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    MizAlyB
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    On the Dot

    Post by MizAlyB on Sat Sep 26, 2009 9:37 pm

    Every other word is some crazy
    straight disturbed...
    Murder in the third
    like a wolf up in the herd...
    of these sheep thru which I creep;
    These lines are deep and sweet
    and blurred...
    Rhymes so indiscreet that
    when completed leave you stirred...
    Never miss a beat/ I bring the heat
    the mic deserves...
    I write these fleeting adjectives
    on top of nouns and verbs....
    For all the maams and sirs
    to which the thought neva occurs
    that it isn't just my attitude...its NERVES...
    Creates a fuckin surge of electrifying power!
    Expecting I to cower turns the situation sour...
    Hour after hour til its dirty beyond shower...
    ....Step in the ring with me and get devoured...
    by sick thoughts scoured... off the wrinkles in my brain...
    Stained by extraordinary viral strains of thought...
    Changed by the rains
    like weathervane iron wrought...
    Whatever you sought is more often than not
    in the palm of your hand
    as you plan and you plot....SO
    Hand over your assets and sign on the dot
    If you runnin you'll surely get caught...
    Cus a lost spot is clearly a war poorly fought....



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