I want some feedback. Don't usually write diss type of rap but I wanted to try something new.
ill clown you like we at a carnival/you the type to push when it say pull/
you clearly have nothin going/ try to be quick n fail like boat rowing/
ill move ya ass, no free towing/ you type invisible, me im glowing/
you ignorant, me im knowing/didnt need to mention my lyrics be showing/
got a bald spot cover it up like clothing/ now you stay at home loathing/
small and scared i call you chicken little/you curious, taste the rainbow like a skittle/
you as real as pams tits/ ill drop ya now, dont need two hits/
i must admit, you can barely spit/ you should quit, you never gonna make it/
now you cryin, blame it on an onion/ have you chopped up, call paul bunyan/
in a race you slow, start runnin/ my fast pace like where you been/
see me i always win/ n you behind like "wait a min"
ill clown you like we at a carnival/you the type to push when it say pull/
you clearly have nothin going/ try to be quick n fail like boat rowing/
ill move ya ass, no free towing/ you type invisible, me im glowing/
you ignorant, me im knowing/didnt need to mention my lyrics be showing/
got a bald spot cover it up like clothing/ now you stay at home loathing/
small and scared i call you chicken little/you curious, taste the rainbow like a skittle/
you as real as pams tits/ ill drop ya now, dont need two hits/
i must admit, you can barely spit/ you should quit, you never gonna make it/
now you cryin, blame it on an onion/ have you chopped up, call paul bunyan/
in a race you slow, start runnin/ my fast pace like where you been/
see me i always win/ n you behind like "wait a min"