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    Post by madlyricaal on Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:53 pm

    I want some feedback. Don't usually write diss type of rap but I wanted to try something new.


    ill clown you like we at a carnival/you the type to push when it say pull/
    you clearly have nothin going/ try to be quick n fail like boat rowing/
    ill move ya ass, no free towing/ you type invisible, me im glowing/
    you ignorant, me im knowing/didnt need to mention my lyrics be showing/
    got a bald spot cover it up like clothing/ now you stay at home loathing/
    small and scared i call you chicken little/you curious, taste the rainbow like a skittle/
    you as real as pams tits/ ill drop ya now, dont need two hits/
    i must admit, you can barely spit/ you should quit, you never gonna make it/
    now you cryin, blame it on an onion/ have you chopped up, call paul bunyan/
    in a race you slow, start runnin/ my fast pace like where you been/
    see me i always win/ n you behind like "wait a min"

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    Post by The Devils Requiem on Tue Jul 21, 2009 10:01 pm

    Ya lyrics is showin nothin when it comes to the Devil
    You in deep shit now betta grab yaself a shovel
    Ya six feet from my level
    I'm underground but shinin like a fuckin diamond bezel
    I red a line thats talkin about some fuckin Paul Bunyan
    but on the rhymes ya blind, ain't neva saw nothin
    I'm raw bustin
    Bring somethin like the satanic evil
    Pop medication strictly for the psychopathic people
    This is just the first verse, fuck a tragic sequel
    Cause when this killas on on the mic there ain't no fuckin equal
    So do the math and catch the bloodbath from the murder
    Cause is lyrical homicide and I'm here to serve ya
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    Post by madlyricaal on Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:34 am

    aight so u think u hardcore with ya rap
    all u doing, sittin online talkin crap
    dont needa flaunt my business, not into that
    i need not be flashy wit my gat, clitt clatt
    but ill get on ya level, sink a bit
    yur rap level underground, u aint shit
    i aint even writin to diss you
    im here quick to dismiss you
    claim u oh so raw
    ill show u somethin u neva seen before
    cuz i tend to body more
    one click and u layin on the floor
    your rhymes contradict wit no sense
    no offense in ur rhymes, u not intense
    ill leave ya ass in suspense on tha ground
    have ya head spinin round and round
    so tell me to do the math again
    im holdin up 5 fingerz u say ten
    where is your brain?
    ya lyrics is plain
    u wrong to ever try nd battle
    cuz my words slaughter yours like cattle
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    Post by SpitItReal27 on Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:25 pm

    Haha, this jazz right here is hilarious
    Two dudes tryin to claim they so nefarious
    But are you serious?
    Delirious?
    Or is this your fake reality, all just precarious?

    On the real, I'm not here to put down
    No need to spit verse if we talkin about carnival, yea, found the clown
    This rant from y'all two is a battle waitin to happen
    But seems like two followers, neither can be a captain
    The lines you've produced are mediocre at best
    I'm not claimin superiority, but I hope there's more to your style and that was just a test
    One, two, on the mike
    Checkin, one, two, three
    The aforementioned lines y'all dropped
    Make me wonder who you think you could be

    But again, let me say that there were some lines with flavor
    But at the end of the day, nothin left to truly savor
    Maybe later, when you're less faker
    You can spit propoerly and be greater...

    peace --
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    Post by madlyricaal on Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:41 am

    what type a rapper don't understand the punchline flow
    whoa, line to line the punches comin out, damn u slow?
    got much more to talk about than gangster shit
    shit i can spit so much, my tongue never quit
    seems you quick to criticize my words
    well ima wake u up early like birds
    wheres your flow, seem like u don't kno where to go
    got some lines? to me ur level below
    ill give advice to bestow, & u gotta agree
    keep on writin to diss me, its hard to dissmiss me
    i tend to piss these lame rappers off
    i often make em sick so they cough
    sayin i got lines wit flavor, yours seem bland
    my words go deeper than any man can understand
    shit and you tryna get on the mic stand?
    i wouldn't even play you on demand.
    you used some big words, kudos to you
    seems your comprehension misconstrue
    readin my raps like a library book overdue
    type to jam out to some blink 182
    im foolin, they my dudes right there
    but girl you a square, you dont compare
    so stay in ya box, living unaware
    im in touch with reality
    your rhymes weak with neutrality.
    im gonna end it right here
    spit back or disappear.
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    Post by syn11237 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 12:25 pm

