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    A Letter To Heaven (Dedicated To Michael Jackson)

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    Shook Ones Back On Up
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    A Letter To Heaven (Dedicated To Michael Jackson)

    Post by Shook Ones Back On Up on Sun Sep 13, 2009 12:25 pm

    Dear Michael Jackson
    Your dancing proved alot it was magic
    no-1 understood how your life was tragic
    you were an idol to many wish you were still here
    my heart moonwalks into tears
    throw your glove in the sky
    your with the rest tell tupac, luther vandross and marvin gaye i said hi
    no one can ever be you michael jackson no one
    my tears will moonwalk until it's a smile on the sun

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    Re: A Letter To Heaven (Dedicated To Michael Jackson)

    Post by Verse2 on Sun Sep 27, 2009 3:33 am

    you've gotten better i see...keep doin ya thing...da only one thing i didn't like was da fact dat u used moonwalk twice...u coulda closed dat jus alil bit better...but other den dat...nice work homie...keep it up




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    Re: A Letter To Heaven (Dedicated To Michael Jackson)

    Post by Death Star on Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:20 pm

    keep it up mad props "my heart moon walks into tears" superb line shook i gata put something down on this man as a salute to the king of pop its only right we all may not agree on all aspects of his life but long live the memories of the king as he rests in peace .

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