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    how i feel about greed

    madlyricaal
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    Post by madlyricaal on Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:33 pm

    expensive to live, thats for certain/
    hustle or keep ya day job, just put work in/
    money mean a lot but cant buy it all/
    life seem easy with a stack so tall/
    so many miserable wit they boss/
    but know quitin they'd take a loss/
    but to who it cost, ya life or material?/
    greed quick to spread like a disease, venereal/
    money constantly tease/
    without it, seem hard to please/
    so we beg and plea/
    to be wealthy, sayin help me/
    to go on this shopping spree/
    thats unrealistic money doesn't come easy/
    like wind, only sometimes when it breezy/
    its a shame to be stuck home bound/
    wishin to have a car to get around/
    at a job interview, can't take you serious/
    it aint your fault you not imperious/
    or maybe you wasn't wearin the right clothes/
    cuz apparently clothes show what your work ethic compose/
    truth is, no body knows/
    most simply suppose/
    cant tell friends from foes/
    when the money come, when the money goes/
    when it come, strangers become friends/
    when it go, friends make amends/
    for crashin ya benz, take it to court/
    lost a friendship as a last resort/
    talk bout needin money for support/
    try greedin money jus to sort.
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    Post by MizAlyB on Sat Aug 15, 2009 8:32 pm

    I feel ya vibe girl, this greed is really runnin shit...
    Cappin out ghetto people without even a gun n shit
    All in the name of greed, overturn a rock an these treasonous thieves
    be the exact same scum an grit you might find under it...
    Discovered a new land an they pillaged and plundered it
    The call of Creation is rumblin louder now than thunder gets
    and I can't get the idea of liberty outta my head
    Cus they tell us to hope for change but give more of the same instead...
    Take no blame for the murderous games and leave us collectin our dead....

    ....WELL SAID.......
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    Post by madlyricaal on Sat Aug 15, 2009 9:10 pm

    thanks girl, really enjoyed your reply
    && your pretty talented i see!
    love the word play
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    Post by Verse2 on Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:27 pm

    i've always had dat thirst 4 greed/
    but 2 da worst degree/
    and found dat work~n/
    was really what worked 4 me/
    was a manager/
    i birthed da Cease/ (lil Caesars~lol)
    when dey 1st opened/
    i was da main 1 wit perkz/
    cha~chinggg!!!/ (lol)
    had a hard work ethic/
    real calm and church headed/
    and no i really wasn't da best
    but i worked at it/
    and time after time/
    got raises galore/
    2 da point where we would go
    out and i could pay 4 da boiz/
    dey say money is da root of all evil/
    n most cases dat can really b da truth/
    but it isn't 4 some people/
    like me 4 instance/
    my greed was shared/
    if i went 2 cop some shoes/
    den you'd leave wit a pair/
    if ya mom dropped u off/
    str8 leave~n u there/
    den we both catch~n dat cab/
    and i'm pay~n da fare/
    greeds bad and good at da same time/
    "u really need 2 listen 2 him~cuz he ain't lie~n"/ (lol)
    i mean yea/
    some niggaz be act~n snobish/
    like 2 toot they own horn/
    showcase dey closets/
    tell u bout dey big Porshe/
    their twelve years n college/
    da mansion dat dey brought
    den went and put dey momz n/
    so yea/
    greeds a double~edged sword/
    we all got dat thirst/
    we kick, yell, and scream "MORE"/
    jus like da chick from willy wonka/
    u get whatchu deserve tho/
    moral of da story/
    ma/
    u get whatchu work 4/


    nuff~n special...jus trynna get more people 2 drop...figured if i made u ante up...lol...you'd write more...can u uppp me tho...i don't think so...lol...no beef jus friendly competion
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    Post by SpitItReal27 on Thu Sep 17, 2009 2:19 pm

    madlylyricaal, must say you've got a point -- I read your piece, got a little inspired... lol

    She wanted the cash, he craved the glory
    She got the bills, he painted his story
    She cheated to make the dollars, he inflated the plot
    She was rich in the end, and fame was what he got
    They both shared in the crippling aftermath of greed
    To have that something, that desire that you always need
    The warnings of materialism, they did not heed
    From their own thirst for things, they could not be freed
    Nowadays prestige is the fruit of all bribery
    Cold shoulders for closed doors, money the priority
    Fallen agreements, broken up like mysteries of a diary
    On the table, unstopped, like the thug in the robbery
    But greed has no color, no gender, no race
    It applies to all who wish to have that taste
    The flavor of gain and lack of waste
    Oh, but greed has shown its troubled face

    Daunting and burdened it leaves its beholders
    Broken, misplaced, greed remains on the shoulders
    Once held in hand, thick wads of cash and glory, like boulders
    Greed is that load.
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    Post by madlyricaal on Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:28 am

    spititreal27, I really liked your verse.
    keep on writing, you have talent.
    and we really need to keep female rappers in the game, and when i say that i dont mean the sell outs who degrade themselves.
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    Post by madlyricaal on Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:36 am

    verse2, i felt yur flow.
    ima drop somthing else to hype it up.