    word you two the type to tango and mingle
    spit it real the type to get happy off writin some bad shit like old niggas winnin bingo
    got you shaken like a loop of keys that jingle
    and why spit it real cant stop she criticize
    and gossip like bitches do about guys
    her shit is whack no she dont go big
    why get a pack of cigs
    when i can get a carton
    and she could keep runnin just like the departed
    why you puttin your two sense in you aint even start this
    i break all rules hit u up in both of your noses
    ill do you like the red sea and part you in half like moses
    make spit it real wet like lawns gettin watered by hoses
    my rymes like drugs you know they the dopest
    you like a crackhead your future in rap is hopeless
    now i dont mean to intrude
    but spit it real try to beat around the bush
    you say you dont mean to disrespect but you always come rude
    betta watch what you eat cuz ill put rat poison in your food
    spit it real spit some white drool
    but nobody wants her thats why she got it from a blind dude
    her shit cant go harder than mine do
    chew you up like some tofoo
    spit you out like flem in my chest
    ill hang all around u like a wedding dress
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    Post by madlyricaal on Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:17 pm

    im not even feelin your flow at all
    look but cant touch like shit in the mall
    you try shit on & just window shop
    wen they hear my flow, they heads bop
    cuz i tend to drop the hottest rhymes
    you tend you annoy ears like wind chimes
    how you gonna rap about a cigarette?
    shit aint cool and you not a threat
    me, im ridin in my vette. you need light?
    ill spark you up, im so hot; fire ignite
    its true im polite, but if you cross the line
    no warning sign, end up wit a broken spine
    your metaphors and similes are trash
    garbage; like a truck driver tryna see 90 on the dash
    bounce on the peddle you quick, fast; n CRASH
    its true im single and like to chill & mingle
    when it comes to your lines, im not feelin a single
    my comebacks make you sick like getting taxed
    and yours dont phase me, im quite relaxed
    im doin ninety and this road is rather windy
    for 1 second u in front now you behind me
    kinda how it is in life, u behind; im in front
    probably sparkin a blunt, i play u like a stunt
    me, i spit the truth and never do i front
    you rat; spit saliva like a rabied runt
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    Post by syn11237 on Tue Aug 04, 2009 12:07 am

    yo i thought we could be be cool
    now im bout to eat u up like greesy food
    you dont flow you shit is generic
    you hide behind walls like soldiers do in barics
    turn you into a vegetable you could you a carrot
    you not independent i feed you shit like fuckin ferrots
    so you think smokin is gross
    nigga i be on some shit i boast
    ill have u fuckin burnt like toast
    you just a pig bitch ill have you served like roast
    and you think you got talents
    you challenged
    ill throw you off farther than track players throwin javlins
    got the gold star niggas could call it medalions
    im a super hero bustin you niggas they call me valient
    ima vigilanty i tyy to make piece
    shit aint gone be quiet i take you off the streets
    bitch you like a bad heart rythm you off beat
    and killin you is fun bitch halloween trick or treat
    you aint got shit to say
    i smoke ciggarettes like every day
    you just a lame chick
    with the same shit
    aint got no flow
    and you wonder why you dont roll in dinero
    i got you scared though
    like cancer patients dyin from infected cells in their blood marrow
    i could get you running like crows and scare crows
    i got guns like drunk pirates we hold barrels
    we got conflict like like americans an indians shootin arrows
    you cant say nothin you got zero
    i told you girl you in a mans world
    i dont mean to breach piece
    but you gave me heat b
    im gonna respond thats just me b
    i play with clits
    ike girls play with dicks
    yours is next
    you hold nines
    i hold techs
    we could go like the titanic and be a wreck
    or i could do you like white supremist
    and snap your neck
    take off the mask
    you let niggas control like the past is yet
    got you frontin like you aint aroused from this verse you wet
    and you front like you dont like the last dude you met
    i be the realist you cant catch me i go
    like a psychic bitch i know you starin at me like im your favorite tv show
    got you bendin to lick my ass bitch are you a hoe
    i got money ima baker i got dough
    and my dick is like kids in puberty btich i grow
    yo niggas is dissapearin man i call them ghosts
    skiit on your face have you sticky like posted notes
    maybe even worse like paint rolls
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    Post by madlyricaal on Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:51 pm

    im laughin at you and all that gibberish above
    find u at a garage sale; garbage to get rid of
    how can u write so much but say so little?
    damn, never knew shit could be so brittle.
    you spit 1 too many worthless lines
    leave u bottled up in red, call u Heinz
    like gravity cuz when u up; u quick to fall
    plus u get no booty; na. nothin at all
    u dont got meat so how u gonna get buns?
    frontin like i got so many train to runs
    but face it little man, you not an engineer
    you never gonna have a career; like a cashier
    and why you gettin at me for bein female?
    cuz i explain u lame and dont forget a detail?
    im quite a saleswoman; but to me u not retail
    cuz no one wants to hear your shit; you fail
    you like a whale; big for no reason
    or a benchboy; comin back each season
    you spittin nothin but simplicity
    while i brighten shit up like electricity
    i spit rebellious; my style is eccentricity
    you are quite generic without elasticity
    you a bull [shiter] to me; so you wear red
    u insecure, bulls hate red; quit while u ahead
    and stop frontin like you got a big dick
    u naked thinkin you a flat chested chick
    cuz nothin even visible down there
    would feel bad, but i really dont care
    i could get a microscope to measure it
    but im clean;u dirty; quick to transmit
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    Post by syn11237 on Thu Aug 06, 2009 12:28 pm

