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    The mind of a poet

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    Word.Smyth
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    The mind of a poet

    Post by Word.Smyth on Tue Mar 25, 2008 5:39 pm

    In the mind of a poet deep secrets lie dormant waiting to be revealed
    deep in the crevices of the primordial subconcious lie answers to
    unasked questions, wordless thoughts, unspoken desires
    The poet pours forth a veritable fountain of verbose interludes
    choosing each word carefully to project the perfect mood
    as a painter paints in hues and shades, the poet paints in words
    in verbs and nouns portraying visions of thoughts and feelings
    creating a work of art ... a picture can paint a thousand words
    But in the mind of a poet a word can paint a thousand pictures
    to choose just the right word to portrary just the right emotion
    to convey just the right thought - this is the art of the poet
    And in the mind of a poet, every word is integral to the whole
    every single word is seen as neccesary to express the perfect thought
    the perfect meaning, the perfect expression of mind and soul
    In the mind of the poet, the creator is the creation creating the creator
    the poet becomes as a god, creating from darkness and void
    Writing into existence with sentences new creations, bringing new life
    expressing new visions, new revelations, In the beginning was the word
    And the Word was in the Mind of a Poet.
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    Matt The Ripper
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    Re: The mind of a poet

    Post by Matt The Ripper on Fri Mar 28, 2008 1:14 am

    Well done!

    I really liked this!

    Chrispy
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    Re: The mind of a poet

    Post by Chrispy on Fri Mar 28, 2008 11:00 am

    Damn Word, another ill drop from you. Your descriptions are inspirational and the emotions you incorporate in your writtens are deep and complex, I expect to see more from you.
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    Matt The Ripper
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    Re: The mind of a poet

    Post by Matt The Ripper on Fri Mar 28, 2008 3:18 pm

    I would love to hear this on audio, too.

    Maybe even with some crying babies in the background.

    Akkadian
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    Re: The mind of a poet

    Post by Akkadian on Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:42 am

    nice write, I like the flow and repitition of wrods and progression of thought throughout the piece. if you dont mind: If you had an inspiring write of similar topic can I ask which piece it was? if not no worries, was just wondering. thanks for posting man was a good read!

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