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    Blue Skies...Calm Waters....and da Perfect Sea Breeze

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    Verse2
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    Blue Skies...Calm Waters....and da Perfect Sea Breeze

    Post by Verse2 on Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:16 pm

    da perfect day...i'm not good at dis poetic stuff...so i'm gon need u 2 lead off...we'll do it like da cop story...which i still haven't sent 2 u...(lol)...ya take...den my take...every 4 lines...den pass...we'll c how dat goes from there...we like it...keep it moving...don't...do sumth~n diff

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    Re: Blue Skies...Calm Waters....and da Perfect Sea Breeze

    Post by SpitItReal27 on Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:24 pm

    Clouds casted, but ever so soft
    Blue waters reflected only above
    Sun peaks over a cloudy disguise
    Day just begun, uplifting sunrise

    Aight, your 4 lines next....

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    Post by Verse2 on Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:31 pm

    i wake from ice cream dreams
    2 a cloudless morning
    fresh scented sheets
    and my home girls's snoring (lol)

    ***cheaaa****
    off 2 a good start sonnnn

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    Post by SpitItReal27 on Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:35 pm

    She's got on strawberry pajamas
    He's rockin matchin pants
    They rise together to make breakfast
    After looking out the window, they stare and glance...


    lol...

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    Post by Verse2 on Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:42 pm

    as if on que
    they hear da ice cream man/
    he grabs his credit card/(lol)
    she takes a swipe at his hand/
    he trips her 2 da floor/
    throws da pillow 4 safe land~n/
    and dives thru da window like wait jod sham it/(lol)


    eghhh...end~n coulda been better...but whatever...lol

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    Post by SpitItReal27 on Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:45 pm

    The ice cream man proceeds goin on to deliver
    He and she stand, she begins to shiver
    His moves in to warm her, her comfort - he considers
    The sun is all out, warm peace for them together

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    Post by Verse2 on Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:53 pm

    as da mail man makes his lil routine stop
    she says "my mom's making chicken and fries"
    i say "aye, dat sounds good" no order~n out/
    she answers, "u don't like my cook~n", slowly making 2 pout

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    Post by SpitItReal27 on Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:57 pm

    First off, we know she's an amazing cook
    You know she's got recipes down packed from any book
    But the food from her momma comes along, fine
    But he better realize his girl's the one that should shine

    lol, we gettin so off topic

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    Post by Verse2 on Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:36 pm

    he walks n da house/completely lock~n her out/ (lol)
    say~n "her cook~nz kool, but his microwave~n holds clout/
    pound~n on da door yell~n "i'ma get ya ass when..."/
    he opens up da door wink~n, and hold~n madden/


    lol...don't kno where dat came from...lol...but yea...we are gett~n alil off topic...lol

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    Post by SpitItReal27 on Sun Sep 06, 2009 5:50 pm

    She told him it wasn't worth it to beet him on the screen
    So she grabbed a ball, walked out front and said "I'm takin you to the green"
    She tossed him a spiral without any effort at all
    He fumbled to catch it and she tried to catch his fall

    eghh, random.. lol

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    Post by Verse2 on Mon Sep 07, 2009 1:20 am

    trynna help she fell 2 da ground
    he gained control and ran it n 4 a touch down
    da neighbors cheered and grinned 4 em
    while he did his lil dance n da end zone


    lol...yea...we deff are pretty random...str8 steal~n my words...lol
    eghhh...lmao...

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    Post by SpitItReal27 on Mon Sep 07, 2009 2:21 pm

    She let him get some points, let him think he had scored
    But now lettin him win had left her outisde bored
    Walked into the house, locked the door behind her, hearin him say "yyyyy lorrrdddd"
    And she just laughed and kept on goin, waitin until the rain poured....

    Haha, deal with that...

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    Post by Verse2 on Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:01 pm

    he laughed at her antics,wondering what 2 do
    til da girl next door came out yell~n "BLUE 42"
    Real yelled from da window "Dat ain't chill!"
    he replied "uhh...true true"
    both gett~n soaked
    he noticed homehgirl's shirt was see~thru


    hahahaha....use~n my words against me...lol...i c u...


    Twisted Evil taste of ya own medicine.... Twisted Evil

    ****CHEAAA*****


    we areeee sooooo off topic it a shame...lmao

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    Re: Blue Skies...Calm Waters....and da Perfect Sea Breeze

    Post by SpitItReal27 on Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:48 pm

    lol, I don't even wanna say anythin to that... we're so off topic, it's crazy... what was this started for anyways ---- see what you've done to me! I can't even remember now.. lol

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    Post by Verse2 on Wed Sep 09, 2009 1:13 pm

    hahahaha...dats what i was say~n when i wrote it...lol

    i'll start it off again...n da right direction dis time....lol...not right now tho...don't think i'm n dat frame of mind...lol

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    Post by SpitItReal27 on Wed Sep 09, 2009 1:16 pm

    No doubt whenever you come up with what you wanna do, let me know -- I"ll be here whenever

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    Post by Verse2 on Wed Sep 09, 2009 1:26 pm

    originally i knew exactly where we were goin wit it...and den with each 1...i started lose~n da point of it...lmao...i'll figure it out....i'm on da case.... lol!

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    Re: Blue Skies...Calm Waters....and da Perfect Sea Breeze

    Post by plato on Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:27 am

    wind blew gently across his face,
    as he mourned her who had finished her race,
    from his eyes flow silent tears,
    nature was in agreement with his fears,
    there was calmness in the sea course,
    for sea was sympathetic for the man's loss,
    sky was clear as it silently witnessed the proceedings,
    one life taken to sow thousand life seedlings,
    the man's tears dried,
    but the memories ,on his heart,heavily lied,
    yes! every thing was calm ,but for different reason,
    for this was a different season.

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