    man ill destroy you easy you aint no empire
    im like a flamethrower i just spit fire
    through these internet wires
    you should have some respect for a knight adresss man with sire
    man this battle over quick i transport lyrics like truck drivers
    you aint a boss
    like car emission u dirty like exhaust
    you could put a flame in my mouth ill burn you like hot sauce
    or cement you in ice like subzero ill have you like ice frost
    youre verses suck someone get her some white off
    and maybe you need some to time to adjust
    let me fix you up
    ima mechanic you got some broken ruts
    im a doctor you got synis in your chest ill shut you up
    so you wont end up chokin up
    man you got some old gums
    your style older than hulk hogan
    your arsenal small compared to what im holdin
    your weed is dry compared to the stickiness that im rollin
    im like a mummy ima beast once im awokin
    and it relle pisses me off with your words that you plugged in your verse
    you needa get baptized come up with some new shit once you emerse
    find a new hobby like going to church
    got you hangin from cliffs like an eagle perch
    im like a gun once you trigger me i just burst
    your helpless like old ladys gettin snatched for they purse
    you should rethink your strategy try and become a nurse
    you dry as fuck dehydrating from thirst
    ill do you like lunch bitch you gone get served
    your ryhmes are confusing man im perturbed
    set your eyes straight bad eyesight vision must be blurred
    you like a kid you easily get lurred
    and i just threw up on this chick
    like a bolemic bitch
    that eats shit
    and likes to purge
    man im full of words like an energy surge
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    Post by madlyricaal on Fri Aug 07, 2009 10:05 pm

    to spit back at me is quite daring
    risky; like the cheap shirt your wearing
    you claim my flow is old news
    well; rappers like u always lose
    cuz you spit shit without meaning
    like a llama sayin the zoos demeaning
    if you a mechanic, you not a trusty
    cuz your rides lookin rather rusty
    sort of like your appearance, crusty
    thats why your tighty whities so dusty
    aint nobody wanna touch thee
    only you, when u go pee
    my weed so sticky and stinky
    shit'll have you muchin on a twinkie
    your shit got me falling asleep
    so why smoke it, Zalepons cheap
    probably didn't know thats a sleeping pill
    your brains dry, mine just overfill
    how you goin to talk about women like that
    you most likely gay; afraid of pussy cat
    you addicted to anal like a dog
    love to take it in the ass by a little log
    its not my fault you don't comprehend
    that its my job to put this battle to an end
    cause i dont like to pick on the little guy
    aint no competition, you easy as pie
    i tell the truth and never do i lie
    i can spit forever, even after i die
    cuz my lyrics are impacting
    and yours are just distracting
    you right, im not clean im a dirty ass bitch
    i spit offensive & true; its my niche
    you something like a liar and a snitch
    you lost; outta control so you twitch
    now go ahead and bitch; start to bark
    while you take the dick in territory you mark
    and if you daring enough to write back
    practice more cuz your shits wack
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    Post by Constellations1 on Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:51 am

    lol i can beat both u guys without trying this is a joke lol ur all basic that all it is nothing mroe check this out you bout to fuck with a 7 year vet


    Fuck Ability I come to the battle slashing him to parts like
    Co-Nan
    So its like constellation making a trend make a mends
    I destroy my enemy when I make them friends
    So I need yall to keep holding the craze
    Cause
    Temper is a weapon that we hold by the blade.

    Ill make a knot with a plot and let you hang yourself with this noose
    Because
    Faith is the acceptance that we can grasp the reality of truth
    So my words gives his body stimulation
    War is not a life it is a situation
    So he mite be faster than my pace
    But
    This coward threatens when he is safe
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    Post by Verse2 on Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:55 am

    4 da shit talk~n u jus did...dat wasn't sumth~n 2 b proud about...sorry 2 say...lol
    7 year vet...lol...put n another 7 den come holla at niggas...lol

    i was expect~n some SHIT!!!

    and what i saw was Arrow shit ....


    but keep trynn homie...we here 2 get better...and everybody n here keep up da good work...


    ***Cheaa***

    love 2 read other peoples drops....stay up and keep doin ya thing
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    Post by Verse2 on Thu Sep 10, 2009 1:30 pm

    hahahaha


    i jus realized everybody more or less got atchu...and nobody really gave u any crit...
    so let me b da offical 1st...


    it was aiiight...noth~n like whoaaaa...naa mean...there's potential there...but alot of ya lines were kinda basic...not hate~n or crack~n or nuff like dat....cuz dats my problem...can't seem 2 get over dat generic hump...dis prolly is old...so u prolly better den u were b4...

    but on dis piece i feel like u did alot of speed bag hits...and not setting up 4 da next line....no build ups...jus quick taps...if dat makes any sense...lol...i mean i understand u were trying a diff flow...but it seemed like u jus threw it 2gether real quick...but as i said b4...there is potential there....keep at it


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