    times like this. hard to find inspiration/
    tiring to fill so many job application/
    people say you got no dedication/
    and that life aint a big vacation/
    they wrong, live ya life with no hesitation/
    have no explanation, f**** expectation/
    people waitin on shit to get better/
    sweat bullshit, and they gettin wetter/
    nobody is financially secure/
    not now, they never were/
    because whose to be sure/
    in a gov't that tries to assure/
    promises they cant even keep/
    who awake when the gov't asleep?/
    these problems are deep/
    nothin we can just sweep/
    worst thing there is, insurance/
    cant buy an emotion, specially not assurance/
    in a democracy, its normal to disagree/
    thats all we do, never agree/
    so many problems, cant let it be/
    honestly, this systems contradicting/
    aint much freedom in all the conflicting and restricting/
    worlds not comin to what we been depicting/
    im listening, but still lost inside/
    seems we just lost in pride.
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    Post by Verse2 on Mon Oct 05, 2009 1:07 pm

    wowwwwwww...both of y'all killed dat

    She wanted the cash, he craved the glory
    She got the bills, he painted his story
    She cheated to make the dollars, he inflated the plot
    She was rich in the end, and fame was what he got
    They both shared in the crippling aftermath of greed
    To have that something, that desire that you always need
    The warnings of materialism, they did not heed
    From their own thirst for things, they could not be freed
    Nowadays prestige is the fruit of all bribery
    Cold shoulders for closed doors, money the priority
    Fallen agreements, broken up like mysteries of a diary
    On the table, unstopped, like the thug in the robbery
    But greed has no color, no gender, no race
    It applies to all who wish to have that taste
    The flavor of gain and lack of waste


    dat was really good...can't even front....i liked dat....very nice...lol

    times like this. hard to find inspiration/
    tiring to fill so many job application/
    people say you got no dedication/
    and that life aint a big vacation/
    they wrong, live ya life with no hesitation/
    have no explanation, f**** expectation


    nobody is financially secure/
    not now, they never were/
    because whose to be sure/
    in a gov't that tries to assure/
    promises they cant even keep/
    who awake when the gov't asleep?/
    these problems are deep/
    nothin we can just sweep/
    worst thing there is, insurance/
    cant buy an emotion, specially not assurance


    im listening, but still lost inside/
    seems we just lost in pride.


    those lines had me....i was like ***cheaaaa***
    lol
    had my head rolling wit da waves of y'all flow...ver...very well written...i like 2 read pieces with emotion and depth 2 em


    very nice...got stuff 2 do...or i would follow up...but i will later
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    Post by Verse2 on Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:21 am

    oh yea...i had said i was gonna follow up...let me do dat while i'm think~n bout it...lol


    For some money is a means 2 elevation /
    for others itz jus bothersome and bringz on seperation /
    bring on education /
    2 hold money breathe n maturity /
    otherwise greed: reads and fillz out da registration /
    yea / it reads "n god we trust" /
    but Adam and Eve didn't need it...so yo god what up? /
    i mean da lies amusing / how does god conclude it /
    prolly watch~n da bank robbery like dese guys are stupid /

    awww mannn

    money green like da grass is /
    made to burn like da trees and da acids /
    but what does it mean dat da prez even backs dis /
    dey agree wit da greed and da other petty madness /

    dat urge to take by any means necc /
    da green should b a mirror cuz da evil reflects /
    da devil lingers n da strands and streaks~i~bet /
    and itz passed hand 2 hand so dat people connect /

    success can change u /
    sex is da same too /
    we can talk alc and drugz /
    all of dat it pretains to /

    guess it all boils down 2 da theme /
    trait dats hard 2 believe /
    if we could only disregard da greed /


    got bored n da midst...my bad....night of da living dead was on....lmao
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    Post by Shook Ones Back On Up on Sat Oct 24, 2009 9:10 pm

    i get an itch for the greed/
    the bloodshot eyes of the presidents make me levitate 2 what i need/
    help me verse 2 I'm in a emergency call me a paramedic/
    the disease is the rebirth of the crack epidemic/
    life styles of the rich and famous/
    scratch that life styles of the greed and shameless/
    hustling ways like my role model iceberg slim/
    every robbers got a sense of humor to them/
    I'm tired of this tired of being broke/
    wanna rob the houses of the greedy rich folks/
    with my mask on i feel like Jim Carrey/
    but the money and greed still knows my identity/
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    Post by Beastlyalex on Wed Oct 28, 2009 10:10 pm

    The idea behind greed is like a little seed,
    one day itll grow like a baby you need to feed/
    More money more drama,
    it's like an unbreakable saga.

    You're to concerned with what you got,
    that you don't realize what you have,
    you just rant and tell me the last thing that you bought,
    almost like this is another salve.
    It's sad how this tree will grow,
    but its uncontrollable like the seas chill flow.

    Then in the end all you have is that paper,
    and I'm loving what is real not fake.
    You stuck with a hole you wish you had h'er,
    its not what you love but who you love Christ's sake.



    (thought id give it a try ! )

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