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    Jon says shut the fuck up!

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    $Pandemik$-$Epidemikk$
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    Post by $Pandemik$-$Epidemikk$ on Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:16 pm

    For all ya bitches and snitches, police get the fuck off my streets before you get struck up with heat

    Jon says

    SHUT THE FUCK UP!

    Yeaaaah...

    SHUT THE FUCK UP!

    Bitches in the back giving niggas the claps

    WHAT THE FUCK?

    bitches... bring me my riches and fuck y'all snitches
    Thats right, all y'all go suck some dick jizz

    Hahaha

    SHUT THE FUCK UP!


    Use a rubba and make like Dre and go Deep Cova...
    In a bitch, refrain from HIV my brothas
    Smoke dutches, fuck the police now who here agrees? (ME ME ME ME)
    Legalize weed, treat the pigs like they treat me
    No pity, so shity, look the other way while I bring a 50
    I may be 15 but I know the streets
    Fuck being indiscreet, a mic my weapon of choice
    Metaphorically speaking- so my ammo is my voice!
    Retorically I ask y'all, what the fucks up?
    So much disease when a nigga does what he pleas
    Can't even procreate without fearing HIV
    And bitches, stop leaving ya spouse
    For the riches and the fucking house
    I swear ta god man and he swore back
    And told me y'all bitches gonna get snuffed up!
    Cuffed Up!
    Sent to hell and really GET FUCKED UP!

    Annoying ass people... get hit with cyanide needles....

    Jon says

    SHUT THE FUCK UP!

    bitches in the back giving niggas the claps

    WHAT THE FUCK?

    speak when spoken to, all ya cryers get choked up
    Rolled up, smoked up in pipe like the coke snuffs

    hahahha..

    SHUT THE FUCK UP


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    Post by Chrispy on Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:24 pm

    so your names jon not peter? scratch
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    Post by $Pandemik$-$Epidemikk$ on Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:37 pm

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    Post by Chrispy on Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:40 pm

    Well I have to say it's not your best piece but overall decent. BUt why are you promoting other peoples drops???
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    Post by $Pandemik$-$Epidemikk$ on Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:47 pm

    you gotta show feed or your ish wont get feed.. those links my feed
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    Post by Chrispy on Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:52 pm

    Oooo
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    Post by Guest on Sun Mar 30, 2008 12:52 pm

    nice drop here...
    appealing scheme and textual-techs'...
    worded nicely, got good flow..

    not much to give critisism for...
    except that, it seemed to feel topical - but you hook was throwing off the form.

    8.2 / 10 ~ Wink Decent.

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