TWO VOODOO'S TO USE, AND I'M GETTIN RESTLESS, SO WHO DO I CHOOSE?
    SHOOK ONE WELCOME TO CHILD ABUSE, THERE IS LIFE AFTER DEATH, FUCK THA 242!

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Gi on Fri Feb 26, 2010 11:35 am

    GUESS WHO'S BACK AGAIN, MISTER NO BRAIN, NO FRIENDS
    MISTER NEVER TOO SURE WHEN THE SHIT ENDS?
    MISTER FORGET HOW IT BEGAN?
    I'M MISTER START IT UP AGAIN!
    MISTER E IN THE SENSE YOU DON'T KNOW ME?....
    NO MYSTERY THE MDMA IS MAKIN MY ASS GET SO GLOOMY!
    OR AM I JUST MAKIN' SOME ROOM FOR IMPROVEMENT?
    I GUESS SOME WOULD SAY I'M RIGHT ABOUT TO JACK MYSELF N' LOSE IT
    AM I RIGHT ABOUT JACKIN' IT N' LOSIN' IT?, OR AM I JUST OVER ABUSIN' SHIT?
    IF IT IS I'LL SLIT MY WRISTS, AND SAVE DEATH STAR DOIN' THIS!
    YO CONFIDENCE IS FALSE, AND NO ILLUSION KID
    BUT WHERE YOU ARE CONFUSIN' IT...
    IS THAT YO OCCUPATION ISN'T TRUTHFULNESS....
    READS WHITE LINES N' TECH NINES, N' GENERAL FOOLISHNESS
    THIRTY YEARS OF AGE CLAIMIN THAT YOU OLD SKOOL IN THIS
    THE MESSAGE IS BITCH!!!!........
    YOU SCARED TO DEATH, YOU SCARED TO LOOK 'YOUR'E SHOOK!!!!'
    COS' AINT NO SUCH THINGS AS HALFWAY CROOKS!

    70ISH POSTS AND YOU DEFINATELY ARE A MEMBER!!!!! BUT IT'S WEAK FAKE ASS WANNA BE GANGSTA SHIT. NO SCIENCE!!!!

    LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR RESPONSE FOOL.... GI' aka 'QUIET STORM' aka THE LYRICAL HOOLIGAN aka DA FIRM.....

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Fri Feb 26, 2010 11:52 am

    WHO? u piece a shit, who u r haunting/ taunting?
    ur an adult now you should know the right from the wrong things
    I won't just beat ya please believe I deform lames
    mentally even a song stings
    when I sing I'll show you what ur ignorance brings

    when I spit u niggas always hide from me
    the fans love to see rivalries
    you too slow I'll help ya brain burn off some calories
    I'm on ur nerves like a back tooth cavity
    my gunz i'l burn holes un ya carpetry
    this flowin is an art to me
    I rhyme like poetry is apart of me
    I'll clog rhymes in ya arteries
    u'll wish u never started me

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:01 pm

    Gi wrote:YOU SCARED TO DEATH, YOU SCARED TO LOOK 'YOUR'E SHOOK!!!!'
    COS' AINT NO SUCH THINGS AS HALFWAY CROOKS!


    c'mon now y u gata bite n shit? and its sounds dumb wit ya dumb rhyme


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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:04 pm

    oh no you didn't man should I respond
    I can't believe this do you wear tampons?

    so why are you biting from eminem dawg?
    ur fresh outta ideas huh? that make u look soft
    u can't battle me ur lyrically lost
    I'll have you toting holy water and a cross
    I'm so fast immediate response
    I'll give this other hoe what he wants

    nigga u stink stop biting no credit for that bitch

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:18 pm

    bring it on bring it on
    I'll eat ya like a bon bon
    you tried so hard I still won
    ur so boring I yawned
    now I gat ya feeling withdrawn
    I'm from a land beyond
    if u wanna grow I ain't the one to build upon
    I'll spray ya wit clips bitch be gone
    ur a roach and i'm baygon
    I ain't the one to hate on
    or the one to fake on
    I'll make ya face gone

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by ayce on Tue Mar 09, 2010 11:11 pm

