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 Love Poem/Rap

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Squabbles
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Join date: 2009-08-21

PostSubject: Love Poem/Rap   Sat Sep 26, 2009 1:19 am

something i wrote for my girl awhile ago..

From the first time I met you I felt the connection
and every second since then's been nothing short of perfection
I adore every section that comprises you
it's like you're an angel just disguised as you
mesmerized every time that I can view
your undeniable kindness that shines out from inside of you
my eyes stay glued with you chance of moving
when they glance at your enchanting beauty
you've got a smile so soothing and a sweetness like peaches
that reaches deep in my soul as my feeling increases
i'll try to mend all the pieces of a heart been mistreated
i'm not like the others the past won't be repeated
I want to erase all the bad, and replace it with good
help you escape from the pain, make you feel like you should
cause I could never hurt a person so perfect
you deserve the world girl any less isnt worth it
these words don't do service in fully expressin
what a blessing you are, you truly impress me
i love caressing you back to help you go to sleep
putting you at ease as you drift into your dreams
i'm always right there with you no matter how far it may seem
being apart isnt easy but it can work if we believe
we bring out the best in each other, expect nothing less from each other
both sent a message to heaven and requested each other
there's no question in me that we were destined to meet
now i dont want no one else except for my queen
if there's anything you need then that's what i'll do
cause i'll always be there for you through and through
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MizAlyB
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Join date: 2009-08-15

PostSubject: Re: Love Poem/Rap   Sat Sep 26, 2009 8:58 pm

Now this is the typa honest spit I like to see... Heart on the sleeve; like a poet you bleed, thoughts free on the page planting grace like a seed... In this place of such hate showing faith we all need, to make sweet mistakes and to take the misdeeds, and make liberation from abrasions and greed. Like a thousand tiny, shiny beads, the delicate strand between the soul of a woman and her man creates a sacred creed. Allowing the mind to follow the heart that leads is a beautfiul, kind and amazin feat.....This flow was a lyrical, spiritual, everyday miracle delicious typa treat... Insite spit bright; a straight delight to read....
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