    Dear Mr. Death Star,
    you spit alot of verses evertime thinkin its pretty sick,
    i put beat over your verse and started to read ur stupid shit
    but half way through ur spit, this spiff got me to stop and think,
    plus the coughsyrup drink got me pretty hit,
    cuz i started thinking Death Star was actually a grade 9 bitch
    which meant i had a small dick for spitting a verse as a diss to a person with a clit,
    u talk like a bitch on her time of the month,
    plus a couple lies like i got somethin grrriiime in the trunk,
    but ur a bitch, lovin how these little kids are on you,
    but i hope u talk this hard when some nigas try to rob you
    am i supposed to show respect cuz you "GAT TECHS"
    bitch i wouldnt beleive you if u said u had girls and everyday you GRAB BREASTS
    u proly gona talk about my late response and how im not really worthy,
    but ur not on my level yet so feel lucky cuz this is me responding pretty early
    this is me putting somthing simple in his place,
    a youngin gettin no girls cuz of his pimpils on his face
    get at me niga

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by sharmando on Tue Mar 09, 2010 11:37 pm

    yeeea sharmando in the buildin

    you ppl lame talkin bout stackin to the ceilin,
    your girl on my dick n my balls wat she feelin,
    nigga u go club say u fishin but wat u reel-in?
    nothin, u cats are frontin, while i watch ur ex cummin,
    im sounding like "death star" only last words rhymin,
    u virgin motha fukaz say u out there grindin, u aint lyin,
    neva poke pussy nigga, u scared, why u hidin?

    thats just some light shit to find some haterz get at a realy playboy

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Thu Mar 11, 2010 9:06 am

    this is for ayce the disgrace
    you tried to rap my shit? hold on nigga wait
    so you thought it was good huh? actually great
    you love my lyrics its me you hate lol
    putting beats to a foe's rhymes are mortal mistakes
    I'm the angel of death I ain't givin no breaks
    oh yeah ya wife already poped the pimples from my face
    she says ur a pussy she wanna know how dick tastes
    so i let her deep throat my black snake
    think i spit lies one day you won't wake
    you must be high or ready to die
    ur worthless thats why ur mama cries
    I can't even beef with you small fries
    u just angry cuz I'm better the whole site could see ur all lies
    u rhyme like you lived your life deprived
    theres no win here I destroy you then by who ever ur survived
    till no one in your family is alive
    brace urself death star has arrived
    somany ways to killed sharmando how do I decide

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by ayce on Thu Mar 11, 2010 9:41 pm

    u gettin a little ahead of ur self, a litle confuzed with ur rhymes,
    sayin u fuked my girl when your girl fucked guys two at a time,
    i saw her in a room runnin a train,
    but stupid bitch sucks at suckin dick, shes dumb with the brain,
    but she wanted my dick, im thinkin these girls are all the same,
    cuz im the monoply man and im just playin a game
    niga stay in ya lane, before u get pulled to the side
    thinkin im talkin bout ur ride, niga im talkin bout ur life
    turn around queer i think the fag guys are callin you,
    see me, you gona get put in ur place, and i dont mean a serious talking to, like youd thought i'd do,
    turn around kid your mom is callin you,
    shes like 'stop rapping billy u gettin shitted on quick'
    your like 'mom the name is DEATH STAR and rapping helps my confidence bit by bit'
    u think u gona get far by callin ur self death star?
    first start lookin where your techs are or lookin who raps best are
    to far behind to be hard in your rhymes
    he listens to his favorite track and goes hard with the lies,
    yeah you a star, i can see the twinkle in your eyes,

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Fri Mar 12, 2010 8:28 am

    nigga you want me to stay in my lane?
    not even in ya wildest dreams
    u say ur the monopoly man playin games
    well they call me death I'll erase ya frame
    like I said all u pussies are the same
    pathetic and lame
    I'm clearly better don't you have any shame?
    stop acting retarded erybody here thinks ur insane
    you ain a real nigga stop comparing life to board games

    ur just a stain left behind by fart
    my flow is poetic art
    a genius like the rap Mozart
    destroy you along with ya counterparts
    fuckin dummy who you tryna outsmart?
    pretending to be hard when inside ur like a pop tart
    stop waiting till u think I'm gone tryna get a jumpstart
    you ain't no soldier I gat rap purple hearts
    I'll have ya singing country like Garth
    this battle is over ya best bet is to restart

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by ayce on Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:01 pm

    fuck your not on my level kid ima let sharmando finish your shit

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Sat Mar 13, 2010 7:47 am

    ? what are you retarded u and sharmando combined can't make up a portion of me.

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by Death Star on Sat Mar 13, 2010 7:47 am

    dumb ass

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    Re: Why do ya'll hide from death

    Post by ayce on Sat Mar 13, 2010 4:16 pm

    u just rhyme single words like a kindegarten kid. art, fart, mozart,....u need an elevator to get to my level dummy

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